#1 Edited by UltimatePeyton (195 posts) - - Show Bio

Okay...So It is not exactly close to being finished. I just wanted to know the People of the comic book worlds opinions on the way that the story is going so far. Also, this is in script form, it will be changed to regular story form in the end.

JUSTICE LEAGUE: CYBORG SUPERMAN

Space. Closing in on the dark Planet Biot.

A large hall with dark metal pillars.

Cyborg Superman

The time has come my Manhunters. For years I have mourned and wallowed in self pity over the suicide of my wife Terri. As you know all my attempts to defeat the Justice League, particularly Superman have failed. I now realize the only way to truly destroy them is from the inside. If they all feel my pain and suffering they will be ripped apart. And I know just how to do it. (Sinister Smile) We shall leave the planet at once!

Meanwhile on Earth

Nighttime

Batman

(Stares at the entrance to the Gotham Memorial Park. The gate is melting from intense heat. The whole park is caught ablaze, Batman ignores the heat and walks right into the park)

Come on out Firefly. I know your here.

Firefly

(Flies onto a large fountain and sits at the top)

Isn't it beautiful? The way the flames dance atop the trees.

Batman

I knew a pyromaniac like yourself shouldn't have been let out of Blackgate. Apparently I was right.

Firefly

You don't understand. These flames give me visions. When I stare into them, I feel at peace. Now the path is clear. Time for me to fly. (Flies. into the sky using his jet pack)

Batman

I don't think so. (Fires his grappling gun at Firefly. The rope wraps around his legs. Batman is pulled up)

Firefly

(Takes out flame sword and cuts the grappling gun)

Lights out.

Batman

(While plummeting to the ground he throws a batarang that hits Firefly's jet pack. The Jet Pack malfunctions and Firefly slams into a light post)

Firefly

(Breaks his leg. Tries to crawl away.)

Batman

(Places one foot on Firefly's broken leg and then puts bat-cuffs on him)

I'm guessing you didn't foresee this in your vision.

Firefly

(Groans)

Ext. The Planet of Ysmault

Int. Atrocitus' Throne Room

Atrocitus

So tell me. Why in the hell is a follower of Sinestro on my planet?!

Sn'Hoj

(He is slammed on the ground by Skallox and Fury-6 who were gripping his arms) I did not know this was your planet! I swear!

Atrocitus

What do you take me for? An imbecile?! (He slashes Sn'Hoj causing him to bleed profusely)

Sn'Hoj

(He starts shaking in fear of death)

Atrocitus

How ironic, a being who wields a ring of fear is afraid of death.

Sn'Hoj

Please have mercy.

Atrocitus

Very well. (Grabs him by the neck then snaps it. Killing him instantly) There is your mercy. (He sits back down on his thrown and pets Dex-Starr)

Dex-Starr

Meow.

Zilius Zox

Master! A hoard of Manhunters are passing our planet.

Atrocitus

What?!! (Pukes blood in anger) Zilius, Skallox, Dex, Fury, Ratchet, Haggor, Nite and Bleez follow me.

(Atrocitus takes off and flies into outer space with his group of Lanterns following him)

Atrocitus

Manhunters! How dare you even pass by my planet! This is the......

Cyborg Superman

(Fires an energy beam from his hand at Atrocitus. Note: He is not notice due to the fact that he is in a huge crowd of Manhunters)

Atrocitus

(Slams into a nearby comet)

Bleez

Lord Atrocitus!

Atrocitus

(Shakes it off and gets up) Who has the audacity to show such disrespect!

Cyborg Superman

The Ruler of the Manhunter. Me! The Cyborg Superman!

Atrocitus

(Eyes glow with anger) Lanterns Attack!

(While the Red Lanterns and Manhunters are clashing. Atrocitus creates a giant fist with his ring and slams the fist into Cyborg Superman)

Cyborg Superman

(Is hit by the fist but is unshaken) Is that the best you've got?

Atrocitus

(He tackles Cyborg Superman causing him to slam into a comet)

Cyborg Superman

(Fires a thermal blast that hits Atrocitus right in the face)

Atrocitus

(While he rubs his face he is punched in the gut)

Bleez

(Interferes and shoots Cyborg Superman with a beam of light)

We are severely outnumbered and need to retreat immediately!

Atrocitus

Agreed. (Creates a microphone with his ring) Lanterns come!

(The Lanterns come to him. Most of them create a shield created to block the from the laser beams)

Atrocitus

(Creates a lasso, slings it at a Manhunter. The Manhunter is pulled to him)

Bleez

(Surrounds herself and the other Lanterns with light then teleports everyone back to Atrocitus' thrown room)

Manhunter

Master why did you let them go?

Cyborg Superman

They are not our targets. Besides, we will deal with them soon enough.

(The Red Lanterns arrive in Atrocitus' thrown room)

Zilius Zox

That was a close one.

Bleez

Why did you bring this Manhunter.

Atrocitus

For information. (He uses his ring to scan the Manhunters memories) They are going to invade Earth.

Zilius Zox

Who cares. They deserve it.

Atrocitus

(Smacks him in the face) No species deserves extermination! My wife and daughter were killed with me watching! Every living thing on my planet was destroyed! The Earthlings must be warned. We must leave at once.

Bleez

How are we going to get there before them?

Atrocitus

(He smirks) We can travel at the speed of light. Remember? Lets move out! (Atrocitus and his fellow Lanterns fly off and head for Earth)

Ext. Justice League Watchtower

Int. Monitor Womb

Batman

(Arrives through Zeta-Beam)

Flash

Bats. Your late.

Batman

I was busy. Anyway do you know what Superman is going to be speaking about?

Flash

I don't know. I'm not Superman.

Superman

(Notices Batman)

Now that everyone is here can I have your attention please. As you all know the city of Bludhaven was partially destroyed by the creature known as Chemo. The attack resulted in the death of millions. You might be wondering what the addition to the Watch tower is for. To answer that, Chemo is now contained in this space. The Atom can tell you more.

Atom

Chemo is living toxic waste. Merely being in contact with it can cause diseases such as cancer.

Flash

So you brought that thing here to give us all cancer?

Atom

No! Let me finish. Superman and I agreed it would be safer for all of Earth's Inhabitants if we kept him on here. I specially constructed a cell for it. The walls are made of rhenium diboride. Even Superman would have a hard time escaping. In addition to that, the inside of the cell is constantly frozen by means of cryonic weapons confiscated from the masters of ice such as Mister Freeze and Captain Cold. This will keep the creature at bay. Do to the extreme circumstances. This hall is off limits to all Justice League personnel with the exception of Superman and myself. Thank you all for coming to this short meeting.

(Everyone walks off)

Flash

What do you think about this Batman?

Batman

(Looks outside the window)

Somethings coming right at us.

Flash

Yeah. I guess they did just throw the idea at us and...........

Batman

Not that! Look!

Flash

Oh crap! (Flash runs to Martian Manhunter)

J'onn, What is that!

Martian Manhunter

(Uses Martian vision) Red Lanterns.

Flash

I knew Hal, John, and Guy shouldn't have gone to Oa!

Martian Manhunter

(Uses speaker) Attention. We are under attack. This is not a drill. All Justice League personnel prepare for battle.

(Many heroes including STRIPE, Captain Atom, Captain Marvel, Orion, Wonder Woman, Superman, and Martian Manhunter go out of the Watchtower to confront the Red Lanterns)

Atrocitus

(Noticing the Justice League) Halt. I will confront them myself.

Wonder Woman

What is he doing?

Atrocitus

(Flies up close to the Justice League members)

(They prepare for attack)

Superman

What do you want?

Atrocitus

Ive come to warn you.

Wonder Woman

Warn us about what?

Atrocitus

The Manhunters.

Martian Manhunter

Excuse me?

Atrocitus

The Guardians Manhunters!

Martian Manhunter

(Relieved)

Atrocitus

The Manhunters are on course for Earth. Your planet is there next target.

Superman

How do you know?

Atrocitus

I read one of the Manhunters memories.

Wonder Woman

How can we trust you?

Atrocitus

I see the prejudices of the Green Lanterns have rubbed off on you. I have nothing against you or your people. I have brought a battalion of some of my best Lanterns to assist you. We only want to help.

Superman

Fine but if you try anything. We will take you down.

Atrocitus

Can we come inside?

Superman

(Looks at Martian Manhunter and Wonder Woman. They give him the eye)

Fine. But don't leave the Monitor Womb.

Atrocitus

(Calls for his Lanterns)

(They enter the Watchtower. Many League members are shocked.)

Batman

Is this a joke?

Flash

Calm down.

Batman

I am calm.

(Walks up to Superman)

I need to talk to you in private.

Superman

Okay.

Batman

Why the hell did you let them in here?!

Superman

They claim the Manhunters are planning to attack Earth. They only want to help us.

Batman

And you believe that?

Superman

Yes.

Batman

Even if it were true. We cannot trust them.

Superman

I think we can.

Batman

Then your thinking clearly.

Superman

I don't have time for this. An army of Manhunters is headed for Earth. We need to prepare.

Batman

Then go. In the meantime I'm going to have a chat with Atrocitus.

Atrocitus

So the Dark Knight Detective finally got the nerve to come see me.

Batman

Save it. Why are you really here.

Atrocitus

You know. I think you of all people would understand where I'm coming from. Were not so different you and I. You saw your whole family killed right before your eyes. So did I. You want order, justice, and criminals to pay for there sins and wrong doings. So do I. You would make a perfect Red Lantern. What is the true difference between the two of us?

Batman

I don't kill. (He walks away angrily)

Flash

What are you doing?

Batman

Leaving.

Flash

Where to?

Batman

The cave.

Flash

Can I come?

Batman

(Stares at him mad) I will only be there for a few minutes. I am just making sure Atrocitus is telling the truth.

Flash

So....Can I come?

Batman

Fine! If you stop asking questions.

(Batman and Flash leave the Watchtower through a Zeta-Beam. They arrive at the Bat Cave)

(Flash looks around the place)

Batman

Don't touch anything.

Flash

Okay. Okay. I won't!

Alfred

Welcome back Master Bruce.

Batman

(Batman nods)

Flash

Hey Alf. Hows it going.

Alfred

Nice to see you too Flash. (He says discouragingly)

Flash

(Runs around the cave)

Batman

I said don't touch anything!

Flash

I'm just looking. (Notices Ace the Bat-Hound) Whoa! You didn't tell me you had a dog! (Pets Ace on the head)

Batman

(Rolls his eyes and walks to the Bat Computer)

Alfred

What are you looking for Master Bruce?

Batman

I'm making sure Atrocitus' allegations are true. (The Batman uses the Bat Computer to view certain parts of the universe via a Space Telescope. Batman zooms in on Biot. Manhunters are leaving the planet in swarms on a path for Earth. Batman is shocked)

Alfred

Well?

Batman

He was telling the truth. (Batman calls for Flash)

Flash

(Runs up to Batman)

He wasn't lying was he?

Batman

No. We need to get back to the Watchtower.

Flash

Can Ace come?

Batman

I guess every possible combatant counts. Sure.

Flash

Ace! Come here boy!

Ace

(Runs to Flash and licks his face)

Batman

(Talks to Alfred) Be safe.

Alfred

You do the same.

(Batman, Flash, and Ace the Bat-Hound leave the Bat-Cave)

Ext. Justice League Watchtower

Int. Monitor Womb

(Flash, Batman, and Ace the Bat-Hound arrive)

Flash

Were back!

(Many Justice League members roll there eyes or just flat out ignore him)

Dex-Starr

(Notices Ace. His eyes glare,they glow red. He starts to his while showing his sharp fangs)

Ace

(Notices Dex-Starr. His tail straightens, he growls, and looks intensely into his eyes while showing his sharp teeth)

Dex-Starr

(Slowly crawls near Ace)

Flash

(Notices the fight that is about to happen) Whoa! (He runs between Ace and Dex-Starr)

Can you control your pets please?

Batman

Ace! Come!

Ace

(Immediately ignores Dex-Starr and runs to Batman)

Batman

Good boy. (He scratches Ace's head)

Ace

(Drools while smiling)

Dex-Starr

(Continues hissing and acting aggressive)

Flash

(Shouts to Atrocitus) Aren't you going to get your cat?!

Atrocitus

(Finishes his conversation with Superman) No he is fine. Besides it was that Bat Mutt who started it.

Batman

(Gets Angry) Even if he did start it. Which he surly didn't. This is not your headquarters!Our rules. Now control you cat!

Atrocitus

Very well then. (He creates a sword with his ring. Then he slices the top off of a nearby water jug. After that he creates a hand with his ring, with it he picks the water jug up)

Enough! (He pours the water on Dex-Starr)

Dex-Starr

(Shakes the water off and angrily walks up to Atrocitus)