The birth of a new team...

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I got bored so i decided to COMBINE POWERS from the opposing forces character creation challenge..

kinda fun! Flame Witch, Cold Snapping-Turtle, Grandior, & Air-Fox

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@wildcats25: Nice, love the name i have a character that i created named "Elemental".

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They look awesome together! Wow!

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Cold Snapping-Turtle sounds like a joke character.

Team looks cool though.

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Is that a Turtle??

This is awesome!!

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For air fox i would suggest a name change/modification like flying fox, cyclone fox etc. Air sounds kinda boring same with the turtle even though I think he is sweet

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@wildcats25: sure thing i love indie comics, where to find it?

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Awesome, reminds me of Elementals from Comico.

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I'd buy it.

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If the story complements the art and vice versa, heck yeah! Only pointer I would give is to clean up your lines a bit. For example, Grandior and Air-Fox look awesome individually, but put together something doesn't balance out. I think that's the contour lines. Grandior is behind Air-Fox, but usually whatever is in front has the thicker silhouette. In this case Grandior has the thicket shadings and lines which causes Fox to fade among the earth monster.

It's not a big deal, I think your art is great (and the character design is very ingenious).. It's just a small pointer. Hopefully, I haven't stepped on any toes.

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you guys are awesome!

@reddeadjoker yeah, Air Fox is rather cheezy. I couldn't use Air Wolf. (frown)

@sora_thekey no toes stepped on. I see the issue you pointed out and its very valid.

maybe the moderators would consider giving writers a chance to craft stories based on the artist's creation in this section. i dunno.

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Properly impressive work, mate! ^_^

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@wildcats25: It's totally acceptable. You are welcomed to post your comics and collaborate with other users to make them. You can post them here or on Fan-Fic.

Just remember you can't profit from it here.

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Nice, nice job.