@wildvine: AIM are at it again. First working with Mr Hyde & Alastair Smythe to harvest Spider-Man's blood, now on the case of the Man-Thing with Mercy Liddle in hot pursuit! Nice work
Being completely honest the action could have been better, it seemed to be a little slow and non-descript. It didn't so much register as an action scene so much as a since ManThing was not really hurt or challenged in any important way.
That's actually a good point I'd not thought of...Hmm. Sometimes the thought of trying to write a fight scene could make it harder to integrate into a story, the skill is making a fight scene seem like a continuation of the story while making it good at the same time as a separate thing.
One of these days I'ma have to emulate the way you write dialogue. Feels so damn natural. The imagery for the fight scenes were good. I visualized it well.
Terrific sweetz. Very deep and impressive, you do an excellent job with Manny and Mercy both. :D