Marvel Iron Age: X-men, the April incident

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#1  Edited By TheCannon

To be rewritten to fit withing the continuity.

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#2  Edited By TheWholeDamnShow

Short and sweet huh? Nice job! Hope you include more dialogue next time.

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I will.

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#4  Edited By joshmightbe

There are a few minor continuity issues here

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#5  Edited By PrinceIMC

I'm a bit concerned, it doesn't really fit in with the other April Incident stuff. In @Time_Phantom's chapter it has the X-Men preparing for the invasion of the school and evacuating the students.

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@TheCannon: I think you missed a few bits of continuity. I'd edit it if I were you...

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#9  Edited By TheCannon

@primepower53 said:

@TheCannon: I think you missed a few bits of continuity. I'd edit it if I were you...

I know. I'm going to have someone rewrite it.