Be Honest, I made a character that I think is really cool. I have a description and a picture of him... Please reply if you agree with me! :) I'm only a novas drawer so ya I know his head is a little wonky. :P
A genius 24 year old at University was working in the science lab. He made a mixture of particles from an exploding star (or supernova) and chemicals. He drank this mixture and felt nothing. This mixture was supposed to give great intellect. He continued working and once the day was over he went home. The next morning he woke up and felt different. All throughout the day he felt different. As the day ended the bus home missed him. He chased the bus with great speed. Thinking of the day before he tested these newly discovered powers. He was able to levitate, travel at great speeds and had super human strength. He could also make a flash and disappear from sight in an explosion of fire. Three months passed before he could use his powers again. A lost astronaut had come back from space after being saved by NASA. This man was no longer ordinary. He was terrorizing Los Angeles. He decided tom put his powers to use and fight him. He was not the only one who heard of this for many heroes and villains siding and fighting him came from around the world. Including: Venom, Carnage, Abomination, Iron Monger and Red Skull. The Incredible Hulk, Iron Man, Captain America, Spider-Man and Scarlet-Spider also went. Unknowing that the terror they faced was a man of great power named Vengeance , who could blend in with his surrounding and hide his stench, had super human strength, speed, telekinesis and was full of rage.
So give me your honest opinion so i can improve. :) thanks!