Issue 2: Page 1: Panel 1: Black page. On top half a shot from last month of Jeremy, pale kid with brown hair and glasses, a button up shirt over a tee, walking alone at school. Bottom half, whit lettering giving a brief recap.
Recap: Previously, on Disc.Jeremy Adoms, son of brillian billionare scientist Maxwell Adoms, learned of his father's tragic end. Maxwell's ruined reputation, as he is called terrorist bt the local media, earns a target on Jeremy's head fro Freshmen Initiation day but is saved by his brother. Upon returning home Jeremy found a box on the pourch to him from his now dead father. And now...
Issue 2: Page 2: Panel 1: Panel opens to shot of Disc, black suited thin yet not to fit 14 year old with a metal mouth piece and colorless eyes, and Kasey, a dark skind beauty of the smae age, standing on the ruined rooftops again.
Kasey: Hello? Did you hear me?
Issue 2: Page 2: Panel 2: Kasey jabs her finger into Disc's symbol on his chest.
Kasey: I. Want. To. Go. Home.
Issue 2: Page 2: Panel 3: Disc just sits there, Kasey crosses her arms.
Issue 2: Page 2: Panel 4: Kasey throws her hands up.
Kasey: Fine you know what? I'll just walk.
Issue 2: Page 2: Panel 5: Disc grabs her hand.
Disc: Kasey, wait-
Issue 2: Page 3: Panel 1: Keasey give a small yelp and pulls her hand away.
Issue 2: Page 3: Panel 2: Kasey is still a little shaken, still holding her hand to her chest.
Kasey: How do you know my name?
Issue 2: Page 3: Panel 3: Disc rubbs the back of his head.
Disc: Same way I know your favorite color is pink, you love Death Cab for Cutie and loath your mother's brustlesprout caserole.
Issue 2: Page 3: Panel 4: Kasey's eyes widen with what looks like understanding.
Kasey: Omigod... You're...
Issue 2: Page 3: Panel 5: Back to Disc.
Disc Thought Box: Now she knows who I am. She knows I'm-
Issue 2: Page 3: Panel 6: Kasey slaps Disc.
Kasey: You're a creepy stalker!
Issue 2: Page 4: Panel 1: Disc recoils.
Disc: What? No, I'm-
Disc thought box: You're what? What are you going to tell her? "No, I'm your best friend?" Do I put her life in danger for my own wants?
Issue 2: Page 4: Panel 2: Black panel agains black page.
Disc Thought Box: "No I'm Jeremy Adoms."
Issue 2: Page 4: Panel 3: Splash panel of Jeremy Fighting against some sort of Black liquid. One tail of the liquid spells out "Hypercell Inc. proudly presents: DISC"
Issue 2: Page 5: Panel 1: Liquid closes in around Jeremy's face.
Issue 2: Page 5: Panel 2: Panel is all white, buzz of a computer starting.
Voice: (O.P.) Systems Automated Maintenance: Online
Issue 2: Page 5: Panel 3: Still white panel, no more buzz.
Jeremy: (O.P.) Dad?
Voice: (O.P) What? No, I am the Systems Automated Maintenance for the Destruction Intervention Symbiotic Combat Armor, or DISC Armor.
Issue 2: Page 5: Panel 4: Shot of Disc sitting in Jeremy's room.
Disc: The what?
Voice: (from inside suit, more automated than Discs) What you're wearing.
Issue 2: Page 5: Panel 5: Disc catches a glimpse of himself in the armor.
Disc: What the hell is that? No, nonono, Jericho will be home any minute, I can't be wearing this!
Issue 2: Page 6: Panel 1: Cut to Gil walking down a mainstreet, he is about 9 feet tall with spikes portruding from odd spots on his being and a long tusk coming out of his lip. People are running screaming away from him.
Disc thought box: While I was learning new things about the suit Gil was still out there.
Issue 2: Page 6: Panel 2: Gil sees his own reflection in a window and stops.
Gil thought box: Damn you Adoms. If you'd only given me the suit when I asked we could have avoided all this.
Issue 2: Page 6: Panel 3: Gil punches window.
Issue 2: Page 6: Panel 4: He goes for a car.
Issue 2: Page 6: Panel 5: He tosses the car like paper.
Issue 2: Page 6: Panel 6: Then goes for a tree, swining it at a lamp post like a baseball bat.
Issue 2: Page 6: Panel 7: Gil drops the tree and looks at his spiked hands.
Gil thought box: He ruined me.
Issue 2: Page 6: Panel 8: Flash of photo of Maxwell, Lisa, Jericho, and Jeremy Adoms on a desk.
Issue 2: Page 6: Panel 9: Gil smiles.
Gil: So I go after your sons.
Issue 2: Page 7: Panel 1: Disc is sitin on the roof of his two story home.
Disc: So, Sam- Mind if I call you Sam?
Sam: Yes, my name is the Syst-
Disc: So, Sam, I was thinking, can you please do another voice?
Sam: Another voice?
Issue 2: Page 7: Panel 2: Disc looks as if he's trying not to hurt Sam's feelings.
Disc: Yeah, that's kind of, you know, my dad's voice. Do you have a default or something?
Issue 2: Page 7: Panel 3: Disc looks comfortable again.
Disc: Little robotic and artifical, but yes, better. So this suit was made for "Major threats?"
Issue 2: Page 7: Panel 4: Disc stands up.
Sam: Yes, the military asked your father to-
Disc: You told me. But, just for the hell of it, show me one?
Issue 2: Page 8: Panel 1: Spalsh panel HUD View of Gil, jumping their way.
Sam: Threat Level: Major. Class: 3 threat.
Issue 2: Page 9: Panel 1: Shot of Disc recoiling in terror,
Disc: What the $%&* is that?
Issue 2: Page 9: Panel 2: Gil crashes down atop Disc.
Gil: Who the hell are you?
Issue 2: Page 9: Panel 3: Disc crashes through the ceiling and the second floor and on to the couch, which breaks underneath him.
Disc thought box: That should hurt but I didn't feel a thing.
Issue 2: Page 9: Panel 4: Disc stands up.
Disc: Funny, I could ask you the same thing.
Issue 2: Page 9: Panel 5: Gil chuckles.
Gil: I'll enjoy killing you.
Issue 2: Page 9: Panel 6: Gil jumps down at Disc.
Issue 2: Page 9: Panel 7: Disc rolls away.
Issue 2: Page 10: Panel 1: Gil grabs Disc's leg.
Issue 2: Page 10: Panel 2: He throws Disc into Jeremy's room.
Issue 2: Page 10: Panel 3: Disc sits up and looks at the, now pile of trash behind him.
Issue 2: Page 10: Panel 4: Disc leaps up.
Disc: Aw, man, My guitar!
Issue 2: Page 11: Panel 1: Gil is at the hole he made behind hind Dics.
Gil: So you're his brat. Good, give me the suit boy, or I'll kill you too.
Issue 2: Page 11: Panel 2: Disc whirls around.
Disc: What did you say?
Issue 2: Page 11: Panel 3: Gil holds out his hand.
Gil: Give me the suit or I kill you like I killed your father.
Issue 2: Page 12 & 13: Panel 1: Splash panel, Disc on 13 using boosters on the bottom of his feet to throw a very powerful punch. Gil reeling on 12.
Disc: WRONG ANSWER!
Issue 2: Page 14: Panel 1: Gil rubs his jaw.
Gil: For a snot nosed brat, you pack a punch, I may still have to kill you.
Issue 2: Page 14: Panel 2: Disc in defensive stance
Disc:I'm not sure if I should thank you for complement or pound your face in more. Oh, wait-
Issue 2: Page 14: Panel 3: Disc uses the boosters to launch himself higher for another blow.
Disc. I AM!
Issue 2: Page 15: Panel 1: Gil catches the fist
Gil: Not this time, boy.
Issue 2: Page 15: Panel 2: Gil slam Disc into the ground.
Issue 2: Page 15: Panel 3: Shot of Gil bringing his knee into Disc's mouth piece.
Issue 2: Page 15: Panel 4: The monster-man grabs the boy's shoulder and tosses him forward.
Issue 2: Page 16: Panel 1: Disc goes skidding across the road.
Disc thought box: That-
Issue 2: Page 16: Panel 2: The young hero hits a tree and comes to a stop
Disc thoght box: -I felt.
Issue 2: Page 16: Panel 3: Disc is pulling himself up slowly.
Sam: Yes, Jeremy?
Issue 2: Page 16: Panel 4: A look inside the suit reveals Jeremy's nose in bleeding and cheek is bruising.
Jeremy: Any weapons in here?
Sam: Yes, but I'd have to divert the nonobots holding your armor together-
Disc: Just do it.
Issue 2: Page 17: Panel 1: Splash, Disc is grabbing his left arm, which is now a connon, as if to hold it up. What seems to be wires are flowin from his shoulder, elb, and bicepts into his wrist.
Issue 2: Page 18: Panel 1: Gil is bullrushing towards Disc.
Issue 2: Page 18: Panel 2: The cannon fires.
Issue 2: Page 18: Panel 3: Gil is knocked from his feet as the blast hits his chest.
Issue 2: Page 18: Panel 4: The cannon shuts off abruptyl kind of shot of it turning back into a liquid and flowing back into the suit.
Sam: Armor power at 10.3%
Issue 2: Page 19: Panel 1: Gil is holding his chest, blood seeping through his fingers.
Gil: I'll be back for the suit, boy.
Issue 2: Page 19: Panel 2: Gil jumps away.
Issue 2: Page 19: Panel 3: The armor shuts off.
Jeremy: Yeah well, good riddance.
Issue 2: Page 20: Panel 1: Jericho pulls into the driveway.
Issue 2: Page 20: Panel 2: He gets out of the car holding his head.
Jericho: Oh, what the...
Issue 2: Page 20: Panel 3: Jeremy strolls up behind Jericho.
Jeremy: Um, Jericho...
Issue 2: Page 20: Panel 4: Shot of the ruined house.
Jeremy: What happened to our house?
Issue 2: Page 20: Panel 5: (after a bit of a gap) Show Gil in an alleyway.
Issue 2: Page 20: Panel 6: He coughs up blood.
Issue 2: Page 21: Panel 1: Shot of the wound, its healing nicely.
Issue 2: Page 21: Panel 2: Gil slumps against a wall.
Issue 2: Page 21: Panel 3: There is something stuck to his foot.
Issue 2: Page 21: Panel 4: He pulls it away.
Issue 2: Page 21: Panel 5: He begins to laugh.
Issue 2: Page 21: Panel 6: Zoom in on the bloodstained picture of Jeremy with his arm around Kasey's shoulder.
Gil: (O.P.) Soon, child, soon.
Again, Disc is my own idea. Please leave a constructive comment I would like to see what you think.