Marvel Genesis: Orson Randall

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Marvel Genesis: Orson Randall (One Shot)   
 
Page One: 
 
Panel One: close up on Orson's face, focus on just his eyes. He's in the traditional Iron Fist garb.  
 
Cap: I've trained for this day.

 
Panel Two:Side view of him running.  
  
Panel Four: Show his eyes again, still running.
 
Cap: Ever since I was born, the members of K'un Lun have told me that I was destined to help the Iron Fist of this era in his greatest time of need.
 
Page Two:  
 
SPLASH! Show Orson jumping off the ledge of a building arrows are being shot at him, his legs are outstretched.  
 
Cap: Today's the day I go to Earth for the first time...I pass my test and prove my worthiness if I can make it alive.  
 
Page Three:  
 
Panel One: Show Orson plunging his hands into Shao Lou's heart.  
 
Cap: I have gained the Iron Fist.  
 
Panel Two: Show three swordsmen attacking him, he is in midair, above them all.  
 
Cap: I have proven myself time and time again in combat.   
 
Panel Three: Show him palm striking the swordsman in front of him while split kicking the other two.  
 
Cap: This is no different.  
 
Page Four:  
 
 
Panel One: Show lightly shaded bodies of Orson showing where he was (somersaulting across the ground to break his fall. Show him with regular ink standing in a ready stance.  
 
Panel Two: A man swing his sword at him.  
 
Cap: I can do this.  
 
Panel Three: small panel, show his clenched fist.  
 
Page Five:  
 
 
Panel One: Show him breaking the sword with the Iron Fist. 
 
Panel Two: Orson jump kicked the man, he falls to the ground.  
 
Panel Three: A man behind him  
 
Panel Four: Orson intercepting the man's punch.  
 
Orson: You call this a challenge?! 
 
Panel Five: Show him throwing the man into another man.  
 
Panel Six (small panel) Show someone's eyes.  
 
OP: No.....  
 
Page Six:  
 
Panel One: Show Orson in shock, "camera angle" is over the shoulder. he's staring at his master.  
 
Master: I call this a warm up.  
 
Orson: Master!!?  
 
Page Seven: 
 
 Panel One: This should be slightly less shaded. Show Orson meditating.  
 
Cap: Years ago.  
 
Panel Two: Orson's master (slightly younger) is walking up the steps into the room. Candles are all around him.  
 
Master: Orson, why are you meditating?  
 
Orson: To think of a way out of my destiny.  
 
Panel Three: Show his Master at his side.  
 
Master: You cannot escape your destiny, it is written for you.  
 
Orson: I do not want to help the Iron Fist.  
 
Master: You have no choice in the matter. Nobody does.  
 
panel four: show his Master walking away 
 
Orson: What should I do?   
 
Master: My advice....accept it.  
 
Page Eight: 
 
Panel One: Show Orson and his master fighting. They've been fighting the whole flashback. Their clothes are tattered, they're both broken and bloodies.  
 
Orson: You were right. I have accepted it. I will go to Earth!  
 
Panel Two: Show Orson kicking his master.  
 
Orson: But I will help the Iron Fist in a time of my own choosing!  
 
Panel Three: Show his master flipping and recovering.  
 
Master: You won't even get to Earth if you are unworthy.  
 
Panel Four: Show Orson's master's hand. He's holding throwing stars.  
 
Panel Five: Show the throwing stars, it looks like it's jumping off the page (i.e heading towards us.)  
 
Master:  Which is just what it looks like from here!  
 
Page Nine:  
  
Panel One: Show Orson being stabbed by multiple throwing stars, but he's dodged/broken most of them with the Iron Fist.  
 
Orson: YOU!  
 
Panel Two: Show Orson running  
 
Orson: WILL!  
 
Panel Three: Show Orson in mid kick  
 
Orson: NOT!  
 
Panel Four: Show Orson kicking his master.  
 
Orson: KILL!  
 
Page Ten:  
 
Panel One: Show Orson tackling his master  
 
Orson: MEEEEEEEEE!  
 
Panel Two: Show them plummeting to off the mountain to Earth.  
 
Panel Three: Same shot.  
 
Panel Four: Show Orson's master's body hitting the ground. (or cliffside.) side shot.  
 
Panel Five: Show an "above camera angle" or Orson clinging onto the edge of the mountain. His master can be seen dead on the cliffside.  
 
Orson: Hah.  
 
Panel Six: Show Orson pulling himself up.  
 
Panel Seven: Show Orson's eyes. Same shot at the panel in the beginning.  
 
Cap: I have done it. Now all that remains..... 
 
Cap: .....is this new life.

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this is a one shot.

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#3  Edited By The Impersonator
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#4  Edited By moviegeek17

good job man, i'll have to see what i can do with this down the road :)