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Page 13 (5 Panels)
Panel 1: This panel is an overhead view. RS lies awake in his bed. A woman, lies next to him, on her side facing away from him. On his right, a night stand with an alarm clock and his cell phone charging. You can see the shadow of the ceiling fan against the bed.
Panel 2: RS is walking down the hallway. No shirt on, and pajama pants. This is a mouse eye shot from the floor towards the end of the hallway. Pictures are on the wall. It appears to be RS and a woman, the same woman from the previous panel.
Panel 3: RS is now in the bathroom, standing over and leaning on the sink. He is looking into the mirror, his hair disheveled and eyes blood shot.
Panel 4: Close up of the sink, with RS hand turning on the faucet.
Panel 5: RS face down at the sink in his hands, with water pouring out of his hands and through his finger. By this panel, we realize he cannot sleep.
Page 14 (6 panels)
Panel 1: RS standing over the sink again looking into the mirror. This shot is from the mirror's perspective. Only he has a confused look about his face. Water is dripping off his nose and chin.
RYAN SEVAR (RS for those keeping track9
What the hell?
Panel 2: Basically the same scene, but shot from behind RS. He stands over the sink, the faucet is still running. The mirror, however, is black. There is no reflection, it is as if he is staring into nothing.
Panel 3: Shot from the upper corner of the room. RS is now leaning in, inspecting the mirror. The faucet is still running at this point. He is so thrown off, he has forgotten about the running water.
RYAN SEVAR
What the hell is this?
Panel 4: Close up of the mirror. You can see the lights above it a this point and the frame of the mirror. The actual pane is just black. There is nothing there.
Panel 5: Close up of RS face. He has a completely confused look about him. Head sort of tilted, and one eyebrow raised and the other squinting. His face is still wet from the water.
RYAN SEVAR
What, what is that?
Panel 6: This panel is completely black. This is a close up of the mirror. You can barely make out the shape of a face. This should be drawn literally 1 or 2 shades lighter than the complete black. It is something readers will want to look back at.
Page 15 (4 Panels)
Panel 1: This is shot from the bottom corner of the room. RS is falling backwards with his arms flailing about. A shadow creature is springing forward through the mirror with one claw reaching towards RS. Black mist is pouring from its body, and it's mouth is open, but with pieces of skin connecting up and down, almost a vented mouth. Think Hannibal Lector's mask.
RYAN SEVAR
AHHHHH!!!
Panel 2: Smaller panel. RS face up close with a claw off to the side. Action shot of his face being scratched one direction, with blood pouring out.
Panel 3: Smaller panel. Just like the previous panel, on the scratch is going the other way.
Panel 4: Back in RS bedroom. Shot from the side of the bed at about the level of the pillow. RS sitting himself up, back arched, with his arms behind him supporting him. His head is tilted back and he is screaming in terror. The woman is scene, but a bit more blurry in the back ground, startled, next to him.
RYAN SEVAR
(shout) NOOOOO!!! STOP!!
WOMAN
Ryan! Calm down! It's just a nightmare.
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