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Edited by CatalinaIC

Now AIM is involved. Man that Thing can't get a break. Loving this title (it possibly is my favourite) because it comes from the point of a normal person. Can't wait for part 4.

Posted by ImpurestCheese

@wildvine: Great as usual Wildvine. Can't help wondering what Man Thing does to deserve such negative attention. He's so cute how could anyone...oh jesus christ he's in my hotel. <Transmission ended at 22:15 GMT - Autopsy on Charred Corpse is Pending>

Posted by wildvine

@catalinaic:

AIM is one of the closet things to a nemesis that Manny has. So yeah. : P

Thanks for the comments. I wanted a character that could show us the Marvel verse from a "normal" standpoint.

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Posted by wildvine

@impurestcheese:

AIM wanted the serum Sallis made. So I didn't think they would let a little thing like a metaphysical transformation stop them from trying to get it.

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Posted by Joygirl

Terrific sweetz. Very deep and impressive, you do an excellent job with Manny and Mercy both. :D

Edited by wildvine

@joygirl:

How was the action? Cause writing fight scenes are my kryptonite.

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Posted by Pyrogram

One of these days I'ma have to emulate the way you write dialogue. Feels so damn natural. The imagery for the fight scenes were good. I visualized it well.

Posted by Joygirl

@wildvine: Being completely honest the action could have been better, it seemed to be a little slow and non-descript. It didn't so much register as an action scene so much as a continuation of the story since ManThing was not really hurt or challenged in any important way.

Edited by Pyrogram
@joygirl said:

Being completely honest the action could have been better, it seemed to be a little slow and non-descript. It didn't so much register as an action scene so much as a continuation of the story since ManThing was not really hurt or challenged in any important way.

That's actually a good point I'd not thought of...Hmm. Sometimes the thought of trying to write a fight scene could make it harder to integrate into a story, the skill is making a fight scene seem like a continuation of the story while making it good at the same time as a separate thing.

Posted by wildvine

@pyrogram said:

One of these days I'ma have to emulate the way you write dialogue. Feels so damn natural. The imagery for the fight scenes were good. I visualized it well.

Its not hard. Just put yourself into each character. Then talk like them.

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Posted by ImpurestCheese

@wildvine: Man Thing needs a hug and someone to take care of him. Hmm I could be Mrs Elouise Sallis...Ah who am I kidding be free my majestic Man Thing, be free to aimlessly wander into Weird Sisters in two issues. :-)

Edited by RichGenX
Edited by batkevin74

@wildvine: AIM are at it again. First working with Mr Hyde & Alastair Smythe to harvest Spider-Man's blood, now on the case of the Man-Thing with Mercy Liddle in hot pursuit! Nice work