#1 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

Thaddeus Orman was a normal intern at Oscorp.

He was hoping to get a job there as a scientist.

He was mad at Norman Osborn for that.

One day at work he accidentally stumbled upon a secret room where they were harvesting the body of a strange creature found in Switzerland.

He took pictures of this, planning to sell them to a newspaper.

On the way out of the room a voice was in his head.

"Thaddeus, Thaddeus.... I am Loki..."

They went away after a minute, and just thought it was the wind, so he went home.

At home he was still wondering about the voices, and heard them again.

"You fool! I'm inside you now! I left my body and took over YOURS! HAHAHA! Now you have to free my body!"

"Or what?" asked Thaddeus

"Or I use you to KILL Norman Osborn, and you suffer the punishment!"

"Okay" said Thaddeus, "Where is your body?"

"Oscorp" answered Loki.

Thaddeus went back to Oscorp and unleashed the body. Loki went back into his body.

"Now that I'm in my body I can take over the world of mortals! HAHAHA!"

"You are planning to take over the world!?!" said Thaddeus.

"Yes!" Loki flew through the top of the building and into the air, and laughed like a maniac.

Suddenly, Thaddeus saw a bright-light.

"Who are you? Do you work for Loki?" asked Thaddeus

"No, I am Odin. Thor went missing when The Skrulls invaded, and Loki is free to take over. I will give you power, if you replace Thor and defeat Loki"

"Yes" said Thaddeus

Odin then summoned up all the power he had, and fired a giant blast at Thaddeus. He gained a costume, and a hammer. He became the Mighty Thor.

"The power..." said Thaddeus, "I never knew there was anything like it."

He flew out the window.

"Now, I must keep my end of the bargain" said Thaddeus, "I must stop Loki"

Thor threw his hammer at Loki, who pushed it away.

"Brother? Is that you? I thought the Skrulls got you!"

"No, I am the mortal you tricked, Odin has given me the power to stop you... ONCE AND FOR ALL!"

Thor summoned his hammer, then flew up to Loki and smashed him in the face

Loki fell to the ground.

"You may not be Thor" Loki said, "But anyone who wields mjolnir is an enemy of mine"

Loki summons up power and creates dozens of copies of himself surrounding Thor.

"I can see through your TRICKERY!" Thor summoned a huge lightning bolt, and the light made Loki's copies disappear.

Thor charged at Loki, but Loki created a force field that Thor could not penetrate.

Thor tried to break the force-field, but just couldn't.

Then, Loki (while still inside the force field) was able to summon the soul of Jane Foster, Thaddeus's girlfriend that was killed in a motorcycle crash.

"You made a bargain with Odin," said Loki, "I have a bargain for you. Give up the power of Thor, and I will bring your beloved Jane Foster back to life"

"J--jane..." Thor turned back to Thaddeus and fell to the ground "L--loki, how'd y-you..."

"Dont do it, Thaddeus" Thaddeus heard Odin's voice. "Its a trick."

Thaddeus looked up at Loki, turned back to Thor, and charged with the full power of Thor, and smashed the force-field with the hammer, causing a cosmic explosion within the microverse and distance between them, knocking them both backwards.

"You are a fool mortal!" said Loki. "I give you one change at the woman you love, and you turn it away. For that, you shall pay!"

Loki opens a portal, and 5 frost giants come out.

"Destroy him!" Loki said to the frost giants.

Thor threw the hammer at the frost giants, and destroyed them all. He summoned back his hammer

"No, Loki... your the fool."

Thor smashed Loki in the stomach with the hammer and an interdimensional ball of energy formed around them and imploded, and they were no where to be seen.

IN THE MICROVERSE..

"Okay, Loki, its time for a REAL fight!"

"I agree!" said Loki.

Loki summons all of his power, and fires a magical blast at Thor. At first, it does nothing."

"You will have to do better than that" said Thor.

Then, another Thor appeared, and attacked the real Thor.

Thor smashed the head off of the fake one using his hammer, then focused all of his energy, as it started flowing into his hammer, and shot in the form of a giant lightning bolt, and hit Loki, making him disapppear. Suddenly, Odin summoned Thaddeus back to Asgard.

"You've done well, Thaddeus, now you must protect Earth as Thor!"

"Thank you" said Thaddeus, as Odin sent him back to Earth.

"I'm the new Thor" thought Thaddeus "But... wheres Loki?"

THE END... OR IS IT?

Coming Soon: The Flash

#2 Posted by TheCannon (19008 posts) - - Show Bio

I like this.

#3 Posted by TheCannon (19008 posts) - - Show Bio

ANYONE!?!

#4 Posted by AweSam (7375 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon said:

I like this.

Of course you like it, you partly wrote it.

#5 Posted by TheCannon (19008 posts) - - Show Bio

@AweSam said:

@TheCannon said:

I like this.

Of course you like it, you partly wrote it.

True.

What did YOU think of it?

#6 Posted by AweSam (7375 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon said:

@AweSam said:

@TheCannon said:

I like this.

Of course you like it, you partly wrote it.

True.

What did YOU think of it?

Didn't plan it well enough. There's a top secret room that contains a foreign body and anyone can just walk in and out of it?

#7 Posted by TheCannon (19008 posts) - - Show Bio

@AweSam said:

@TheCannon said:

@AweSam said:

@TheCannon said:

I like this.

Of course you like it, you partly wrote it.

True.

What did YOU think of it?

Didn't plan it well enough. There's a top secret room that contains a foreign body and anyone can just walk in and out of it?

Okay. Makes sense. Any other complaints, or was that it?

#8 Posted by AweSam (7375 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon said:

@AweSam said:

@TheCannon said:

@AweSam said:

@TheCannon said:

I like this.

Of course you like it, you partly wrote it.

True.

What did YOU think of it?

Didn't plan it well enough. There's a top secret room that contains a foreign body and anyone can just walk in and out of it?

Okay. Makes sense. Any other complaints, or was that it?

Yeah, my neighbor's been making a lot of noise lately.

#9 Posted by TheCannon (19008 posts) - - Show Bio

@AweSam said:

@TheCannon said:

@AweSam said:

@TheCannon said:

@AweSam said:

@TheCannon said:

I like this.

Of course you like it, you partly wrote it.

True.

What did YOU think of it?

Didn't plan it well enough. There's a top secret room that contains a foreign body and anyone can just walk in and out of it?

Okay. Makes sense. Any other complaints, or was that it?

Yeah, my neighbor's been making a lot of noise lately.

I'm talking about the story.

#10 Posted by AweSam (7375 posts) - - Show Bio

@TheCannon: Again, I was being sarcastic.

#11 Posted by TheCannon (19008 posts) - - Show Bio

Bump.

#12 Posted by CapFanboy (5332 posts) - - Show Bio

@AweSam said:

Yeah, my neighbor's been making a lot of noise lately.

Sorry...I told her to keep it down...