opinions on liquades drawings?

what do i need to work on and what should i keep the same?

Add dimension and deph through shading, incorporate dramatic lighting to show texture and emotion. But as is looks great.:)

i like it! you gotta work on the borders, keeping those lines solid and not so wavy.

Clean it up a little. Erase and add lines at the head. Use lots of black for the outfit and something different for the symbol in the middle.

i copied the shape of venoms head free hand from ASM#363

Not horrible, your lines lose focus at the head, and the teeth look like you tried to add as many as possible but became unfocused and just went for broke. You have no shading and that leaves the pic looking flat. It's a good start though, just needs some more work and practice.

Use a sketch pad

Say, it's pretty good. Keep practicing. My suggestions would be to sketch less and try and use longer, continuous lines; the way that works for me is to keep my wrist straight and move only fingers that are holding the pencil, I found that technique works with a mouse as well.

And another thing would be to study muscle anatomy, not because of your Venom work but in general. The sooner you start better. I've get a book about modeling and sculpting the human figure (with clay and such) and it shows some great examples. I use this because books that show you how to draw human anatomy tend to be bias to the artist of that book.

i can do better, not to be a jacka or anything but i believe you can do better to

i did it in school thats why its a little sloppy and it looks somewhat 2d because i am horrable at shading and adding depth although i plan to ad depth when i get better

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liquade says:

"what do i need to work on and what should i keep the same?

VENOM

more on the way. any tips on how to shade and make it look more in depth are also appreciated

Cyclops(issues#1-38)

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still needs shading
Post Edited:2007-12-01 20:29:21"

heres my take on his venom sketch (did this for about 10 minutes) so any comments are much appreciated. thanks

[IMG]http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c231/endlesone/venomsm.jpg[/IMG]

hey endless do you take requests

Not bad, but you could still use some work. Try drawing from the inside out instead of outlines first. That will help your characters come out in better proportion.

endlesone says:

"liquade says:

"what do i need to work on and what should i keep the same?

VENOM

more on the way. any tips on how to shade and make it look more in depth are also appreciated

Cyclops(issues#1-38)

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Cyclops(issues#1-38)

still needs shading
Post Edited:2007-12-01 20:29:21"

heres my take on his venom sketch (did this for about 10 minutes) so any comments are much appreciated. thanks

[IMG]http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c231/endlesone/venomsm.jpg[/IMG]

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better than mine i hope practice realy does help

You a hell of a lot better then any of my drawings lol.