Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio
From Father to Daughter

Since the day you were born, you were loved;

Living with your mom, She was not much a hero,

Meeting your dad, a man who is not a zero;

Though into his life, you were kind of shoved.

You completed our lives of your mother and I;

Though we were out to many nights saving lives,

At least you were safe and not dodging knives;

We tried to protect you and do what we could to get by.

Your loss really hit us the most;

Revenge was taken though it could not replace,

The life you brought, the future is now hard to face;

Still haunted by you're loss with nothing but a ghost.

But I have moved on and know your in a better place;

Look out for me Lian, Because i know you are there,

Watching your dad get cleaned up, And strong as a bear; (grrr)

You are forever in my heart, With life I now can embrace.

I love you Lian and miss you daily.

From your clean and drug free father,

Roy Harper (aka: Daddy)

#1 Posted by RazzaTazz (9698 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice, did you write it?

#2 Posted by Mercy_ (92997 posts) - - Show Bio

Lian :(

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#3 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio
@RazzaTazz: Yes i did thanks :D
#4 Posted by lykopis (10746 posts) - - Show Bio

That is beautiful. Thank you.

#5 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio
@lykopis: You are welcome. its something i wish they could have touched on more before the big 52.
#6 Posted by Superguy0009e (2265 posts) - - Show Bio

i got a letter from Lian to Jimmie Robbinso. it reads

from: Lian

to: The Biggest A$$ Hole in the DcU

THE F*** IS WRONG WITH YOU!!

#7 Posted by turoksonofstone (13200 posts) - - Show Bio

Aw, sweet.

#8 Posted by RedheadedAtrocitus (6885 posts) - - Show Bio

Wow, that truly is amazing. Great job.

#9 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio
@Superguy0009e
 Hahaha that would be a bit out of character for Lian to say to an adult but lol anyways.
@RedheadedAtrocitus: @turoksonofstone: @The Dark Huntress:
  Thanks guys i really appreciate the comments :)
#10 Edited by Video_Martian (5645 posts) - - Show Bio

=,(

#11 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio
@mr.obvious:  *hands a hankerchief
#12 Posted by PowerHerc (85153 posts) - - Show Bio

Inspired.

#13 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio
@PowerHerc: thanks man. if many guy like you can get into this than maybe i did do a good job with this. hehe
#14 Posted by KisserNe (404 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice, Trodorne! I really did enjoy this.

You did a very good job!

#15 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio
@KisserNe: Thanks im super happy you enjoyed it. im wondering if this will get me an oscar nomination.
#16 Edited by KisserNe (404 posts) - - Show Bio

@Trodorne:

You know, you gotta a point there! It might :D Maybe I'll pester Captain Fanboy about it and nominate you at the same time.

YOU JUST MAY BE THE FIRST PERSON TO GET A FAN-FIC POETRY AWARD, lol. :)

#17 Posted by Shotgun (900 posts) - - Show Bio

I love how Roy cut up Lian's hotdog for her.

Who was the damn fool who killed Lian to get cheap angst, grief and drama for her parents!?

#18 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio
@Shotgun said:

I love how Roy cut up Lian's hotdog for her.

Who was the damn fool who killed Lian to get cheap angst, grief and drama for her parents!?

We have James robinson to blame. it started off with just Roy having his right arm ripped off his body. but adding insult to injury Prometheus dropped a building on Lian.
#19 Posted by PowerHerc (85153 posts) - - Show Bio

@Trodorne said:

@PowerHerc: thanks man. if many guy like you can get into this than maybe i did do a good job with this. hehe

You did do a good job, man. I've got two daughters so maybe that helps me relate.

Keep it up; let those words out and put 'em down on paper - you'll keep getting better and better.

#20 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio
@PowerHerc said:

@Trodorne said:

@PowerHerc: thanks man. if many guy like you can get into this than maybe i did do a good job with this. hehe

You did do a good job, man. I've got two daughters so maybe that helps me relate.

Keep it up; let those words out and put 'em down on paper - you'll keep getting better and better.

Thanks still man. it means quite a bit coming from you and everyone else here on this site.
#21 Posted by PowerHerc (85153 posts) - - Show Bio

@Trodorne: You're welcome.

#22 Posted by infonation (1665 posts) - - Show Bio

@Trodorne: Thank you for this, I'm not even a fan and I STIIL think Lian should be brought back... Oh yeah, that's right. EVEN I THINK HER DEADTH WAS A BAD IDEA! I don't even want to know how die-hard Titans fans feel...

#23 Posted by Superguy0009e (2265 posts) - - Show Bio

@infonation: death wasnt the problem, bad exectution and how it came completely out of nowhere

#24 Posted by infonation (1665 posts) - - Show Bio

@Superguy0009e: You're right! It's even worse than I thought! ARGH!!! (Frankly, I'd have settled for her being in a coma or something! It could have still been dramatic if handled properly!)

#25 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio

@infonation: Thanks for the comment, and Yeah I honestly thought it was a mistake to kill her. Im just happy you enjoyed the poem

#26 Posted by doomsilver (643 posts) - - Show Bio

Made me almost start crying that was really amazing.

#27 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio

@doomsilver: Much appreciated. im glad i could hit that soft spot.

#28 Posted by htb106 (1641 posts) - - Show Bio

nice...

#29 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio

@htb106: Thanks :)

#30 Posted by tomdickharry1984 (837 posts) - - Show Bio

tHAT'S REALLY SWEET.

#31 Posted by batkevin74 (11141 posts) - - Show Bio

@Trodorne: How did I miss this? Wow nice writing, combined with the pic kinda heart wrenching. Great work

#32 Posted by Ravager4 (1627 posts) - - Show Bio

Poor Lian, how we miss you :(

The only saving grace is that she's on Young Justice now, but she never should have died in the first place damn it.

And now she never existed according to the reboot.

Damn you DC, damn you.

#33 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio

@tomdickharry1984: Thanks much appreciated. :)

@batkevin74: I don't know haha but thanks so much. im glad you enjoyed it.

@Ravager4: I know it was a shame she was killed, and that is one thing i despise as part of the new DC universe. Thanks so much for the comment, you do great work on your writing as well.

#34 Posted by Ravager4 (1627 posts) - - Show Bio

@Trodorne: Thanks :) didn't realize you read any of my stuff

#35 Posted by Omegus (191 posts) - - Show Bio

Good job bro, heart warming.

#36 Posted by Trodorne (2596 posts) - - Show Bio

@Omegus said:

Good job bro, heart warming.

Thanks Br.......stranger, *Wink* >_0

#38 Posted by batkevin74 (11141 posts) - - Show Bio

@Trodorne: Bump'd