Freaks Episode 2: The Escape, Part 2

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SOME OF THE CHARACTERS AND SETTINGS ARE THE PROPERTY OF MARVEL INC. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. 
   
  
BOOOOOM! 
 
M.R.D. soldiers: AH! UGH!  
 
THUD! CRASH! 
 
M.R.D. soldier 8: What was that? An explosion? 
 
M.R.D. soldier 6: yeah, It must be Greg. That freak is causing the explosion. 
 
M.R.D. soldier 8: Sir, can you hear me? Sir! 
 
M.R.D. soldier 6: I think our squad leader is down. And the others. We better check. 
 
M.R.D. soldier 7: Huff! Huff! Look! 
 
M.R.D. soldier 8: Crap! All Units! We need help. FAST! We got injured men down here.
 
Greg: Yo Danny! You still there? Hello? 
 
Danny: I'm here, Greg. So how's your plan working? 
 
Greg: My plan already worked. Didn't you hear the explosion?  
 
Danny: Well yes. I.... Anyways, we need to call the rest of the others. 
 
Greg: yeah, It's about time we do. 
 
Danny: Hey! Isn't that Qwan and Henry? 
 
Greg: Finally. They're here. 
 
Qwan: Huff! Huff! 
 
Henry: Oh boy. We're glad to meet you guys. 
 
Danny: Yes, I guess you would say the time always have to wait. 
 
Qwan: Huh. You can say that again.  
 
Greg: Anyways, where is Sharon and Christy?  
 
Henry: They still must be in the prison facility. I guess. 
 
Greg: Yo what? Oh man! 
 
Qwan: Oh geez! This is just great. Now we have to get them? 
 
Danny: Actually, I have a better idea. 
 
Greg: Like what? 
 
Danny: Well, we just have to wait for Ryan's contact.  
 
Qwan: yeah, he told us to wait here until he calls. 
 
Greg: yeah. 
 
Outside the entrance of the facility. 
 
Ryan: Sir! This is Ryan speaking. I'm at the entrance. 
 
Director Stash: Copy that. You know what you're up to? 
 
Ryan: I know what I'm doing sir. 
 
Director Stash: ok, then do it. We need them. Fast! 
 
Ryan: Yes Sir! Ryan Out.
 
Director Stash has been giving me a headache lately. I guess anyone could say about angry generals in those days. Yeah, he was a general alright. A former general.
 
Ryan: ok, team. Let's move it. 
 
Inside the facility 
 
Sharon: Christy! you're done? 
 
Christy: yeah, I am. It's time to go. We don't have much time. They must be on the hills by now. Waiting for us. 
 
Sharon: yeah, I'm with you. Let's go. 
 
Meanwhile in the Director's office.... 
 
Director Stash: These muties.... They really give me a headache. 
 
Dr. Frank Mendol: Wouldn't Sharon count as one? 
 
Director Stash: Look, doc. If you're here to talk about my daughter...... 
 
Dr. Frank: Actually, I'm not. But it seems to me that you do care for her. 
 
Director Stash: Ever since she was a child, I raised her to be a normal girl until that thing happened. 
 
Dr. Frank: I see. 
 
Director Stash: If she were a normal girl, I would definitely keep her safe from all these freaks that she joins with. 
 
Dr. Frank: Well you see, Director. I've been working on a formula that can neutralize their powers. 
 
Director Stash: You mean dampening? 
 
Dr. Frank: Well yes. You could say that. I'm sure you have no problem about your daughter being..... 
 
Director Stash: Wait! Not yet. I think I have a plan. 
 
Dr. Frank: oh ok.  
 
Director Stash: Dr. Frank, do we have something useful for Sharon. Something that cannot allow her to scan us or anyone. 
 
Dr. Frank: Well, we have top scientists who are creating a mind probe. It's able to resist Sharon's scanning ability. 
 
Director Stash: Hmmm. We'll use her for a while. In that way, she won't able to tell what our motivations are. Or who we are, for that matter. 
 
Dr. Frank: Does Sharon know about you? 
 
Director Stash: Of course she knows about me. Why else she would have that scanning ability? 
 
Dr. Frank: Hmmm. Don't worry, Director. We'll have the mind probes ready in no time. 
 
Director Stash: In the meantime, Doctor. You work on that formula of yours. 
 
Dr. Frank: Certainly, Director. 
 
Outside the facility. 
 
Qwan: Hey! There they are. Geez. Where were you girls? 
 
Sharon: We were being ambused by the M.R.D. I had Christy for help. 
 
Greg: Same here.  
 
Danny: yeah, those M.R.D. sure gave us a back pain. 
 
Christy: Guys! We need Ryan. When will he call us? 
 
Greg: Right about..... Now. 
 
Beep Beep! Beep Beep! Click! 
 
Ryan: Guys, are you still there? Were you able to get out? 
 
Qwan: Yes, Ryan. We're all here. No worries. 
 
Ryan: Thank goodness. I guess my plan worked. 
 
Qwan: You guess? Dude, your plans always work. Anyways, what's our next step? 
 
Ryan: Go to the next hills and meet me there. I have something to show you. 
 
Qwan: ok Ryan. Give us the direction where you're heading. We'll meet you there. 
 
Sharon: I wonder what Ryan has something to show us? 
 
Qwan: Sharon, if you were a telepath. You would definitely know.  
 
Meanwhile in Dr. Frank's lab...... 
 
Assistant: Doctor! Doctor! I have some results on the formula. Do you want to...... 
 
Dr. Frank: Not now. Miss. I need to figure out how to work this thing. 
 
Assistant: What is it, Doctor? 
 
Dr. Frank: It's just that I'm trying to figure how these mutants were able to use their powers. 
 
Assistant: ok? I see. 
 
Dr. Frank: Yes, I need to.... How's that formula coming along? 
 
Assistant: Well, you see the results are negative. We tried on a mutant who is able to change his shadow's size and shape. 
 
Dr. Frank: Hmmmmm. I guess we still need to work on that. In the meantime...... 
 
Assitant: Doctor, what is it? 
 
Dr. Frank: Aha! I got it! I think I know how to....... Miss, send me some samples of mutant DNA. I have something to deal with these freaks. 
 
Assistant: ok, Doctor. 
 
Dr. Frank: Just wait. You will see to this day that I will be the one to crush mutantkind once and for all.  
 
To be continued in Freaks Episode 3: Freedom.

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#2  Edited By TypingKira

I think that this could really benefit from being formatted like a regular piece of prose rather than just dialogue. Great dialogue, brilliant, but standing alone, it doesn't really give us a picture of what's going on. 

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#3  Edited By The Impersonator

Hmmm. I see. I guess I have to work on those details of what's going on. I'll see what I can do.

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#4  Edited By InnerVenom123

I like how the General has the same type of conflict that Angel's father has, having a child for a mutant.

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#5  Edited By The Impersonator

@InnerVenom123: Thanks!

Yep. There's always a conflict between humans and mutants. But not always though. :P

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Bump.