Smallville Superman Sketch ,what do you really think?

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#1  Edited By JeanRalphio

I'm an amateur but don't hold back if you think it's bad:

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better than me, you colored his face pink though

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#3  Edited By JeanRalphio

better than me, you colored his face pink though

Yea,it was really hard to make him white,the saturation on PSE is terrible.

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better than me, you colored his face pink though

You got any art?

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it looks mediocre. the sketch looks better than the drawn one.

you said be honest. i dont have any new art. all my artis when i was a teenager ages ago.

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#7  Edited By JeanRalphio

it looks mediocre. the sketch looks better than the drawn one.

you said be honest. i dont have any new art. all my artis when i was a teenager ages ago.

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@jeanralphio: i meant colored in one not drawn. the drawing is decently good but the coloring is mediocre.

keep it up would get better.

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@jeanralphio: i meant colored in one not drawn. the drawing is decently good but the coloring is mediocre.

keep it up would get better.

This was my first time digitally coloring but I was kidding about crying,it's good you were honest.

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@jeanralphio: Probably better then I can do, one thing I noticed is that one eye laser is bigger then the other. Dx

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@jeanralphio: It's not bad. The few tips I can give you is practice your anatomy a little more, what works best for me is referencing photos. Body builders both female and male will give you a good idea of muscle placement and proportions. One other thing that I noticed on your drawing is that you may be smudging the shading, This will give your pieces a flat look. Don't be afraid to go dark with your shading it will add some dimension. Hope this helps keep up the good work.

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#12  Edited By JeanRalphio

@jeepeh: Thanks.

@proofpudding: Thanks and I appreciate the tips man. I didn't think the anatomy was that bad on this sketch,compared to my other one. The anatomy on this sketch's-Iron Fist Sketch-lower arm's are lolworthy but I think the shading is much better,check it out.

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I like both. Especially how you handled the shading, it really made it pop. The red eyes where also a nice touch.

Honestly, though, it looked better before it was colored. I know coloring takes allot of work to get the hang of, though, I've only been doing it a few months myself.Anyway, keep it up. I look forward to seeing more of your art.

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I like both. Especially how you handled the shading, it really made it pop. The red eyes where also a nice touch.

Honestly, though, it looked better before it was colored. I know coloring takes allot of work to get the hang of, though, I've only been doing it a few months myself.Anyway, keep it up. I look forward to seeing more of your art.

Thanks man,it sounds like I'm sucking up but that's fantastic to hear,coming from you.

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@jeanralphio:

It's not bad. The few tips I can give you is practice your anatomy a little more, what works best for me is referencing photos. Body builders both female and male will give you a good idea of muscle placement and proportions. One other thing that I noticed on your drawing is that you may be smudging the shading, This will give your pieces a flat look. Don't be afraid to go dark with your shading it will add some dimension. Hope this helps keep up the good work.

^This. I have said it before....wire frames with a light pencil sketch can help too. I was taught to build a drawing with bone first muscle second. This will help with proportions and anatomy, so everything looks like it is an actual body. I look forward to seeing your work later on.