#1 Posted by VyseCarma (257 posts) - - Show Bio

Author's Note: Hey! They have tittles now! Just like a real comic book! Well now that you ask, 'cause I know that you are, Disc #1 and #2 also have tittles: So It Begings Parts 1 and 2. Please don't forget to leave a comment to help me grow and learn from my many mistakes I'm bound to make. And now without further adieu Disc #3!

Issue 3: Page 1: Panel 1: Top half of the black page shows a panel from last issue of Disc, a black suited, colorless eyed, metal mouthed, thin yet not incridibly fit 14 year old boy, firing his super suits cannon at Gil, a 9 foot tan skinned creature with spikes portruding at odd angles out of his body in various places on his body. Bottom half is the normal white lettered recap we often see.

Recap: Previously, in Disc... Jeremy Adoms, your average highschool freshmen who happens to be the son of brilliant billionare scientist now branded terrorist after an explosion that caused the death of over 30, Maxwell Adoms. However, Jeremy faced off against his father's killer, the creature named Gil, who had once worked with Maxwell himself. And now...

Issue 3: Page 2: Panel 1: Kasey, a 14 year old dark skinned beauty, lays on her back on her bed phone in hand.

Kasey: Can you believe it Jeremy! Guy saves me life and turns out to be a total creep!

Issue 3: Page 2: Panel 2: Disc is outside her house in the sky looking down at Kasey's window.

Disc: I dunno, Kay... Maybe he's just someone you know.

Issue 3: Page 2: Panel 3: Kasey laughs, and rolls over.

Kasey: Who, like you?

Issue 3: Page 2: Panel 4: Disc sits on her rooftop.

Disc: And what if I am?

Issue 3: Page 2: Panel 5: Kasey frowns.

Kasey: Then I owe you a punch for making me walk home.

Issue 3: Page 2: Panel 6: Disc jumps and flys away.

Disc Thought Box: That's what she's worried about?

Issue 3: Page 3&4: Panel 1: Splash panel, Disc flying past a sky scraper. The flames of his boosters on the bottom of his feet trails out to spell "Hypercell Inc. proudly presents..." then the windows are lit up to spell "Disc"

Issue 3: Page 5: Panel 1: Jeremy, a pale brown haired 14 year old wearing a button up over a tee sitting at a school desk large textbook in hand.

Issue 3: Page 5: Panel 2: Same shot but sfx of bell ringing.

Issue 3: Page 5: Panel 3: Same shot again but now the other students are leaving.

Issue 3: Page 5: Panel 4: Jeremy closes the book, all other desks are empty.

Issue 3: Page 5 Panel 5: Jeremy finally stands up shouldering his bag.

Issue 3: Page 6: Panel 1: Kasey leans up against the door waiting for him.

Kasey: Ready yet, Geek?

Issue 3: Page 6: Panel 2: Jeremy smiles at her.

Jeremy: Anyone else and I'd have punched their face in.

Issue 3: Page 6: Panel 3: Kasey sticks her tounge out.

Kasey: Anyone else's parents wouldn't let you stay at their house while yours is under construction after that.

Issue 3: Page 6: Panel 4: Jeremy rubs his head.

Jeremy: Yeah, I don't know how to thank you for that.

Issue 3: Page 6: Panel 5: Kasey grabs his arm.

Kasey: How 'bout lunch? C'mon I'm starving.

Issue 3: Page 6: Panel 6: Zoom out to show them alone in a hallway.

Issue 3: Page 6: Panel 7: Zoom out again until you see the back of a man in a blue suit watching the two.

Ice blue thought box: He seems to be adjusting nicely.

Issue 3: Page 7: Panel 1: Figure fades away.

Issue 3: Page 7: Panel 2: Show an unmarked van.

Issue 3: Page 7: Panel 3: Two men in black suits with sunglasses sitting in front of monitors.

Issue 3: Page 7 Panel 4: Cold Case fades into view.

F.B.I. 1: Cold Case.

Issue 3: Page 7: Panel 5: Cold Case plops down on an open computer chair.

Cold Case: My talents are being wasted following this kid, Agent Hayes, I'm an assassin not babysitter.

Issue 3: Page 7: Panel 6: The agents give him a flat look.

F.B.I. 2: We don't care, does he have the suit?

Issue 3: Page 7: Panel 7: Cold case folds his arms and throws his feet up on a desk.

Cold Case: Not that I can see, Agent Burke.

Issue 3: Page 7: Panel 8: Agent Burke smiles.

Agent Burke: Then you're free to go, but we still need you to keep an eye on him.

Issue 3: Page 7: Panel 9: Cold case begins to fade away.

Cold Case: Right, "Big Brother" is always watching.

Issue 3: Page 8: Panel 1: Cold Case is watching Jeremy from a roof top through a window.

Cold Case Thought Box: Gotta love Uncle Sam...

Issue 3: Page 8: Panel 2: Zoom in on Jeremy eating lunch and laughing with friends.

Cold Case Thought Box: Asks me their top assassin, after my mother's dissapearance, to babysit this kid.

Issue 3: Page 8: Panel 3: Zoom more in on just Jeremy.

Cold Case Thought Box: Though for his sake, and me, I hope he doesn't have this "2.0 armor" they're after. I don't want to kill him...

Issue 3: Page 9: Panel 1: Jeremy suddenly looks towards Cold Case coldly.

Issue 3: Page 9: Panel 2: Cold Case's eyes widen.

Issue 3: Page 9: Panel 3: He ducks behind the ledge of the wall.

Issue 3: Page 9: Panel 4: He looks over the edge.

Cold Case Thought Box: Did he see me?

Issue 3: Page 9: Panel 5: Jeremy is back to laughing with his friends.

Cold Case Thought Box: I guess not.

Issue 3: Page 10: Panel 1: Time has past some, Cold Case's shadow has moved, but he's still on the roof.

Issue 3: Page 10: Panel 2: Same panel.

Voice: (O.P.) Ehem.

Issue 3: Page 10: Panel 3: Cold Case turns to find Disc floating by.

Disc: Can I ask why you're following that kid?

Issue 3: Page 10: Panel 4: Cold Case pulls a gun form the holster on his leg.

Cold Case: Waiting for you to show up.

Issue 3: Page 10: Panel 5: Cold case fires twice.

Issue 3: Page 11: Panel 1: The bullets bounce of Disc's chest.

Voice: (O.P.) All students and Staff, shots have been fired in the area, we are now on Lock Down. Please lock your doors until we sound the all clear.

Issue 3: Page 11: Panel 2: Disc just stands there.

Disc: Ow?

Issue 3: Page 11: Panel 3: Glimpse of Cold Case from behind Disc's HUD.

Disc: Sam? Threat level?

Issue 3: Page 11: Panel 4: Cold Case is charging Disc, still from behind HUD

Sam: Threat level: Minimum.

Issue 3: Page 12: Panel 1: Disc blocks Cold Case's punch.

Issue 3: Page 12: Panel 2: Now a kick, Cold case has his hand behind him.

Issue 3: Page 12: Panel 3: Another left jab, Disc catches the punch.

Cold Case: Heh.

Issue 3: Page 12: Panel 4: Disc's eyes narrow.

Disc: What's so funny?

Issue 3: Page 12: Panel 5: A look at Cold Case's fist reveal electrified brass knuckles.

Cold Case: Correct me if I'm wrong, but your suit-

Issue 3: Page 13: Panel 1: Splash, Disc is being elctrified.

Cold Case: Your suit is made of metalic Nanobots.

Issue 3: Page 14: Panel 1: Disc on his knees.

Cold Case: It's over Tyranous.

Issue 3: Page 14: Panel 2: Disc looks up at Cold Case.

Disc: Who?

Issue 3: Page 14: Panel 3: Cold Case knees Disc.

Cold Case: Don't play coy, Jeremy! How could you kill people, innocent people, like that!?

Issue 3: Page 14: Panel 4: Disc is pulling himself off the ground.

Disc: Again, who? And more importantly, what?

Disc Thought Box: Well there goes the dual identity Superhero idea...

Issue 3: Page 14: Panel 5: Cold Case goes to grab Disc again.

Issue 3: Page 14: Panel 6: Disc knocks his hands away.

Issue 3: Page 14: Panel 7: Disc uses boosters on the bottom of his feet to knee Cold Case.

Issue 3: Page 14: Panel 8: Cold Case slides back and into a defensive pose.

Issue 3: Page 14: Panel 9: He then charges Disc to throw a punch.

Issue 3: Page 14: Panel 10: Disc knocks it away.

Issue 3: Page 15: Panel 1: Disc headbutts Cold Case.

Issue 3: Page 15: Panel 2: Cold Case stagers backwards.

Issue 3: Page 15: Panel 3: The two are eyeing each other down.

Issue 3: Page 15: Panel 4: Same Panel

Cold Case: If you're not Jeremy Adom's then who are you?

Issue 3: Page 15: Panel 5: Zoom in on Disc.

Disc: And I would tell you that why?

Issue 3: Page 15: Panel 6: Switch to Cold Case now holding a gun.

Cold Case: To ease my burden.

Issue 3: Page 16: Panel 1: Show Jeremy Smiling beneath the helmet.

Jeremy: You tried that already.

Issue 3: Page 16: Panel 2: Cold Case cocks the gun.

Cold Case: Armor Piercing Rounds.

Issue 3: Page 16: Panel 3: Disc's eyes widen.

Issue 3: Page 16: Panel 4: Gun fires.

Issue 3: Page 16: Panel 4: Blood sprays from what looks like Disc's chest.

Issue 3: Page 17: Panel 1: Disc in on the ground, his shoulder bleeding.

Issue 3: Page 17: Panel 2: Cold Case stomps on the wound.

Cold Case: Its over Tyranous, My weapons are made to kill the 2.0.

Issue 3: Page 17: Panel 3: Jeremy's face under the mask is in pain.

Sam: Jeremy?

Issue 3: Page 17: Panel 4: Jeremy grits his teeth.

Sam: Jeremy, this suit is the 3.0.

Issue 3: Page 18: Panel 1: Disc uses the boosters to free himself.

Issue 3: Page 18: Panel 2: Gun cocks again.

Issue 3: Page 18: Panel 3: Disc hols his hands up.

Disc: Wait!

Issue 3: Page 18: Panel 4: Cold Case takes his finger off the trigger.

Issue 3: Page 18: Panel 5: Disc puts his hand to his wounded shoulder.

Disc: Sam, tell him.

Issue 3: Page 19: Panel 1: Cold Case's eye narrow in confusion.

Cold Case thought box: Sam?

Issue 3: Page 19: Panel 2: Back to Disc.

Sam: (O.P.) Good evening, Sir, I am the System's Automated Maintence for the Destruction Intervention Symbiotic Combat Armor 3.0, to my knowledge Tyranous has never run my operating systems and the 1.0 and 2.0 have never made it past first term testing.

Issue 3: Page 19: Panel 3: Cold Case puts a hand on the scarf around his nose and mouth.

Cold Case: This is just to confusing for me.

Issue 3: Page 20: Panel 1: Splash of Disc's reaction to the man behind the mask.

Disc: You?!

#2 Posted by VyseCarma (257 posts) - - Show Bio

So I take it this one did not hold up to standards or am I just flooding the market?

#3 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome!