Freaks Episode 8: Memory Lane

 
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Logan: Lighten' up kid. I'm sure you'll get your memory back.  
 
Danny: I don't know...Mister Logan. 
 
Logan: Hey just call me Logan. Don't wash me with those English accents. Yeah? 
 
Danny: Sure...Logan.  
 
Logan: Anyways, we're going to my cabin. 
 
Danny: You have a cabin? In this pile of snow? 
 
Logan: Sure kid. I build it on my own. 
 
Danny: Wow just you? 
 
Logan: Yeah bub. You gotta problem with that? 
 
Danny: No it's just that you did it alone. Without anyone's help. 
 
Logan: I'm sure anyone can build a cabin for himself.
 
Danny: yeah, I wish I could. Unless I have my memory back. I wonder if these memories are really bad for me. 
 
Logan: yeah, I guess you would sound like me. 
 
Danny: You? 
 
Logan: I had bad memories, kid. Really bad. You wouldn't want to know if I tell you. 
 
Danny: Well, if it's that bad.... 
 
Logan: I used to be like an animal. A weapon. 
 
Danny: A weapon? 
 
Flashback 
 
Danny: Ah there it is. The weapon of mass destruction.    
 
SHIELD agent 1: Danny, be careful. That weapon could be radioactive. 
    
Present
 
Logan: yeah, I used to be one. Then I got my memories back. Thanks to Scarlet Witch. Once I found out, I made them pay for what they did to me. It wasn't.....nice. 
 
Danny: Scarlet Witch? Who's Scarlet Witch? 
 
Logan: You have long ways to learn, kid. It'll take time. 
 
Danny: I guess I have to wait and see. Who knows what kind of memories I have? 
    
Logan: Here we are kid. We....Nick? 
 
Fury: Yes, Logan. I see you have....your friend there. 
 
Danny: yeah, I'm his friend. I guess. Nice to meet you... 
 
Nick: Call me sir. 
 
Danny: ok sir.
 
Logan: Nick ol' friend, what are you doing here? 
 
Fury: Logan, we need to talk in private. 
 
Logan: ok sure. Hey kid, there's a bed on my cabin. Rest for a while. 
 
Danny: yeah, I will. Thanks, Logan. 
 
Logan: Sure kid, no problem. 
 
5 minutes later 
 
Logan: ok Nick, spill the guts. What is it this time? 
 
Fury: We have a major problem. Tony just contacted me and said the weapon design that the HYDRA scientists built was actually fake. 
 
Logan: Fake? How is that possible? 
 
Fury: We don't know. For some reason, I get the feeling that HYDRA is watching every single move that we are doing.  
 
Logan: And you want me to figure this out. 
 
Fury: Yes, you are the one who can do this. 
 
Logan: So where's the real one then? 
 
Fury: By using his tracking system, Tony figured that the nuclear weapon came from Tibet. I guess that's where the HYDRA base is. 
 
Logan: I see. What about the kid there? 
 
Fury: I think that kid should come with you. 
 
Logan: You're crazy, Nick. That kid doesn't know a single thing of who he is. It's dangerous. 
 
Fury: I see. Well you have to take him with you. He's....vital to this mission. 
 
Logan: Nick, is there something you're not telling me? 
 
Fury: Logan, just do the mission. Once it's done, we'll then have a couple of drinks. 
 
Logan: Can't wait for that. 
 
The next day.... 
 
Logan: Hey kid, wake up. Naptime's over. 
 
Danny: Uh... I just had a dream. I was working with some people who were wearing uniforms with eagle tags. 
 
Logan: Eagle tags? I'm sure you meant SHIELD. 
 
Danny: SHIELD? 
 
Logan: We got no time, kid. We're going. 
 
Danny: Going? To where? 
 
Logan: Tibet. 
 
Danny: What's going on? 
 
Logan: You'll find out soon enough. 
 
SHIELD Helicarrier..... 
 
Fury: Everything is set. Thanks to you, Memory Log. 
 
Memory Log: Hey, don't call me that name. Ok.  
 
Fury: What else I can call you? You don't even have a real name. Anyways, I just hope this plan works. 
 
Somewhere in Tibet...HYDRA base 
 
HYDRA agent: Ma'am, we have a..... 
 
Viper: A problem? Yes, I know. 
 
HYDRA agent: But Ma'am, Logan is dangerous and that kid named Danny...... They'll interfere with our plans. 
 
Viper: Dont' worry, we'll have a surprise for them. Besides, if it weren't for that mutie, we wouldn't find out what's going on with SHIELD. 
 
HYDRA agent: Yes. Thanks to Surveillance. 
 
Viper: How's he by the way? 
 
HYDRA agent: He's concentrating.  
 
Viper: I know. He takes time to broadcast these number of images for us. It's a good thing we have him. Poor Danny, he's doesn't know what he's up to. 
 
Airplane......  
 
Logan: Hey kid, you're ready? 
 
Danny: I...I don't know, Logan. I'm not sure about this. 
 
Logan: Don't like to fly? 
 
Danny: But these parachutes? What if they don't work? 
 
Logan: Kid, you need to ligthen' up. It's going to be ok. 
 
Danny: I remember....something. These parachutes....They remind me of some hero with a black tuxedo suit. 
 
Logan: Hey kid, we haven't got much time. Let's do this.  
 
Danny: ok. Uh....Logan. What's up with the costume you're wearing? 
 
Logan: Now you're asking. Just call me Wolverine for now. 
 
Danny: Wolverine? 
 
Logan: yeah kid. It's my codename. We have to jump. You go first. 
 
Danny: Oh what a day. I just hope this works. What about you....Wolverine? 
 
Wolverine: Don't worry. I'll be fine. In case if anything goes wrong, I have a doctor up my sleeve. 
 
Danny: A doctor? 
 
Wolverine: Just go! 
 
I just flew down. Down as if I'm a big giant rock that fell from the sky. I....get this feeling that I have done this similar thing before.  
 
Wolverine: ok, here goes nothing. 
 
50 minutes later..... 
 
Wolverine: ok kid, here we are. We're at the HYDRA base. 
 
Danny: HYDRA? It sounds like a snake from the Greek mythology. I think I used to study about it back in....history class. 
 
Wolverine: No time to chat, bub. Let's go. 
 
Crap! Why can't I remember? What's going on? I just know something....but what? Patience, Danny, patience. 
 
Wolverine: ok here goes. Climb my back. 
 
Danny: Are you sure about this? 
 
Wolverine: Just do it, kid.  
 
SNIKT! SNIKT! 
 
Danny: What the heck? What are those? 
 
Wolverine: Kid, ya better listen. We're here to do the mission. ok. Once our mission is over, I'll tell ya one of my fairytales.
 
Danny: ok Logan. I mean Wolverine. 
 
15 minues later.... 
 
Danny: Oh Queen Elizabeth II, this place is huge. 
 
Wolevrine: Sniff! Sniff! This way. 
 
Danny: What am I up to, Wolverine? 
 
Wolverine: Like I said, kid. You'll find soon enough. 
 
Danny: Wolverine, look! Is that a door up there? It's slight opened. 
 
Wolverine: I have a bad feeling about this. We better go. 
 
Danny: Oh boy. 
 
Wolverine: Sniff! Sniff! I smell trouble. 
 
Viper: That's right, Logan. We're trouble. 
 
To be continued in Freaks Episode 9: Countdown. 

Good job, yet again!  
 
My one problem is that I think you should spend a little bit more time in the editing stage on the dialogue, this chapter felt a little bit rough. But the way you sequence events in the story is getting way better, it feels like a real comic book script. Great job!

Bump.