#1 Posted by TDK_1997 (14704 posts) - - Show Bio

JLA/Avengers #0 (DC & Marvel)

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A smal window that is standing the middle of a big room which is so dark that you almost can't see a thing.A tall man standing and watching thorugh it.Outside it is raining.

AMAZO:All I remember is this storm.Everything I remember.

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AMAZO:It was such a cold day with a big storm.

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AMAZO:And then a lightining struck and everything went blank.

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AMAZO:And I woke up here.

Page 2.4

AMAZO:It has been 7 days now.

Page 3.1

AMAZO:I was out.Everyone was confused.

Page 3.2

AMAZO:Something was changed.

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AMAZO:And so was I.

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AMAZO:For 7 days I have been feeling really strange.

Page 4.1

AMAZO:I think more like a real human now.

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AMAZO:I searched for Professor Ivo but he is gone.

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AMAZO:I can't explain what I am feeling right now.

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AMAZO:Maybe because I'm not feeling anything.

Page 5.1

AMAZO:But I know one thing.

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AMAZO:I am now more powerful.

Page 5.3

AMAZO:Since the storm I have had the powers of a lot of Leaguers.

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AMAZO:Superman,Flash,Black Canary,Red Tornado,Aquaman,Fire and Ice.

Page 6.1

AMAZO:But that is not my only new upgrade.

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AMAZO:Since then I have destroyed my body 4 times.

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AMAZO:And 4 times I woke up in a new body,with the same powers.

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AMAZO:How I am doing it,I have no idea.

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AMAZO:It's all because of the storm.

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AMAZO:But my only option is to observe.

Page 7.3

AMAZO:Explore.

Page 7.4

AMAZO:And then KILL!

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AMAZO:I was created to destroy the JLA.

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AMAZO:And this time I have advantage.

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AMAZO:But this time it will also be harder.

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AMAZO:There are new heroes out there.

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AMAZO:They are calling themselves the Avengers.

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AMAZO:They may try to stop me.

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AMAZO:But this time I can stop them,too.

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Amazo opens the window.

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Jumps from it.

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Lands on the wet grass.

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Starts flying.

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His eyes start glowing in red.

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AMAZO:Because I feel stronger and I know their secret.

#2 Posted by batkevin74 (10605 posts) - - Show Bio

@TDK_1997: So it's 9 pages of him just standing in a room? The story is great but 9 pages of, well nothing, is kinda boring

#3 Posted by TheCannon (18322 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74 said:

@TDK_1997: So it's 9 pages of him just standing in a room? The story is great but 9 pages of, well nothing, is kinda boring

This.

#4 Posted by TDK_1997 (14704 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon said:

@batkevin74 said:

@TDK_1997: So it's 9 pages of him just standing in a room? The story is great but 9 pages of, well nothing, is kinda boring

This.

Well this is just the build-up.The story is just in it's beginning.

#5 Posted by Aztrox (13 posts) - - Show Bio

If it's only the beginning it's not really bad. It's a good thing to explain what is going to happen in the upcoming issues. Just continue the story and I am sure it will be nice.

#6 Posted by batkevin74 (10605 posts) - - Show Bio

@TDK_1997: Sure but just so long as you get that 9 PAGES of black panels isn't great. I get you're building and its the begininng, but if that were a real comic, people wouldn't buy it because of the 9 pages out of a 22pg comic were just black.

Regardless let's see some more, good work

#7 Posted by TDK_1997 (14704 posts) - - Show Bio

@batkevin74:Thanks.The next issue will come tommorow.