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#101 Edited by TommytheHitman (2894 posts) - - Show Bio

So does it affect me being able to enter the comp if I won't be here next week? If so... damn.

#102 Posted by cbishop (7159 posts) - - Show Bio

@dngn4774 said:

@anthony_stark said:

I will, I promise end my entry with a pie to the face.

If you manage to end the entry with a pie to the face and fit in the catchphrase "You stay classy San Diego" anywhere in your story, then buddy you got your first vote.

As long as we're voting on the merits of the story. o.O

#103 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio

@kfhrfdu_89_76k:

Holy cow.

I loved this story! Had me laughing a few times, really mesmerized in others and teary for the robot character. Why do us humans fall in love with emotionless machines??! (which I did by the way.)

Well done!

@lykopis said:

@pyrogram:

Difference being

you=talent

me=none.

:)

talent is just a shortcut. makes things easier. training and practice can get you anywhere that talent can, and even further. look at me, im not the greatest writer ever, but i at least hope to be good at it. and i try to train myself to be better at it. talent will get you there quicker, but training can get you further.

yay! motivational! dont do drugs kids! unless the cool kids are doing them! man, dont you want to be like the cool kids!

Awh -- thank you! I just need to get back into the swing of things and get used to writing again. :)

#104 Posted by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio
#105 Posted by Fuchsia_Nightingale (10180 posts) - - Show Bio
#106 Posted by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio

@fuchsia_nightingale: I know right! Gonna have to capture Lyko and force her to write in this contest if that is true 0-0

#107 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio

@irishlad:

Oh wow. Your story is fantastic. I am loving the ambiguity of your character.

#108 Posted by Fuchsia_Nightingale (10180 posts) - - Show Bio
#109 Posted by Myrmidon_ (5081 posts) - - Show Bio
#110 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio

@fuchsia_nightingale:

>_>

Nah, I was... I am just sleepy and thought I used to write... Silly, dreamy me.

@pyrogram said:

@lykopis: You used to write? no way!

<_<

Wah? Did I say that? Gosh darnit, I need to be more alert...

#111 Posted by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis: I'll catch you, and make you write. Promise.

#112 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio

@dngn4774:

See, now stories like yours make me sometimes wish I didn't read them, lol --- I need to know what happened to your guy!!! You're going to continue this, right? Right??! O_O

#113 Posted by Fuchsia_Nightingale (10180 posts) - - Show Bio
#114 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio

@pyrogram said:

@lykopis: I'll catch you, and make you write. Promise.

Yeah, yeah. Catch, smatch, you are a man of words - not of action!

#115 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio
#116 Posted by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis: Nope. I promised. Gona find you soon.

#117 Posted by Fuchsia_Nightingale (10180 posts) - - Show Bio
#118 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio
#119 Posted by Fuchsia_Nightingale (10180 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis: Gives you lemon squares in return

#120 Posted by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis: We may knock heads in Wales actually, you are right. Drat! Plan foiled again!

#121 Edited by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio

@pyrogram:

Hey, at least we'll be Ms. Boo's problem. The Welsh won't see us coming!

@fuchsia_nightingale:

**nom nom nom** Oh, and I will eat the lemon square too. (heh heh)

#122 Posted by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio
#123 Edited by Fuchsia_Nightingale (10180 posts) - - Show Bio
#124 Posted by dngn4774 (2782 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis: Don't worry I'm going to republish it as a oneshot after the contest is over. You won't get all of the answers that you're looking for but it will be polished and have more clarity. The reason I didn't do that here was because the word limit was well...limiting on the amount of ground that I wanted to cover with this.

#125 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio
#126 Posted by dngn4774 (2782 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis: I hate to jump on this band wagon again but why don't you write something? You seem like a natural for it, and almost half of your long comments read out like poetry to me.

#127 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio

@dngn4774:

If they do, it's due to the writing that inspires them.

#128 Edited by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis said:

@dngn4774:

If they do, it's due to the writing that inspires them.

Oh my god, Enough of the humbleness woman! 0___0

#129 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio
#130 Posted by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis: I'ma start slapping something -_-

#131 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio

@pyrogram:

Head over to the Hot Man Meat thread -- lots of slappage to be had there.

#132 Posted by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio
#133 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio
#134 Edited by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis: You just wanted an excuse to say slappage :P

#135 Posted by Allie_Ho (151 posts) - - Show Bio

@pyrogram Here's my story! (I actually finished 2 days ago) My story merits a bit of explaination because it's very pessimistic, confusing and difficult to write because of my selection of my writing form.) So there's the omniscient narrator who's personification of negative thoughts of the protagonist and the pronoun it's talking about is the pro. (Also since the voting board requires a name, the person can be referred as the Lost Shephard.)

Any questions on the story is fine but I choose to have some details ambiguous. Enjoy!

You’re teetering on the metal ledge now, your hands pointed towards the hell you’re sure to arrive at, your mind filled with flashing memories taunting your fallibility, a sweet scent of guilt clinging onto your every piece of skin.

Ahh, yes the armour. The one that you vowed a devil’s covenant to possess. How does it feel donning it with that dagger to slowly spill that cherry liquid out of that man in front of his son? You just laughed in front of that boy, a hearty one, while he silently whimpered on his father’s dead corpse.

You care now right? After 238 murders in 5 years, cheating on her and running away from it all. You ass.

You see that black swarming cloud that is blocking your light. You hear their cries but what is the thing you’re really listening to? Alas “The raven quoth, ‘Nevermore.’” The forecoming death omen.

Now’s the moment. What are you waiting for? Jump. Jump! Just do it as you have nothing to live for, no one that will care an effing bit about your existence and how life is a living hell and vice versa.

Make a last wish. So you wish to check out what the far flickering lights are. You won’t see this world anyways.

That can’t be. No. No, no, no. You can’t change your mind. You have to do it. You’re not worth redemption with that much blood on your hands, with your only sacrifice for those are your life. What! You have no right to live. You can’t shut me out of your mind for I’m you and you will never escape yourself.

#136 Posted by kfhrfdu_89_76k (3712 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis said:

@kfhrfdu_89_76k:

Holy cow.

I loved this story! Had me laughing a few times, really mesmerized in others and teary for the robot character. Why do us humans fall in love with emotionless machines??! (which I did by the way.)

Well done!

Thank you very much indeed!

Fall in love? She didn`t fall in love with Serial nro. Not romantically.

#137 Edited by kfhrfdu_89_76k (3712 posts) - - Show Bio

@dngn4774:

Yours is my faf one of all of these. So far, at least.

#138 Edited by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio
#139 Posted by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio

7 days left people!

#140 Posted by kfhrfdu_89_76k (3712 posts) - - Show Bio

@pyrogram:The tension is killing me!

@lykopis:

Oh, I`m so sorry! Please forgive me! = (

#141 Posted by BumpyBoo (7676 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis said:

@pyrogram:

Hey, at least we'll be Ms. Boo's problem. The Welsh won't see us coming!

They just did!!! :O

*prepares the guest room*

<3

#142 Posted by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio
#143 Edited by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio

@kfhrfdu_89_76k:

Give me another story with Serial No ---2309847204752-85 and I'll think about it...

Just kidding -- how can I be upset with an author? Impossible! :P

#144 Posted by Pyrogram (35143 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis said:

Just kidding -- how can I be upset with an author? Impossible! :P

Wait till you see my Punisher Fic :P

#145 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio

@pyrogram said:

@lykopis - WE BEEN SEEEN!

The odds were HIGH --- we are talking about the Bumpster here ---

@bumpyboo said:

@lykopis said:

@pyrogram:

Hey, at least we'll be Ms. Boo's problem. The Welsh won't see us coming!

They just did!!! :O

*prepares the guest room*

<3

There will be no sleeping -- we'll use it as a place to get changed then back to the wilds of Wales!

Cymru am byth!

#146 Posted by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio

@pyrogram said:

@lykopis said:

Just kidding -- how can I be upset with an author? Impossible! :P

Wait till you see my Punisher Fic :P

I can hardly wait. You better @ me when you post it!

#147 Posted by BumpyBoo (7676 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis:

In that case....

*grabs sleeping bags and puts on ACTION PANTS*

Let's get going!!! I'll bring my dragon, you just bring your awesome self! And maybe pie O_O

#148 Posted by kfhrfdu_89_76k (3712 posts) - - Show Bio

@lykopis:

Guess what...I might be interested in continuing his story...

#149 Edited by lykopis (10756 posts) - - Show Bio
#150 Posted by PunyParker (8986 posts) - - Show Bio

Peter Parker!

An alternative version of the ongoing Spider-Man!
His suit is woth brighter colours and the black is replaced with blue!.....he isnt as brutal as the normal Spider-man (Doc Ock) and he has a good sence of wit when fighting bad guys!

Thats a quick drawing...

(you realise the sarcastic tone of the post,do you?!)