If it can happen, it will happen! (Part Three)

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Mean while on the other side of town. 

In full daylight, the spraypaint would have had a distinctly neon glare. In the dim light of the streetlight's periphery, it was dull and heavy. Nonethe less, the young man in gang colors was studying it intently. " Yeah, I know that tag," he finnally said. He shook his head. " That's a badass marker. The Yellow Daggers. Taiwanese. The kind of gang you never hear about on those damn cop shows, but the ones nobody in their right mind fucks with."  
 The older man, his impeccable suit very out of place in this part of town, merely nodded. " Yes, precisely. And very, very suitable for our purposes." The older well dressed man, hands the young man a white bag, you know the kind of bag you would put breadsticks, or donuts into. Then he walks down an alleyway and, out of sight.  
" Guy gives me the creeps, like I want to know anything about your purposes." As the young man looks into the bag he sees a wad of one hundred dollar bills. " Nice. Oh yeah, and thats why I find shit out for his puckerd old ass."  
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#2  Edited By moviegeek17

youre on a roll man great job with the dialogue and inner thoughts

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@moviegeek17 said:
"youre on a roll man great job with the dialogue and inner thoughts "

Thanks man!
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@Undergroundgod: 
anytime man. i gotta give credit where credit is due
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@moviegeek17 said:
" @Undergroundgod:  anytime man. i gotta give credit where credit is due"

You are going to love part four. Think M.I.L.F. ;)
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@Undergroundgod: 
i bet i will cant wait. when should i be expecting it?
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@moviegeek17 said:
"@Undergroundgod: 
i bet i will cant wait. when should i be expecting it? "

Maybe tonight, if not then tomorrow for sure.
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@Undergroundgod: 
cool same here with the third part of my Thundra fan fic. speaking of which i should probably get started on it soon lol