We're done! Finally done! I can't see myself doing something like this again but I enjoyed doing it none the less. I'd guess that from part to part the story is very clunky and even from paragraph to paragraph there's a clear lack of stuff not belonging.
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It might not be power and knowledge that corrupts everyone. What if everyone was already corrupt? What if we were just all patiently waiting for an opportunity to stick a knife in whosever backs we could? While this is a rather cynical viewpoint and almost certainly isn’t true it may hold true for a particular group of people. People just like Bill, maybe Bill was the type of person to push you down a flight of stairs, maybe he wasn’t. He was just an average fellow before all of this after all, could knowing everything really make him evil? I mean, what makes evil? Given the chance and not knowing everything would Bill have done dubious things? Would he of maybe beaten a girlfriend? Gotten involved with a hit and run? It may be pointless to wonder if Bill was always a bad person because as well all know now, he’s a horrible person now. What did happen to him though?
Year Six A.
This was the year were Bill really started to set himself from everyone, on earth. He gave up on trying not raise attention or even not using all the knowledge he had, he wanted to show off now. He got bored, maybe even lazy with this. He had ten more years and he was beginning work up plans to have some fun on a much wider scale, deciding that he didn’t really want to relive his life. It wasn’t worth it, he only had so much more time and he decided that there was no point in doing what he was when he could be getting everything. Live all of his dreams, but what about the nightmares? Would the dreams being lived out somehow bring those out? Would he be wasting even more of his time with this? Was there even a point in any of this? The world was doomed from this point on, he crushed every political power and made hell on earth. Earthquakes and widespread famine became common occurrences, vile beasts that would swoop down and tear people in half. He sat on a throne in Tihiti watching it go down, with a smile on his face. He had a fun next ten years, watching chaos insue just for the fun of it.
Year Six B.
It was at year six that even when he knew it all that he realized all what he did. He was sitting in his room in a foreign house because he was getting moved from house to house in the foster care system of Kentucky. It just dawned on him that he was the reason his father was in jail, the reason his mother was dead and the reasons that not everything in the world was alright. He cried, and he cried. Bill did everything wrong, he let the small things get to him and he didn’t, and wouldn’t accomplish anything, unless he turned his life around right then, so he did. He used his knowledge to skip grades and become a prodigy in every level. With the proper equipment he won nobel prizes with the scientific advances he achieved effortlessly. He always felt rather empty until he died but he helped and he stopped being king smiling.
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