#1 Edited by TommytheHitman (2897 posts) - - Show Bio

Rated M

FASTER THEN LIGHTNING PART 1

We see a birds eye view of Keystone City at night time. The city's lit up brightly like New York City.

Caption: Keystone City, 11:52PM, Yesterday.

In the main town centre we see fire fighters shouting as they try to put out a massive fire on the building.

Fire-fighter: THERE'S STILL PEOPLE IN THERE! WE NEED TO GET IN THERE!

The Fire Fighter runs towards the door while in the background somebody inside of the burning building leans out of the window.

Fire-fighter: SCREW IT I'M GOING IN THERE!

Person: Look!

In a split screen of two events happening at once we see an explosion happening inside of the building knocking the person out of the window while on the other half debris starts to fall towards the Fire-fighter.

SFX: POOM!

Person: GAH!

SFX: KRACK!!

Fire-fighter: Sh!t.

Suddenly Jay Garrick appears at super speed catching the person as they fall out of the window and pushes the fire-fighter out of the way of the debris. He's running at super speed so all we see is that weird colour blur thing behind him.

Caption: Half a second later.

The Fire-fighter is knocked to the ground knocking his helmet off and causing him to hit the back of his head on the ground.

Fire-fighter: "UFF!"

The fire-fighter lifts his hand as we see Jay offering to help him up.

Jay: Sorry about that officer, just leave this to me...

A massive page showing Jay in his full classic costume which has been slightly tweaked to look more modern. How you ask? Use your imagination! In the background people take pictures with their phones while a fire-fighter carrying an axe sneaks up behind him.

Jay: I'll have those people out in a Flash!

(I'm honestly so sorry for that line right there but I guess that most people have done something like that once or twice. Liefeld) Jay quickly dodges out of the way as one of the fire-fighters tries to swipe him with their axe.

Jay: WOAH!

Fire-fighter: Get out of here super freak!

Jay runs into the building at super speed while the two fire-fighters look angrily at each other as they argue.

Jay: GOTTAGOLIVESTOSAVEASSESTOKICK!!!!

Fire-fighter: He just saved me!

Fire-fighter: He's one of those vigilantes. They're just as bad as those guys they fight all the time!

We see Jay running round multiple corners of the burning building, he runs over the areas of fire as he's moving too fast for them to harm him.

SFX: WOOSH!

Jay runs past a doorway but keeps running.

Jay: WAIT!

Jay leans his head across the door looking inside of the room.

Jay: Oh...

Jay lowers his head as he sees several dead bodies badly burnt.

Jay: God.

Jay raises his head looking really Pis$ed off.

Jay: ...

We see Heat Wave stood in a room surrounded by fire he's entranced as he watches the flames flicker around him.

Heat Wave: So.. beautiful.

Heat Wave turns his head towards the door way as he hears Jay running towards him.

Jay: YOU BA$TERD!!

Heat Wave: Huh?

Jay punches Heat Wave in the face knocking off his mask.

Heat Wave: MMPHFF!!

Jay stands over Heat Wave practically screaming at him.

Jay: WHY DID YOU DO IT?! PEOPLE DIED!

Heat Wave raises his microwave gun at Jay who doesn't even flinch.

Heat Wave: It's a hobby. You're that Flash dude right? Been in Keystone for a while now haven't you? Even longer if the rumours are right. Faster then lightning isn't going to help you with a gun pressed up to your chest!

Heat Wave fires the microwave gun at Jay which passes right through his chest as he vibrates at super speed.

Heat Wave: God damn it.

Jay: YOUDIDN'TTHINKITWOULDBETHATEASYDIDYOU?!

Heat Wave frowns as he pulls out a bomb trigger and presses it.

Heat Wave: I'M NOT GOING BACK TO IRON HEIGHTS! IF I'M GOING OUT I'M TAKING YOU WITH ME!

Jay smirks (That's it)

Jay: Right...

The building explodes as Jay while carrying Heat Wave jump out of the window.

SFX: KABOOM!!

Heat Wave: YOU IDIOT! WE'RE GOING TO DIE ANYWAY!

Jay rolls his eyes as his legs start to do that weird tornado thing that The Flash sometimes does slowing their descent.

Jay: jerk.

Jay watches as some police put Heat Wave into the back of a car. He notices how everyone nearby is nervous and staring at him.

Jay: Uh. Okay you're welcome for me saving you all! I'm sorry about anything you guys have lost and sorry I couldn't be here sooner, there was a problem on the other side of the city.

Jay notices a cop walking towards him who starts to pull out a Taser.

Jay: Oh, crap. I'm not in the mood to do this for the 3rd night in a row.

Everyone looks surprised as Jay zooms away.

Jay: THANKYOULADIESANDGENTLEMENI'MHEREALLWEEKEND!

from a birds eye view we see Jay zooming through the city streets towards his apartment.

No Dialogue.

Jay zooms in through his apartment building's door and zooms up the stairs narrowly missing an old woman who doesn't even notice him.

Old Woman: Oh my! Quite cold out there tonight!

His apartment door quickly opens as Jay sits down in his armchair in normal clothing.

Jay: Home sweet low rent apartment!

?: Nice moves...

Jay sits up suddenly in his armchair looking to his left and right at once.

Jay: Who's there?!

?: Imposter.

Jay suddenly appears in his Flash costume while we see a certain red lightning bolt appear behind him.

Jay: I don't know who you are but my friend you're in for a world of-

?: Yes you are quite skilled.

Jay turns in terror as we see ?'s hands reaching for him.

?: However your no Barry Allen.

Jay: Wha-?!

Outside the apartment building we see normal people walking by as Jay's apartment window suddenly lights up.

Jay: GGAAAHHH!!!!

To be continued...

Okay so this wasn't really much of a set up I know but hey it got to show off what a person with Flash powers can do after several years of training! Also the main villain isn't very hard to guess unless you've not read a Flash comic in your life. Okay so be sure to check out the rest of DC Re-Imagined and tell me what you thought in the comments below!

http://www.comicvine.com/forums/fan-fic/8/dc-re-imagined-revived-library/752564/#17

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#2 Posted by ekrolo (431 posts) - - Show Bio

So Jay is not the orginal Flash here.... Or is he?! DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!!!!!!

#3 Posted by TommytheHitman (2897 posts) - - Show Bio

@ekrolo: No Jay's still the original Flash it'll be explained soon.

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#4 Posted by GR2Blackout (2564 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome.

#5 Posted by dngn4774 (2787 posts) - - Show Bio

Unorthodox but interesting.

#6 Posted by TommytheHitman (2897 posts) - - Show Bio
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#7 Posted by BlackReaper (595 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice. Did you intentionally write it like a screenplay, or did it just come out that way?

#8 Posted by TommytheHitman (2897 posts) - - Show Bio

@blackreaper: Yeah it started as script. Although I've started to write like everyone else now!

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#9 Posted by TommytheHitman (2897 posts) - - Show Bio
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#10 Edited by MaccyD (3567 posts) - - Show Bio

@tommythehitman: 1. Is it meant to be blank or it the bug?

2. Whhhhhaaaaa? I don't know how to react tbh. :P

Weird, how I wasn't told about this by someone when I announced I was writing Flash :/

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#12 Posted by MaccyD (3567 posts) - - Show Bio

@tommythehitman: You comment, not the story, don't hulk out on me, now. :P

#13 Posted by wbr17 (176 posts) - - Show Bio

@maccyd just in case... this was another group, it isn't related to reinvented... that's why no one told you

#14 Edited by MaccyD (3567 posts) - - Show Bio

@wbr17: Goddamn tiredness, always read the two group names wrong! (storms off to have a sleepy hissy fit).

#15 Posted by cbishop (7193 posts) - - Show Bio

I'm not a fan of script format, but I should try it, just as an exercise, but it's a decent start to the story. Definitely not used to seeing police and firemen reacting negatively towards a Flash though.