#1 Edited by Koza101 (89 posts) - - Show Bio

hi all.... Been working on these Pencil art works for quite some time now... The first one "Soul", took me a fair while, especially, i've been working with trying to create a much more detailed art, and trying to improve on the shadows a fair bit in it...

This Next one, is another pic, of my character the RatMan...

As always, i really do love good Critique and some Feedback :D

#2 Posted by bennyq (407 posts) - - Show Bio

Your first one is beautiful. So detailed. Will you ink it? You've done really well on the forshortening on the ratman piece as well. Great job!

#3 Edited by patzello (431 posts) - - Show Bio

No suggestions with the art. I really like your style of wings. I don't know that I have ever seen that exact representation of wings, very unique.

I like the idea of rat man and he is drawn very well. My only question (without knowing anything about the character) would be why a rat themed character would be so close shaven? I am not even so regular with the razor!

Not that it makes it bad, just curious.

#4 Posted by Koza101 (89 posts) - - Show Bio

@patzello:

Ratman is part of a larger group of super hero character's, i've based on animals...

#5 Posted by patzello (431 posts) - - Show Bio

@koza101: I would like to see the rest of them. I like your style.

#6 Posted by RulerOfThisUniverse (6332 posts) - - Show Bio

Awesome work, especially the first one.