#1 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

INT. AIM HIDEOUT

Spider Man 2099 (Miguel O'Hara) swings above A.I.M soldiers. His acrobatics are the only thing that allows him to escape their fire. Finally he lands. He throws a few kicks and punches, taking out some of them. His talons unsheath, and he slashes a few of them. From behind, one of them draws a plasma pistol.

A.I.M SOLIDER

KILL HIM!

SPIDER MAN 2099 (NARRATING)

My name is Miguel O'Hara...I'm the Spider Man of the year 2099.

Spider Man 2099 dodges the blast, webbing the gun and kicking his foe. He then lands in a pose.

SPIDER MAN 2099 (NARRATING)

Right now, I'm fighting these people called A.I.M (Advanced Idea Mechanics) Who were inspired by their "Messiah" Dugan. They're crazy, and I'm here to stop them.

Spider Man throws a kick and a few punches. He starts brawling with a few of the better fighters, but ends up taking them down.

SPIDER MAN 2099 (NARRATING)

The fight brings back old memories...how I got my powers.

The scene shifts to

INT. TYRELL CORPORATIONS-YEAR EARLIER

An advanced machine can be seen as the camera pans down. A man inside a glass box stands inside.

SPIDER MAN 2099 (NARRATING)

I worked for a man named Tyrell. Corrupt businessman. Everyone knew it. I worked in the genetic manipulation lab.

The camera shifts over to Miguel O'Hara and his boss watching in horror as the man deteriorates. (It can be seen by the man's shadow on the wall.

SPIDER MAN 2099 (NARRATING)

Tyrell forced me to work on my spider genetics before it was ready. It wound up killing the man. I wanted to quit.

FADE TO

INT. MIGUEL'S APARTMENT

Show Miguel snorting an unknown substance.

SPIDER MAN 2O99 (NARRATING)

Until Tyrell got me hooked on a drug only he sold legally...there was only one way out...and I knew I might die.

SHIFT TO

INT. TYRELL CORPORATIONS

Miguel sneaks into his lab in the dead of night, and turns on the genetic manipulator. The employees come rushing in wielding guns as he starts banging on the glass. The lights dim down, and he steps out with fangs and talons.

SPIDER MAN 2099 (NARRATING)

I felt like I was dying...I didn't know what to do...but when I emerged...I had the powers of my idol, SPIDER MAN, and then some! I became the Spider Man of this era. Spider Man 2099.

quick cut to

INT. A.I.M HIDEOUT

Spider Man swings a few punches, knocking out what little A.I.M soldiers are left.

SPIDER MAN 2O99

Anybody feel like giving up? Cut me some slack, I've beaten almost all you guys! Anyone feel like surrendering? Anybody at all?

An A.I.M soldier aims a large bazooka like gun at Miguel, while his back is turned. He's swinging into other soldier.

SPIDER MAN 2099

Come on, don't be shy, just (hit by blast) AUUUUUGH!

SPIDER MAN 2O99 (NARRATING)

Body...feels like it's on fire...feel like.

EXT. NEW YORK

Close up of Spider Man 2099 awakening in an alley. He walks over to the end and sees he in the present day. He checks a newspaper, reading "DUGAN DECLARES WAR ON METAHUMANS"

SPIDER MAN 2099

Oh, ****, what just happened?

Miguel looks around.

SPIDER MAN 2099

According to the date...the Fall of H.A.M.M.E.R will be happening soon...and the history lessons say there were two Spider Men involved. (smiles) Oh, ****, it's hero time!

#2 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

bump

#3 Posted by batkevin74 (10603 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice work, you do write a lot of varied things in rapid succession.

#4 Posted by BlackArmor (6137 posts) - - Show Bio

Cool good read

#5 Posted by The Poet (8335 posts) - - Show Bio

interesting

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#6 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 said:

Nice work, you do write a lot of varied things in rapid succession.

yes. I'm addicted to writing.

@BlackArmor said:

Cool good read

thanks!@The Poet said:

interesting

glad you like it!

#7 Posted by moviegeek17 (1474 posts) - - Show Bio

fun read man. Send me the next link whenever it comes out.

#8 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

@moviegeek17 said:

fun read man. Send me the next link whenever it comes out.

Chapter Two

Chapter Three

I'll TRY MY BEST to wait to post the finale to the first arc, but I can't make any promises.

@The Poet: @BlackArmor: @batkevin74:

#9 Posted by CapFanboy (4887 posts) - - Show Bio

@primepower53:

@moviegeek17 said:

fun read man.

#10 Posted by TheCannon (18317 posts) - - Show Bio

I have said it on two of your work and I'll say it here, fantastic. Your work with Spider-man 2099 is just amazing, spectacular, sensational, unlimited. Sorry, I just went into stuff that described Spidey in his previous titles.

#11 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon: thanks!

#12 Posted by TheCannon (18317 posts) - - Show Bio

Your welcome. I always like telling people I like their work. I would of if I ever met Herman Melville or Bram Stoker. I'm not saying this will go down with the likes of Moby Dick and Dracula, but it is much better than the Spider-man 2099 Marvel put out. If this was an actual comic book, I would buy every issue.

#13 Edited by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice.

#14 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

@GR2Blackout said:

Nice.

thank you very much!