Well, just want an opinion from people, so read my profile and you'll see more about me
Taken from his bio:
- Super Strength (I can lift over 100,000 tons and if I am in the Nightfall Kingdom I am 10x stronger than 8th Day Juggernaught
- Some degree of Super Jump
- A weak ability to levitate
- A healing factor 3x the strength of Wolverine or Sabertooth
Taken from his profile
I am Raymond CoBurn, born on December 13, 1670 on an unusual Solar Eclipse. The eclipse gave me superhuman powers. At first I was a hero under the name of Payne Henge, but after my brother was murdered, I went crazy, had a mental breakdown, and turned evil. After turning evil, I then beat Superman in a fight, but was nearly crushed by Thor, but escaped to Australia, where I trained, and discovered my REAL home, the Nightfall Kingdom (I shall not tell you the location) and I became stronger than ever. After Thor and Hulk located me, I managed to easily overpower Hulk, but once again, had a hard time with Thor, and wasn't much until I channeled my home's central power, and knocked Thor unconscious for a little over 9 hours.
I am currently trying to find out why I'm hearing Voices in my head, and I have currently gone through Hulk, Wolverine, Green Goblin, Superman to find out.
The problem is your powers list really blows! There is no originality to it what so ever and your even trying to equate your "power levels" to other beings . . . lame!
Your powers list should look something like this:
Then in your bio, fill out a story with the uses of these powers in a detailed use of them against other super beings.