So does it affect me being able to enter the comp if I won't be here next week? If so... damn.
Character Creation Contest #10
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I will, I promise end my entry with a pie to the face.
If you manage to end the entry with a pie to the face and fit in the catchphrase "You stay classy San Diego" anywhere in your story, then buddy you got your first vote.
As long as we're voting on the merits of the story. o.O
Holy cow.
I loved this story! Had me laughing a few times, really mesmerized in others and teary for the robot character. Why do us humans fall in love with emotionless machines??! (which I did by the way.)
Well done!
talent is just a shortcut. makes things easier. training and practice can get you anywhere that talent can, and even further. look at me, im not the greatest writer ever, but i at least hope to be good at it. and i try to train myself to be better at it. talent will get you there quicker, but training can get you further.
yay! motivational! dont do drugs kids! unless the cool kids are doing them! man, dont you want to be like the cool kids!
Awh -- thank you! I just need to get back into the swing of things and get used to writing again. :)
@fuchsia_nightingale: I know right! Gonna have to capture Lyko and force her to write in this contest if that is true 0-0
>_>
Nah, I was... I am just sleepy and thought I used to write... Silly, dreamy me.
<_<
Wah? Did I say that? Gosh darnit, I need to be more alert...
@lykopis: Awww pats the sleepie
@lykopis: Awww pats the sleepie
**purrs**
@lykopis: makes sleep time tea
**gives juice-sweetened cookies in exchange**
@pyrogram: Not if I find you first. Unless we meet half way in Wales.
@lykopis: Gives you lemon squares in return
Hey, at least we'll be Ms. Boo's problem. The Welsh won't see us coming!
**nom nom nom** Oh, and I will eat the lemon square too. (heh heh)
@lykopis: :O
;) hehe
@lykopis: Don't worry I'm going to republish it as a oneshot after the contest is over. You won't get all of the answers that you're looking for but it will be polished and have more clarity. The reason I didn't do that here was because the word limit was well...limiting on the amount of ground that I wanted to cover with this.
@pyrogram Here's my story! (I actually finished 2 days ago) My story merits a bit of explaination because it's very pessimistic, confusing and difficult to write because of my selection of my writing form.) So there's the omniscient narrator who's personification of negative thoughts of the protagonist and the pronoun it's talking about is the pro. (Also since the voting board requires a name, the person can be referred as the Lost Shephard.)
Any questions on the story is fine but I choose to have some details ambiguous. Enjoy!
You’re teetering on the metal ledge now, your hands pointed towards the hell you’re sure to arrive at, your mind filled with flashing memories taunting your fallibility, a sweet scent of guilt clinging onto your every piece of skin.
Ahh, yes the armour. The one that you vowed a devil’s covenant to possess. How does it feel donning it with that dagger to slowly spill that cherry liquid out of that man in front of his son? You just laughed in front of that boy, a hearty one, while he silently whimpered on his father’s dead corpse.
You care now right? After 238 murders in 5 years, cheating on her and running away from it all. You ass.
You see that black swarming cloud that is blocking your light. You hear their cries but what is the thing you’re really listening to? Alas “The raven quoth, ‘Nevermore.’” The forecoming death omen.
Now’s the moment. What are you waiting for? Jump. Jump! Just do it as you have nothing to live for, no one that will care an effing bit about your existence and how life is a living hell and vice versa.
Make a last wish. So you wish to check out what the far flickering lights are. You won’t see this world anyways.
That can’t be. No. No, no, no. You can’t change your mind. You have to do it. You’re not worth redemption with that much blood on your hands, with your only sacrifice for those are your life. What! You have no right to live. You can’t shut me out of your mind for I’m you and you will never escape yourself.
Oh no -- not her, I did! lol
Give me another story with Serial No ---2309847204752-85 and I'll think about it...
Just kidding -- how can I be upset with an author? Impossible! :P
The odds were HIGH --- we are talking about the Bumpster here ---
There will be no sleeping -- we'll use it as a place to get changed then back to the wilds of Wales!
Cymru am byth!
That is AWESOME!
Peter Parker!
An alternative version of the ongoing Spider-Man!
His suit is woth brighter colours and the black is replaced with blue!.....he isnt as brutal as the normal Spider-man (Doc Ock) and he has a good sence of wit when fighting bad guys!
Thats a quick drawing...
(you realise the sarcastic tone of the post,do you?!)
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