Dr Doom's Quest To Kill Thanos The Mad Titan! Prt 1

Wow, awesome!

@metallo200064: Hmm not convinced in the hype a certain @Dr_Destiny: was pushing. Not a fan of script form and the grammer could use correcting.

@metallo200064: The premise is good but you loose exposition and detailed description. I'm almost certain someone will disagree with me and at the end of the day it's your choice. This should be, in no way interpreted as a reason to stop writing, I'm certain, that with the right mix of form, focus and content, that this could be an interesting story.

This is pretty good. I look forward to more.

@metallo200064: death death and more death! Dealing with 3 insane villains that love the very idea of killing along with a warrior that has killed for centuries behind the pages..

Food for thought:)

**edit - I do like it though! Maybe a back story on why Ultron is helping Doom? Why Ultron wouldn't take the Cube for himself?.. y'know, and why Odin didn't intervene.

@metallo200064: very cool! And no problem man, just trying to help:)

@metallo200064: alright this is cool keep me updated