#1 Edited by The Impersonator (5483 posts) - - Show Bio

SOME OF THE CHARACTERS AND SETTINGS ARE THE PROPERTY OF MARVEL INC. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. 
   
  
Scarlet Witch: No More Mutants. 
 
FLASSSSSSSSH! 
 
Beep Beep! Beep Beep! Beep..... Click! 
 
Ryan Davidson: Ugh! What a dream. Man, that witch. 
 
Rinnnng! Rinnnng! 
 
Ryan: Hello? 
 
Director Stash: Ryan. We got trouble. Come here quickly. 
 
Ryan: Another mutant problem? 
 
Director Stash: Yes, what else do you expect me to call you for? We need you here. Now.
 
Ryan: Yes Sir! 
 
45 minutes later 
 
M.R.D. Guard 1: yeah yeah I know but.... Hey look! It's Ryan or shall I say Glass Shell. 
 
M.R.D. Guard 2: Hah! You got that right. 
 
Ryan: Very funny, guys. I'm in a hurry if you don't mind. 
 
I'm Ryan Davidson, As you know, I was a mutant once but I guess everyone would say that life sucks without a gift. Yeah, I had a gift. It always come to my mind that woman in the dreams is responsible. She's the only thing. Yeah, I do blame her always. 
 
Director Stash: Ah! There you are. We got a big problem here. There are six mutants who escaped from the prison facility.  
 
Ryan: What? 
 
Actually, I was the one who helped them out. No one knows about what I have done to rescue them. But I had to... even though I'm human. They're my friends. 
 
Director Stash: Hey! Are you listening? 
 
Ryan: Yes Sir! 
 
Director Stash: ok. I need you and your soldiers to get out there and recapture them. Understand? 
 
Ryan: Yes Sir! 
 
Director Stash: Move it! 
 
I never liked Stash as much as everyone does. Including mutants. But he's responsible for their capture since he got them once. But this time, it won't happen again. 
 
Computer: Alert! Alert! Mutants Escaping! Alert! 
 
Qwan Lee: Oh geez! I hate computers. If I see any computer around me, I'm goin' to scream at it. For good.
 
Henry Lee: Calm down! Bro. We're getting out of here as fast as we can. 
 
Qwan: Hey! I'm not Quicksilver you know. Besides, if I had superspeed I would definintely be one of the world's most running athlete. 
 
Henry: Maybe, you shouldn't stick with that voice talent of yours. I guess. 
 
Qwan: Oh shut up! Let's go. We don't have much time. Where's Greg by the way?  
 
Henry: He's setting up his explosive bursts. It should go at any minute now. 
 
Qwan: That Greg always takes time to do things. Anyways, at least he can distract these M.R.D. punks. What about Danny? 
 
Henry: Ummm. He's hiding? Somewhere? I guess. 
 
Qwan: He's nowhere to be seen. He's good at it.  
 
M.R.D. soldiers: There they are! Get them! 
 
Henry: Oh boy. They're coming. 
 
Qwan: I'll take care of them. Cover your ears. Bro. 
 
Henry: Oh I don't like the sound of this.  
 
Qwan: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! 
 
M.R.D. soldier 1: Ugh! My ears! Crap. Call... for..... reinforce....... ments..... Ah!  
 
THUD!
 
M.R.D. soldier 2: Ahh!  
 
THUD! 
 
Qwan: AHHHHHHHHH..... 
 
Henry: Boy! You sure know how to sing. You should sign up for the American Idol. 
 
Qwan: Oh, shut up. Bro. 
 
BOOOM! BOOM! BOOM!......... 
 
Qwan: YES! Thank you Greg! Geez! and about time! 
 
Henry: Bro, Look. It's the guards. 
 
Qwan: Let me..... 
 
Henry: No wait! I have an idea. 
 
M.R.D. guard 1: Man, what a day. These muties always cause problems for us. 
 
M.R. D. guard 2: Yeah. You're telling me. I sure hate those freaks. Every single one of em'. 
 
Henry: Ugh! My ears! Crap. Call... for..... reinforce....... ments..... Ah! Thud!
  
M.R.D. guard: What? Did you hear that? He needs help. 
 
M.R.D. guard: Where it's coming from? It must be there. Let's go. 
 
Qwan: Nice. Well done, bro. But I could have screamed at them. You know.
 
Henry: yeah, But I can't let you take all the credit. Can't I? 
 
Qwan: yeah yeah, whatever.  
 
Somewhere in the facility...... 
 
Bang Bang! Bang! BANG! 
 
M.R.D. soldier: Ah crap. That girl is using a gun. Take cover. 
 
Sharon Stash: Christy. We need a different weapon. Here! Take this.
 
Christy Petrov: What? A steel bar? What am I? A construction worker? 
 
Sharon: Just do it. 
 
Christy: Ok. 
 
M.R.D. soldier 2: Hello? We need more reinforcments. We need..... 
 
SPLAT! 
  
M.R.D. soldier 2: AH! MY LEG!
 
M.R.D. soldier 3: What the.....? What's she doing?
 
Phoot! Phoot! Phoot.......... 
 
Sharon: Not bad for a construction worker.  
 
Christy: Sharon. Please. 
 
Sharon: I was just jokin. Take it easy. 
 
Christy: yeah yeah sure. I need more rocks.  
 
Sharon: Here. Got them all. 
 
Christy: This will take time. Plus I need to concentrate how to turn these rocks into pebbles. 
 
Sharon: You're just like Greg. Always taking time. 
 
Christy: yeah, I know.  
 
Elsewhere outside the facility. 
 
Greg Davies: Yo! Yo Danny! You're still here? I can't see you man. 
 
Danny Wales: I'm right here, Greg. Besides, you need to be patient.  
 
Greg: Come on, man. I'm only patient when I set up my old schools. 
 
Danny: That's why everyone calls you a time bomb. Am I right? 
 
Greg: Really funny. Danny, you need to take that British accent of yours and shoved it in your butt. 
 
Danny: Ah American these days. What can you do? 
 
Greg: Say what? 
 
Danny: Never mind, Greg. 
 
Greg: Yo look! Those guys are coming after us. 
 
Danny: We need a plan. How long can you set off your bombs? 
 
Greg: It depends on my watch timer. 
 
Danny: Ah yes. Your watch timer.  
 
Greg: yeah. You got a problem with that?
 
Danny: No but I was just wondering how long can you set off the bombs. 
 
Greg: Danny. Chill ok. I'll do my stuff. You do yours. Don't worry. 
 
Danny: Sure. Do whatever you like.  
 
M.R.D. soldier: Huff! Huff! Where are they? 
 
M.R.D. squad leader: ok, Vision goggles everyone. Danny could be anywhere. 
 
Danny: Oh great. Queen Elizabeth ll wouldn't be happy about this if I was a spy working for her. Oh well, I'll think of something. 
 
M.R.D. soldier 3: Wait! Did you hear that? 
 
M.R.D. soldier 4: Hear what? 
 
M.R.D. soldier: I can hear someone walking through the bush. It could be Danny. 
 
M.R.D. squad leader: ok everyone. You two. Take that direction over there. We'll look through the bushes. 
 
M.R.D. soldiers: Yes sir!   
 
M.R.D. squad leader: Into that bush, boys.  
 
M.R.D. soldier 5: Sir! I can see him. 
 
M.R.D. squad leader: Ok. Let's take him out. 
 
BOOOOOOM!   
 
To be continued in Freaks Episode 2: The Escape, Part 2. 

#2 Posted by HumanX (161 posts) - - Show Bio

Cool.

#3 Posted by The Impersonator (5483 posts) - - Show Bio
@HumanX:
Thanks.
#4 Posted by TypingKira (3509 posts) - - Show Bio

Is this setup like the script of a comic?  
 
I really like the exchanged between Ryan and his friends, you have a knack for dialogue. 

#5 Posted by The Impersonator (5483 posts) - - Show Bio

Thanks. yeah, it's like the script from a comic book. 

#6 Posted by TypingKira (3509 posts) - - Show Bio
@The Impersonator: Ah, I see. Thanks for clearing it up.  
#7 Posted by InnerVenom123 (29499 posts) - - Show Bio

Good start!

#8 Posted by The Impersonator (5483 posts) - - Show Bio

@InnerVenom123: Thanks!

#9 Posted by The Impersonator (5483 posts) - - Show Bio

Bump.

#10 Posted by cbishop (8132 posts) - - Show Bio

@the_impersonator: Did you bump every chapter you wrote? Would have been way better to bump the libraries, and maybe the first chapter of each story. Way oversaturated the front three pages.

#11 Edited by The Impersonator (5483 posts) - - Show Bio

@cbishop said:

@the_impersonator: Did you bump every chapter you wrote? Would have been way better to bump the libraries, and maybe the first chapter of each story. Way oversaturated the front three pages.

Yep. The reason I did that is because I needed to provide the links on Freaks-Introduction page. I had to find those chapters in google search, which took me a while to do it. So I had to bump all of them and then provide the links.

#12 Posted by cbishop (8132 posts) - - Show Bio

@the_impersonator: Ahhhh, gotcha. That's why I post my (very few) fics as blogs attached to the forum, rather than as forum posts. Then if I really can't find 'em, I can just go sift through my blog tab. Another way to go is to sift through your forum tab, but that can take much, much longer. You have your library now though, so kinda moot. ;)

#13 Edited by The Impersonator (5483 posts) - - Show Bio

@cbishop said:

@the_impersonator: Ahhhh, gotcha. That's why I post my (very few) fics as blogs attached to the forum, rather than as forum posts. Then if I really can't find 'em, I can just go sift through my blog tab. Another way to go is to sift through your forum tab, but that can take much, much longer. You have your library now though, so kinda moot. ;)

Yeah, I also tried the forum tab. It didn't work. I recall it used to work before. Because those links which were broken earlier, was working until the whole Comic Vine site got updated or modified. Maybe, that's why it didn't work.

Yep, the library is all set and ready for reading pleasure. :)