Marvel: Genesis -- Sentry Ch. 3

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Disclaimer: All Sentry and sentry related characters created by any one except me is the sole property of marvel/whoever. I'm not a lawyer.

Last, last time: Our hero finds himself in the middle of New York City after a puzzling bout with a hatted stranger. Who can teleport. So can his house....apparently. You know, at some point someone just has to scream "bad writing".

Last time: After being transported to New York City, Bob fights a creepy grey creature thing named Gor'ol. Well, we say fight. A more accurate description would be fall through some kind of sequence. At the end of the fight, mysterious yellow balls flew from the sky, surrounding the Grey creepoid.

Bob pushed himself out of his makeshift bed of concrete (also known as a dent in a building) and proceeded to fall about 5 stories, after regaining his bearings and uttering something about memory foam he started the slow descent down towards the ground. Slow because he had no idea where the grey thing he was fighting had gone. Slow because he was sure there were thousands of glow orbs (glorbs?) in the sky. Although, what could he be sure of? The man was probably concussed, if heroes get concussions, that is. Shaking his head (because that definitely helps with brain trauma) and coughing loudly (because supervillains behave exactly like toddlers) Bob stared expectantly at the ground, resting his hands on his hips for added emphasis.

Nothing came. At first, anyway. The harder Bob stared at the ground, the more blurred his surroundings became. Soon enough, the entire space around him resembled something not even LSD would take you to. As the colours around him separated, moved and joined other colours, Robert found himself in a familiar place again, the street he called home, only still trapped in space. The frozen people were gone, as were their houses. Instead, the space-de-sac had become a long stretch of tarmac, grass and meaningless fences, with only Robert's house the only non squirrel sized dwelling left. He was forced to shield his eyes as thousands of familiar yellow orbs popped up around the space-de-sac, forming a perimeter, one that Bob couldn't break using his newly discovered powers. In 1000th of a second the orbs flew far away, until they were only as big as a grain of sand. Bob stepped back as his brain slowly recovered the connect the dots skill he had learnt in school, and his jaw hung wide as a face emerged from the thousands of twinkling yellow stars.

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Eeek! I meant to comment on this last night, I thought I had *showers you with presents and pleads for forgiveness*

Damn you really are such a tease with these shorter chapters! I wouldn't say it's a problem though, so far you're writing them often enough that the impatience on this side isn't too bad ;) Mostly I'm enjoying how different this is, not so much from your other writing - although it definitely is - more in general? It has a strangeness to it, and a nice amount of humour too (still giggling at glorbs, that struck me as funnier than it should have).

Weird, but I like it a lot :)

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@bumpyboo said:

Eeek! I meant to comment on this last night, I thought I had *showers you with presents and pleads for forgiveness*

Damn you really are such a tease with these shorter chapters! I wouldn't say it's a problem though, so far you're writing them often enough that the impatience on this side isn't too bad ;) Mostly I'm enjoying how different this is, not so much from your other writing - although it definitely is - more in general? It has a strangeness to it, and a nice amount of humour too (still giggling at glorbs, that struck me as funnier than it should have).

Weird, but I like it a lot :)

Yeah, well you didn't! DON'T BRING YOUR MAKE UP PRESENTS HERE, I DON'T WANT THE--Is that a sentry drawing with short hair I see?

I tease. It's what I do, and boy do I love it. Glorbs is genius, don't deny it.

So do I. These coincidences are becoming far too un-coincidency.

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@capfanboy: I was sleepy though! And maybe....it might be a nearly ready short haired Sentry. STOP LOOKING IT'S NOT DONE YET! >_>

I can't even - *look of absolute disdain*

Indeed. You could be forgiven for thinking they aren't actually coincidency at all O___O

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy: I was sleepy though! And maybe....it might be a nearly ready short haired Sentry. STOP LOOKING IT'S NOT DONE YET! >_>

I can't even - *look of absolute disdain*

Indeed. You could be forgiven for thinking they aren't actually coincidency at all O___O

THEN HURRY UP DAMMIT

You love the teasing. Don't lie.

*loud gasp*

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THEN HURRY UP DAMMIT

You love the teasing. Don't lie.

*loud gasp*

I'M GOING AS FAST AS I CAN!

I do. I also like being punched in the face -_-

Riiiiight? :D

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@bumpyboo said:

I'M GOING AS FAST AS I CAN!

I do. I also like being punched in the face -_-

Riiiiight? :D

FASTER! FASTER I SAY!

............What.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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FASTER! FASTER I SAY!

............What.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I'M! DOING! IT! GOOOOOOOOO-DUH! *slams doors*

Never mind >_>

Calm down dammit! It's just the fabric of reality coming unraveled before your very eyes! What, you never seen that before? O_o

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

FASTER! FASTER I SAY!

............What.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I'M! DOING! IT! GOOOOOOOOO-DUH! *slams doors*

Never mind >_>

Calm down dammit! It's just the fabric of reality coming unraveled before your very eyes! What, you never seen that before? O_o

STOP SLAMMING MY DOORS MISSY.

Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight.

Oh. I've done that before anyway.

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STOP SLAMMING MY DOORS MISSY.

Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight.

Oh. I've done that before anyway.

THEY AREN'T JUST YOURS! I'M SLAMMING MY HALF OF THE DOORS

Mhmmmmmmm. Never mind.

See? Ain't nothing to freak out about! :)

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

STOP SLAMMING MY DOORS MISSY.

Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight.

Oh. I've done that before anyway.

THEY AREN'T JUST YOURS! I'M SLAMMING MY HALF OF THE DOORS

Mhmmmmmmm. Never mind.

See? Ain't nothing to freak out about! :)

THEY'RE ALL MINE

I want to know now.

I am God. There was never anything. I just found it fun.

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THEY'RE ALL MINE

I want to know now.

I am God. There was never anything. I just found it fun.

NO! THESE ONES ARE MINE *demonstrative slamming*

That's a shame.

Oh please. You were scared.

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

THEY'RE ALL MINE

I want to know now.

I am God. There was never anything. I just found it fun.

NO! THESE ONES ARE MINE *demonstrative slamming*

That's a shame.

Oh please. You were scared.

NO THEY AREN'T. IT'S MY HOUSE WOMAN. SO MY DOORS.

Loading Video...

No I wasn't SHUT UP

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NO THEY AREN'T. IT'S MY HOUSE WOMAN. SO MY DOORS.

Loading Video...

No I wasn't SHUT UP

OH IT'S YOUR HOUSE? OH WELL, THEN I GUESS I BETTER GET OUT OF YOURKITCHEN AND STOP COOKING YOUR FOOD...

Fats makes everything better ^__^

YES YOU WERE STOP LYING

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Wait is Bobin space? Also whatever can check Sentry is definitely something you don't want on Earth

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@bumpyboo said:

OH IT'S YOUR HOUSE? OH WELL, THEN I GUESS I BETTER GET OUT OF YOURKITCHEN AND STOP COOKING YOUR FOOD...

Fats makes everything better ^__^

YES YOU WERE STOP LYING

YOU PROBABLY SHOULD.

So does cookies. Man....I want some cookies.

I WASN'T LYING SHUT UP

Wait is Bobin space? Also whatever can check Sentry is definitely something you don't want on Earth

He thinks he is. His house (or a near exact replica) and his street is somewhere surrounded by pitch black, and Bob finds himself transported back there quite often.

You'll come to learn more about Gor'ol in the next chapter.....whenever I get around to writing it.

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YOU PROBABLY SHOULD.

So does cookies. Man....I want some cookies.

I WASN'T LYING SHUT UP

THEN I WILL

Now that's terrible. If only you knew someone who loved you and baking....>_>

LIAR LIAR PANTS ON FIIIIIIIIII-YAH!

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@bumpyboo said:
@capfanboy said:

YOU PROBABLY SHOULD.

So does cookies. Man....I want some cookies.

I WASN'T LYING SHUT UP

THEN I WILL

Now that's terrible. If only you knew someone who loved you and baking....>_>

LIAR LIAR PANTS ON FIIIIIIIIII-YAH!

GOOD

I do........Nathan Fillion.

SHUT UP, I DON'T HAVE GINGER CARPE-----Hello kids.

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@capfanboy: NO IT ISN'T

Oh well...*hides tears*...well I hope you'll be very happy together. That's great.

YOU DO NOW

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@capfanboy: NO IT ISN'T

Oh well...*hides tears*...well I hope you'll be very happy together. That's great.

YOU DO NOW

YES IT IS

Shut up and get inside. *offers umbrella*

WELL DAMMIT

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@capfanboy: Okay cool. I'm going to leave now, have a surplus of screaming teenagers at home, don't need to add you and @bumpyboo: to the cacophony

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YES IT IS

Shut up and get inside. *offers umbrella*

WELL DAMMIT

NO! NOT AT ALL!

You don't even really want me in there. You just don't want me to cause a scene.... :,(

YOU DID IT TO YOURSELF

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@capfanboy: Okay cool. I'm going to leave now, have a surplus of screaming teenagers at home, don't need to add you and @bumpyboo: to the cacophony

.....Now I feel bad.

@bumpyboo said:
@capfanboy said:

YES IT IS

Shut up and get inside. *offers umbrella*

WELL DAMMIT

NO! NOT AT ALL!

You don't even really want me in there. You just don't want me to cause a scene.... :,(

YOU DID IT TO YOURSELF

YES DAMMIT

You know me oh so well. Seriously though. I could use a tuna salad.

NO I DIDN'T SHUT UP

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@capfanboy: NO IT'S AWFUL.

Too well. And I'm not your maid! *calls taxi*

YES YOU DID

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@bumpyboo: IS IT THOUGH?!

*cancels taxi* Tuna salad dammit.

NO I DIDN'T

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@bumpyboo: IS IT THOUGH?!

*cancels taxi* Tuna salad dammit.

NO I DIDN'T

I CAN'T TELL ANYMORE

Oooh, you know I like it when you get all manly on me ;) *makes it*

WELL SOMEONE DID

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

@bumpyboo: IS IT THOUGH?!

*cancels taxi* Tuna salad dammit.

NO I DIDN'T

I CAN'T TELL ANYMORE

Oooh, you know I like it when you get all manly on me ;) *makes it*

WELL SOMEONE DID

NEITHER CAN I

...........Go home children. Go home.

WELL IT WASN'T ME

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NEITHER CAN I

...........Go home children. Go home.

WELL IT WASN'T ME

WELL THEN I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO TELL YOU

Hey I didn't even mean it in a naughty way! I totally did O_O

ARE YOU SURE? LOOKED LIKE YOU

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

THEN HURRY UP DAMMIT

You love the teasing. Don't lie.

*loud gasp*

I'M GOING AS FAST AS I CAN!

I do. I also like being punched in the face -_-

Riiiiight? :D

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

NEITHER CAN I

...........Go home children. Go home.

WELL IT WASN'T ME

WELL THEN I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO TELL YOU

Hey I didn't even mean it in a naughty way! I totally did O_O

ARE YOU SURE? LOOKED LIKE YOU

NEITHER DO I

You mean everything in that way

WELL IT WASN'T.

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@thursday_next: *nods* I know. I really know ;)

NEITHER DO I

You mean everything in that way

WELL IT WASN'T.

THIS IS TROUBLING

*gasps* I do NOT! You do!

IT WAS.

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@bumpyboo said:
@capfanboy said:

NEITHER DO I

You mean everything in that way

WELL IT WASN'T.

THIS IS TROUBLING

*gasps* I do NOT! You do!

IT WAS.

I SUPPOSE IT IS

YOU DO BUTTHOLE

NO IT WASN'T

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@capfanboy:

OH WELL

YOU. YOU DO.

I CAN PROVE IT

You know what.

I'm not doing this with you right now.

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