#1 Edited by RulerOfThisUniverse (6517 posts) - - Show Bio

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#2 Posted by Legendary_StarHero (19455 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice work.

#3 Posted by RulerOfThisUniverse (6517 posts) - - Show Bio
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#5 Posted by MaccyD (6373 posts) - - Show Bio

Great work! Loved Victor's perspective of Batman1

#6 Edited by RulerOfThisUniverse (6517 posts) - - Show Bio

@maccyd: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it :)

#7 Posted by _Braveheart_ (2417 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice work man! I love it.

#8 Posted by RulerOfThisUniverse (6517 posts) - - Show Bio
#9 Posted by TommytheHitman (4237 posts) - - Show Bio

Really great job! However can I suggest that you include a picture every now and then? It helps break down the story and stops it from looking like massive walls of text.

#10 Posted by RulerOfThisUniverse (6517 posts) - - Show Bio

@tommythehitman: Thanks so much! Unfortunately, I'm writing all this on an iPad, so it doesn't allow me to post pictures in any post. It really can suck sometimes...

#11 Posted by NlGHTCRAWLER (2894 posts) - - Show Bio

I don't think you need pictures!

Thank you for writing an enjoyable story about one of my favorite characters! I like to read while I eat/drink so I had to choose wisely what to read and lo and behold there's something about the Question here! Thanks again dude!

#12 Posted by RulerOfThisUniverse (6517 posts) - - Show Bio
#13 Edited by cbishop (9400 posts) - - Show Bio

I'm curious to see how this version of The Question turns out. Nice job tying the various mob bosses together. They don't get enough attention in the Bat-verse.

#14 Posted by RulerOfThisUniverse (6517 posts) - - Show Bio

@cbishop: Thanks! Glad that you noticed that, I admittedly spent quite a bit of time searching through the wikis for those characters and their connections. Especially the part were Donald Campbell says the he "hates that guy" to Franco Bertinelli... If you know either of those characters, you know that's going to turn into a massive plot point later on :)

#15 Posted by cbishop (9400 posts) - - Show Bio

@rulerofthisuniverse: I'm not familiar with that particular point, but I figured you'd be coming back to it. :)

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#17 Posted by RulerOfThisUniverse (6517 posts) - - Show Bio

@wolverine08: Thanks bro, I thought you'd like it. :D Hope you tune in for the next issue, I have big plans for this.

#18 Posted by RulerOfThisUniverse (6517 posts) - - Show Bio

Bump :)

#19 Posted by wbr17 (1275 posts) - - Show Bio

I really like it, interesting twist in his secret identity and origin. I like your writing as well.

#20 Edited by RulerOfThisUniverse (6517 posts) - - Show Bio

@wbr17: Thanks so much! Glad to hear it :)

#21 Posted by TheManInTheShoe (3996 posts) - - Show Bio

@rulerofthisuniverse: Wow, man. I'm late but this is so good. You have really improved your dialogue!

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#24 Posted by Legendary_StarHero (19455 posts) - - Show Bio
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