Yeah, first issue of DC Re-Imagined: Green Lantern. Please read and give thoughts below. Constructive criticism only please.
DC Re-Imagined: Green Lantern #1
Green Lantern Hal Jordan is in space fighting an unseen enemy. His costume is torn, his ring is almost out of power, he is bleeding in several places, has a cracked skull, and his arm is broken.
“I don’t care how many of us you’ve murdered or what your plans are, I will stop you here and now.” said Hal.
“Your ring is almost out of power, your skull is cracked, and you are bleeding to death. Even if I cannot stop you, you will soon die anyway.” said the man, “But it does not matter. I will end your existence now, Jordan.”
The man creates a green, glowing sword made out of energy, and cuts Hal Jordan’s head off. Hal’s ring then flies off his hand.
<Lantern Corps member 2814 deceased>
In Las Angeles California.
A bald, black man wearing sunglasses is sitting in a bar. He has a mug of beer in his hand and is wearing a trench coat. A waitress walks up to him.
“Excuse me,” said the waitress, “do I recognize you from somewhere?”
“I don’t think so.” said the man “My name’s John. John Stewart.”
“I do know you. You’re that social activist person I’ve heard about.”
Suddenly, a man pulls out a gun and points it at the cashier.
“Give me the money or I’ll shoot!” the man says.
Johns gets up and quickly punches the man in the mouth. He grabs the gun out of the man’s hand and places it on the counter. He then uppercuts the man then repeatedly punches the man in the gut. John punches him the nose, causing the man to fall to the floor and have blood pour out of his nose.
“Get the Hell out of here you son of a b*tch.” John says.
“Thank you.” says the waitress. “Where did you learn to fight like that?
“US Military.” says John.
“I had no idea you were in the Military. Why aren’t you fighting in the war going on right now?”
“I... had a bad day.”
John takes money out of his pocket and puts it on the counter.
“Look, I have to get going. Here’s the bill and keep the change.”
“Thank you sir. Y’all come back real soon.”
John goes to walk towards the bus stop and the end of the block, and sees a bus there. He attempts to run to the bus, but it takes off before he gets there.
“Ugh. That was the last one for the next hour. Guess I could walk.”
Suddenly, a green ring flies towards John.
<John Stewart of Earth. You have great will power>
“What the Hell?” John said to himself.
The ring then flies onto his finger, and gives him a green and black costume.
<Welcome to the Green Lantern Corps>
To be continued...