Marvel: Genesis -- Sentry Ch. 1

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Present day, suburbs of Chicago

Robert Reynolds woke up, robed up and journeyed downstairs for a cup of green tea which would eventually prove to be too strong. Following the dumping of said tea in the sink, and what was sure to be around 4 or 5 cups of coffee, he was just about ready to begin his day. Folding the newspaper he had been half reading and placing it on the kitchen table, he stood, removing dirt from his sleeve before rubbing it into the bright badge of "Eriksson's paper packaging service" attached to his shirt. Letting out a not quite contented sigh as his keys slotted into the lock, Robert pulled open the door to his quiet suburban home, and cursed, aloud. The reason for his cursing, much like his cursing itself, seemed to be lost on his neighbour's. Quite a lot seemed to be lost on his neighbour's, mainly because they were rooted to the spot with terrified expressions plastered over their faces. Robert had no time to concern himself with this. He was far more worried about the bigger question, which at a guess would be why his house and its immediate surroundings had suddenly teleported to space.

Following the frozen eyes of Cindy, the jailbait next door and Buster, a strict follower of the "every barbecue is a toilet" school of thought, Robert arrived at what was probably a decent sized clue. For to his immediate left was a faceless figure that definitely wasn't there a second ago. Bob jumped back, away from the hatted mystery. "Wh-who are you?" he stuttered. The figure leaned back against an imaginary pole, folding its arms, and Bob could swear that it was smiling. "Are you human?" Bob asked, "where are we?"

"I don't know." The figure replied. "Do you?" The question was followed by a peculiar bout of laughter which seemed to linger in the air around them, without actually being heard.

"What did you do with all of these people?" Bob asked, looking around at the rest of the nightmarish Madame Tussaud's collection.

"What didn't I do?" was the answer he was given. Though this time, the words were amplified and repeated what seemed like a thousand times--

"CONTROL IT BOB." This voice was new. Springing from what seemed like nowhere and everywhere all at once. Robert grabbed his head in agony, yanking it downwards in an attempt to lessen the pain. As he let go and stood upright once more, the street was different. The people weren't the same, the new ones were unrecognisable. He had not seen them before, not even in passing, he was sure about it, despite being unsure about how he could possibly be this sure about something. No, these faces were scared, but not in the same way and certainly not by the same thing. Bob turned back to his left, but was met with the end of the street and a vast nothingness beyond.

"Focus pork chop." Bob snapped back to his right, attempting to triangulate the second voice's position on the street, surprised that he knew how to do this. "No. Try harder. See everything else at the same time. All at once." Bob shut his eyes tightly, his head a swelling mess of sounds, smells and tastes he doesn't remember experiencing at home. The tighter he shut his eyes the more light flooded them, until everything aligned together and the sharp sound of a loud horn caught him off balance, in the middle of New York City.

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@capfanboy: Very strange opening and throughly intriguing

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Very interesting and a pretty funny issue. The descriptions made me laugh quite a bit.

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#4 BumpyBoo  Moderator

Could it be... *rubs eyes, looks again* IT IS! Aw, so happy you're doing this, dude. Been too long.

<----- Proud right now.

As for the piece itself, I love it. Very nice intro to the story, made me giggle in places but mostly made me incredibly curious about where you're going to be taking this. Great start, hubs. More! The people demand more! :)

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@batkevin74: Thank you, it will probably remain this strange throughout the entirety of its run

@tommythehitman: Thank you for reading

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@bumpyboo said:

Could it be... *rubs eyes, looks again* IT IS! Aw, so happy you're doing this, dude. Been too long.

<----- Proud right now.

As for the piece itself, I love it. Very nice intro to the story, made me giggle in places but mostly made me incredibly curious about where you're going to be taking this. Great start, hubs. More! The people demand more! :)

The people will take whatever I give them. For I am their God.

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#7 BumpyBoo  Moderator

The people will take whatever I give them. For I am their God.

I bet they will.... *much sniggering*

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

The people will take whatever I give them. For I am their God.

I bet they will.... *much sniggering*

...................Is this the point where I include something about 'willingly' or does that come later?....

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...................Is this the point where I include something about 'willingly' or does that come later?....

From a legal standpoint, it can't hurt to mention that early on.

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

...................Is this the point where I include something about 'willingly' or does that come later?....

From a legal standpoint, it can't hurt to mention that early on.

From a legal standpoint, I should already be in jail right now.

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From a legal standpoint, I should already be in jail right now.

And that's why cleanup is so important.

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

From a legal standpoint, I should already be in jail right now.

And that's why cleanup is so important.

*hangs head in shame* I still don't know how it got so out of hand....

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*hangs head in shame* I still don't know how it got so out of hand....

It wasn't your fault, man.

*tears up*

It wasn't your fault.

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

*hangs head in shame* I still don't know how it got so out of hand....

It wasn't your fault, man.

*tears up*

It wasn't your fault.

Then why do they keep blaming me for it?!

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Then why do they keep blaming me for it?!

Because they're jealous dude. And you know, because you did it.

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

Then why do they keep blaming me for it?!

Because they're jealous dude. And you know, because you did it.

I'm sorry hippo! I'M SO SORRY! Bump, tell him I'm sorry!

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I'm sorry hippo! I'M SO SORRY! Bump, tell him I'm sorry!

Shhhh. Come on now, champ. Hippo is gone, you know that. He's gone, and I can't tell him anything. But wherever he is...I'm sure he knows.

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

I'm sorry hippo! I'M SO SORRY! Bump, tell him I'm sorry!

Shhhh. Come on now, champ. Hippo is gone, you know that. He's gone, and I can't tell him anything. But wherever he is...I'm sure he knows.

*cries* Thank you--thank you.

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*cries* Thank you--thank you.

You're very welcome, sweetie. Chin up, yeah? I'm sure hippo wouldn't want you to be sad. You've suffered enough over this.

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

*cries* Thank you--thank you.

You're very welcome, sweetie. Chin up, yeah? I'm sure hippo wouldn't want you to be sad. You've suffered enough over this.

Hippo likes to torture me. Make him stop. Please...

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#21 BumpyBoo  Moderator

Hippo likes to torture me. Make him stop. Please...

We've been through this, he isn't really there. Do you want me to call the doctor again?

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

Hippo likes to torture me. Make him stop. Please...

We've been through this, he isn't really there. Do you want me to call the doctor again?

.....maybe.

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@bumpyboo: Though if it's @pyrogram in a coat again I'll kill someone

Agh you're still plagued by visions of Roger, huh? It's just a manifestation of your guilt. It's okay. We'll get you through this....

*calls psychiatrist*

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

@bumpyboo: Though if it's @pyrogram in a coat again I'll kill someone

Agh you're still plagued by visions of Roger, huh? It's just a manifestation of your guilt. It's okay. We'll get you through this....

*calls psychiatrist*

@The_Deathstroker is not a psychiatrist. He's insane as well.

STOP CALLING PEOPLE WE KNOW TO DO THINGS WITH MY BODY

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@capfanboy: I'm not, you're doing that! YOU'RE MESSED UP.

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@capfanboy: I'm not, you're doing that! YOU'RE MESSED UP.

THEN WHAT'S WITH ALL THE LEATHER?

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@capfanboy: I'm not, you're doing that! YOU'RE MESSED UP.

THEN WHAT'S WITH ALL THE LEATHER?

That's...that's um....SHUT UP YOU KNOW DAMN WELL WHAT THAT'S FOR *blushes*

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

THEN WHAT'S WITH ALL THE LEATHER?

That's...that's um....SHUT UP YOU KNOW DAMN WELL WHAT THAT'S FOR *blushes*

STOP SHOUTING AT ME FOR POINTING THINGS OUT

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STOP SHOUTING AT ME FOR POINTING THINGS OUT

THEN STOP POINTING OUT MY -

Ahem, sorry.

Then stop pointing out my private things and making out like you aren't familiar with them O_O

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THEN STOP POINTING OUT MY -

Ahem, sorry.

Then stop pointing out my private things and making out like you aren't familiar with them O_O

I'm...not familiar with them...

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#32 BumpyBoo  Moderator

I'm...not familiar with them...

*nods enthusiastically* Yeah me too, man. Me too.

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

I'm...not familiar with them...

*nods enthusiastically* Yeah me too, man. Me too.

So we're agreed. It was all Pyrogram?

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@bumpyboo said:

@capfanboy said:

I'm...not familiar with them...

*nods enthusiastically* Yeah me too, man. Me too.

So we're agreed. It was all Pyrogram?

That's how I remember it.

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@capfanboy:

*catches*

*drops so it sticks into ground*

*continues walking into the sunset*

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