#1 Edited by k4tzm4n (39493 posts) - - Show Bio

Daken sits alone in a bar, his hand clenching a cold smirnoff ice as he watches a television behind the bartender.  It's a baseball game between the Boston Red Sox and New York Yankees. 
"How can you like such a borning sport? Turn that garbage off." Daken states to the elderly bartender. 
"What's the matter, kid?  Don't like the classic past time?" He replies. 
"I have a different past time..." Daken mutters as he puts down his drink and stares at the table for a minute. 
"And that's crying about my father!" Daken screams as tears pour out of his eyes.  He runs away, flailing his arms, and jumps through a window.  
"Man... What a little brat." 
 
The end. 
  
Hey, we never agreed on the quality of the story. :)
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#2 Posted by ComicMan24 (147042 posts) - - Show Bio

LOL

#3 Posted by Amegashita (3601 posts) - - Show Bio

  I got lost at line 6-7 but I was laughing at the end. 

#4 Posted by k4tzm4n (39493 posts) - - Show Bio

If there's enough positive feedback, I might be kind enough to grace your monitors with another equally epic story :O
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#5 Posted by Vance Astro (91191 posts) - - Show Bio

LMFAO..this is worst than Vance Astro:Revenge of Grape Soda!

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#6 Posted by k4tzm4n (39493 posts) - - Show Bio
@Vance Astro said:
"LMFAO..this is best thing I've ever read! "
You're too kind, Vance.
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#7 Posted by Morpheus_ (29873 posts) - - Show Bio
Bastardo, K4tz. This infamita will be repayed in blood.
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#8 Posted by k4tzm4n (39493 posts) - - Show Bio
@Morpheus_ said:
"Bravo, K4tz. This work will be printed in the history books. "

Glad you approrve.
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#9 Posted by InnerVenom123 (29499 posts) - - Show Bio

LMFAO! EPIC!
#10 Posted by Strafe Prower (11887 posts) - - Show Bio
@Vance Astro said:
" LMFAO..this is worst than Vance Astro:Revenge of Grape Soda! "
God that was hilarious. That was a long time ago.
#11 Posted by ~The Wanderer~ (34405 posts) - - Show Bio

lmfao! xD
You sir, win at life.

#12 Posted by k4tzm4n (39493 posts) - - Show Bio
@~The Wanderer~:
Thanks!
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#13 Posted by mavfan626 (4121 posts) - - Show Bio

Lol

#14 Posted by k4tzm4n (39493 posts) - - Show Bio

Man, I should make a pt 2, shouldn't I?

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#15 Posted by NlGHTCRAWLER (2899 posts) - - Show Bio

@k4tzm4n said:

Man, I should make a pt 2, shouldn't I?

Doo It!

#16 Posted by YoungJustice (6743 posts) - - Show Bio

@k4tzm4n said:

Man, I should make a pt 2, shouldn't I?