ASPECT: Wonder Woman Pt. 5 (FINAL)

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Laid upon the great precipice of death, Sara’s eyes stayed, unmoved on the broken and bloodied form of her daughter. Tears flowed in a constant stream from her eyes, yet no sound came from her lips, so deep ran her sorrows. Beneath her own body, Sara felt the life flow from her in a deep red pool and it was there, in that moment of unbroken darkness that she felt the touch upon her face. It kissed her skin like sunlight, before fingers grew from the sensation, stroking her cheek and heralding a voice that filled her mind like water rushing into her lungs.

“I am sorry, my child.” It spoke, “I am so sorry for the burden I have placed upon you.”

Gaea cradled Sara’s broken body within her arms and lifted her from the earth as if she were a column of air. The Goddess turned her form and carried Sara away, her bloodied arms summoning the strength to reach back, her heart screaming a thousand torments, desperate for life to flow through her daughter, for such a terrible occurrence to be undone.

“…please…” She wheezed through bloodied lungs, “… my daughter… please…”

Gaea paused a moment and looked back.

“I cannot give you what you desire. Such a thing is beyond my power.”

Gaea turned back on her path, a great light growing before her as she carried Sara’s body with her into it’s all encompassing brilliance.

“…vengeance…” Sara spluttered, blood spilling from her lips. “Then… give me… vengeance…”

“Oh yes, my child.” Gaea replied as the light consumed them both. “That I can give you.”

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PREVIOUS: Wonder Woman Pt. 4

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#2  Edited By BumpyBoo  Moderator

Woohoo, the final part - 'bout time! :P

Hehe, seriously, LOVE IT :) Really enjoyed reading your Wonder Woman series, it is nice to see how it all ends. Although I have to say, this does feel like it could be the start to something really exciting, bloody and epic - would love to see some of that vengeance! >:D And very nice to see you active in Fan Fic again, mate.

Now more! MORE! :):):)

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@feebadger: Sweet, a bit too short for my liking but over-all nice one. This reads so much like an RPG post, I do not know why, good job dude. Liked it.

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@pyrogram said:

@feebadger: Sweet, a bit too short for my liking but over-all nice one. This reads so much like an RPG post, I do not know why, good job dude. Liked it.

It's because your insane addiction is making everything look like RPG. GET HELP!!! :P

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@bumpyboo: It is cos it was realllly short, very descriptive and talk heavy. That is why :P

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@bumpyboo: It is cos it was realllly short, very descriptive and talk heavy. That is why :P

Nah, I'm teasing, I see it ;)

Have you read the previous chapters? They're really really good. *pushes you toward them* :P

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@bumpyboo: Hmph >_> Meani!

I am going to, first gona read his Silver-surfer as I wana see how he has done that!

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@pyrogram: Good good :D More of an Ant Man fan myself. I still reread those now, they crack me up XD

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@pyrogram: Thanks Pyro, though i haven't read much RPG so i don't know if that's a good thing or not :) When you say it's too short though, do you mean just this instalment or the whole thing, because there were chapters leading up to it?

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@pyrogram: Trust me, it is freakin' hilarious! XD

*holds your eyes open"

READ ANT MAN, PYRO!!! READ IIIIIIIIIT!!!

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@feebadger: It is a brilliant thing, It shows in a short installment you can give plenty of detail and put emotion into the work without having to write loads.

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#13  Edited By Pyrogram

@feebadger: “…vengeance…” Sara spluttered, blood spilling from her lips. “Then… give me… vengeance…”

This specifically reminded me off RPG. Like...the Dialogue is really good.

@bumpyboo: Go away or I step on hellmouse >_>

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@pyrogram: He will end you!!!!!! Stepping on him does nothing! SQUEAK HEIL! SQUEAK HE-

Sorry O_O

He just comes out sometimes XD

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@feebadger: Ok...I am just too used to spamming the RPG section >_> xD

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@feebadger: HEY I am getting you bumps and views with my madness! YOU'RE WELCOME!!! :):):)

@pyrogram: Your diarrhea will burn with the white hot intensity of a thousand suns!!! >:D

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@bumpyboo: Worth it , and no making excuses! We getting him FAKE views >_>

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@pyrogram: We're BUMPING O_O

Pyyyyyro...shut uuuuuuup!

You guys don't understand me at all! *runs to room and slams door*

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@bumpyboo: *takes out gun and shoots bomb into door* We are still spamming women -_-

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@pyrogram: I CAN'T HEAR YOU OVER MY TEARS!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! *sniff* And there were mean boys on the internet...*sniff* And they shouted at me....

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@pyrogram: @bumpyboo: I'm gonna kick BOTH yo' asses in a minute! Take it to the RPG boards, ya damned kids!!!!

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#31  Edited By BumpyBoo  Moderator

@feebadger:

*looking at shoes, all sad and ashamed*

I'm sorry, Mr Badger sir, I won't do it anymore. I will be a good Boo *crosses heart and everything* :):):)

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@bumpyboo said:

@feebadger:

*looking at shoes, all sad and ashamed*

I'm sorry, Mr Badger sir, I won't do it anymore. I will be a good Boo *crosses heart and everything* :):):)