Log in or sign up to comment
30 Comments
Edited by Leon_Dissada

Sounds incredibly dark. always a fan of dark rpg's. That title...i'm sorry but i had to read it after reading that title lol

Posted by Darkchild

god how ive missed you sha. Come friday ill probably be pming u some ideas for rpgs.

Posted by _Stretch_

Posted by Web_Flotsam

So... is this Cat person somebody I should be worried about?

Posted by The_MVPs

I like Cat

Moderator
Posted by Lady_Grimm

This was so disturbing, I LOVED IT!

Hit the nail right on the head. It was disturbingly interesting and very well written

Posted by Asherah

Woah.

Posted by Laceration_

inspiration

Posted by _Nexus_

Im not going to lie I click on this because of the title...Damn that is dark very dark like blacker than the ace of spades dark.

It was beautiful :)

Posted by Atrocity_

@shanana: (Dell here, btw)

Yeah, I remember you said about writing something on Catarina. Never thought it would be so violent and somewhat disturbing. Can tell you, better than many creepypastas I've read.

Edited by Squares

@shanana said:

@squares: I wrote it. I was thanking you for your critique.

Oh. I was confused because the user name is different.

No problem.

Edited by Shanana

@squares: I wrote it. I was thanking you for your critique.

Posted by Shanana

The story is to serve as a bridge from Do What Thou Wilt. I wrote it to show the present challenge of Catalina,which are the rebels. It also marked the end of her "be nice I've been raped" days. This and the ones that follow will feature more of her in a leader role. I used bloody sort of like violent, and orgasm like excitement.which is ultimately chaos.

I just wanted to write,but lost it midway lol

Posted by Atrocity_

@pyrogram said:

Amazing work. Dammn, this is one of those things which inspire greatness O_o

I know, everytime I read other user's blog posts, I feel such a newbie! =P

Great job, Sha ^_^

Edited by Squares
Posted by ShadowSwordmaster

Nice work ; )

Online
Edited by Pyrogram

Amazing work. Dammn, this is one of those things which inspire greatness O_o

Online
Posted by Shanana
Posted by Squares

Your imagery is good, might want to work a little on the punctuation. While I don't get the point of this story, what it was trying to convey (other than the fact that this 'Cat' person was at some point raped and is now 'so totally over it', and that she's powerful I suppose...), or why you chose the title you did (was it something about a loss of virginity?), it's certainly interesting. If it's part of a bigger story then by all means, I'd love to read it, but otherwise it really needs context.

Posted by Eternelle

Jesus Christ, girl.

Amazing read O_O

Posted by Connoisseur

Dark but very well written.

Edited by Cara_Hunter

(Dat title)

Edited by ownagepants

very detailed writing

Online
Posted by _Stretch_

Vile, but great as usual.

Posted by Classique

This was so disturbing, I LOVED IT!

Posted by Pro_Nelson

I'm sort of lost lol, but either way nice story !

Posted by Crimson Eagle

Great stuff, and the title was... an attention grabber lol.

Edited by _Animus_

Foul, but a good story lol.

Edited by Valerie_Huntington

Disturbing, but intriguing. I've missed your writing.

Online