#1 Posted by TDK_1997 (13670 posts) - - Show Bio

Chapter Two:

"Well,this is it.I now have the coordinates of the Jokers but I still ain't ready to go there and just starting to fight them.No!I will die.And that is now my purpose.I have to rebuild the Batcave.For the last time it will be working for me and I hope not to die."

The darkness goes away with him lighting the place up again.It's destroyed.It has almost nothing left of it.The giant T-Rex is on the floor in pieces and as for the giant coin,well , it's in two pieces.So much for the legendary Batcave.

"This is what is left of from the Wayne legacy.Nothing.The night Bruce Wayne shot himself in front of Damian was the scariest night for Gotham.All of Batman's villains had gathered themselves to kill the bat.Well he killed himself.After that they killed Damian and Alfred.Bruce Wayne was driven crazy and surrendered by killing himself.Joker,Two-Face,Riddler,Penguin,Mad Hatter : all of them drove him crazy."

His monologue ended because now he had to turn on the Bat Computer.It still had the blood from Bruce Wayne's head.When the computer started,a video started.It was the video that the Joker filmed the night the true Batman died.

After the video ended,Mitchell was terrified and said only "What did they do to him that night?Those monsters."Only from his face you could see that the video wasn't pretty and that something like this was expecting him when he goes against the Jokers.

"I'll need help.", said Mitchell and turned off the computer.

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#2 Posted by primepower53 (5686 posts) - - Show Bio

great chapter!

#3 Posted by batkevin74 (9727 posts) - - Show Bio

@TDK_1997: Nice but once again spacing! It needs an edit man, there's even an edit button which you can space it to a normal readable piece. I like the direction your Batman is going but it at times it is hard to read and it frustrates me!

#4 Posted by The Poet (8193 posts) - - Show Bio

Look forward to seeing where you are going with this story :)

@batkevin74 said:

@TDK_1997: Nice but once again spacing! It needs an edit man, there's even an edit button which you can space it to a normal readable piece. I like the direction your Batman is going but it at times it is hard to read and it frustrates me!

Admittably, I must agree with Batkevin...

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#5 Posted by TheCannon (16061 posts) - - Show Bio

I just finished this series. It was amazing.