Me and a freind writing a comic and he needed me to write a scene for him, the scene is loki crying about being banished, the versions in this are girl loki and thor, james is somebody else. Thor nearly died when loki done something. This is his monologue. Tell me if its ok
Loki: Father, truly, I am sorry. I acted in haste when Thor...my...Sister nearly took her life, recklessly irresponsibly, even... boastfully.
Loki: But why banish ME! This world – It pains me to see myself with these feeble creatures.
Loki: They have no shame; they talk to me as if I was... I was... one of them – A human (low tone , but scornful).
Loki: Why? Why do this? What does this bring to me, to us? Your children, future rulers of Asgard, WHY!
James in background staring at Loki, intrigued by what he is hearing.
Loki: Father, F- [crying softly, sound carries into the wind) ... “I hate you.”
James walks straight past her, never turning back. He has heard enough.
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