#1 Posted by Final Arrow (24359 posts) - - Show Bio

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#2 Posted by Walkingstone (10723 posts) - - Show Bio

Good hook, very good. Last Arrow is definitely one of my favourite characters on here, I can't wait to read more about him

#3 Posted by Hagane Enna (7450 posts) - - Show Bio

Seconded here. I love the premise and the hint of humor.

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#5 Posted by Walkingstone (10723 posts) - - Show Bio

I can hear the battle... I can feel the blood pulsing in their veins as they're roused to war... This is brilliantly done.

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#7 Posted by The WeatherMan (3214 posts) - - Show Bio

This is actually nice. Good premise, good action, nice story. Keep going.

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#9 Posted by Walkingstone (10723 posts) - - Show Bio

Behind those black eyes.... Oooo, what is he thinking. I can't wait to find out. This is really good

#10 Posted by Zaraki Ichigo (6476 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome job man. Good story and good descriptive sentences. I like it.

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#12 Posted by The WeatherMan (3214 posts) - - Show Bio

Good use of religion and such to craft a story. It's pretty good, so keep going. Damn I wanted to start a continuous fanfic, but never got around to it.

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#15 Posted by Hagane Enna (7450 posts) - - Show Bio

OMG...this is way too cool. Keep going!

#16 Posted by Walkingstone (10723 posts) - - Show Bio

This is just amazing! I can't wait for the next bit

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#18 Posted by Walkingstone (10723 posts) - - Show Bio

Oh no, I hope he gets there in time!

#19 Posted by Hagane Enna (7450 posts) - - Show Bio

You know, I like that line: a rage of angels. That just sounds very classic.

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#21 Posted by Walkingstone (10723 posts) - - Show Bio

This is getting better and better

#22 Posted by Quintus_Knightfall (84526 posts) - - Show Bio

Thats sweet, I've always had thoughts of a massive battle between Lucifer's army and that of gods. Great story old friend.

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#23 Posted by Final Arrow (24359 posts) - - Show Bio

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#24 Posted by Walkingstone (10723 posts) - - Show Bio

You can almost hear the beating wings, the cries of battle.

#25 Posted by Hagane Enna (7450 posts) - - Show Bio

Go, Gabriel! That guy is one of my favorites. LOve the touch of the angel in the dog's mouth. Poor guy :(

#26 Posted by Quintus_Knightfall (84526 posts) - - Show Bio

Gabriel? As in the Arch-Angel. Sweet man, you should turn this into an rpg. The Hell Hound was a nice touch.

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#28 Posted by The WeatherMan (3214 posts) - - Show Bio

Kill Lucifer. Good fight scene.

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#29 Posted by Walkingstone (10723 posts) - - Show Bio

Better and better, really exciting. Can't wait to see the stand off between Arrow and Hades

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#31 Posted by Switch (4527 posts) - - Show Bio

Dude Loved it. nuff said

#32 Posted by Walkingstone (10723 posts) - - Show Bio

More to read! Gives me something good to do over lunchtime. Cheers, Arrow :D

#33 Posted by Walkingstone (10723 posts) - - Show Bio

Fantastic! Hades is so evil and I love the description of Aphrodite being evil because love has its cruelties.

#34 Posted by General Sylux (263 posts) - - Show Bio

I have but one word for this fan fic AWESOME!!!!

#35 Posted by Darkchild (40624 posts) - - Show Bio

all i can say s WOW

#36 Posted by The WeatherMan (3214 posts) - - Show Bio

This kicks ass. FIGHT!!!

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#38 Posted by Walkingstone (10723 posts) - - Show Bio

Better and better :D

#39 Posted by Spectrum (4468 posts) - - Show Bio

THATS SHIT

sorry i couldnt help but do it

realy good stuff Arrow

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#42 Posted by Lollypop2010 (23 posts) - - Show Bio

hallo

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#44 Posted by Final Arrow (24359 posts) - - Show Bio

WTF ARE YOU DOING THIS IS A FAN FIC