New Work - Hal Jordan and X23

Haven't been around in a while. Think I'm getting better, but you let me know if I'm mistake in that :P

Awesome job! Your work on this is amazing!
 
I think that the only thing you would need to work on is a bit on the proportions. GL's head is a bit small and X23's head is a bit big. I love your colors though and you have an excellent sense of color shadowing. That's something hard to work on since as amateurs we are sometimes stuck with shading as a dark area. You managed to darken those specific areas with colors not just shades, kudos on that and keep up the good work!

Laura looks older, like this is an interpretation of X-23 in 4 or 5 years time.  A strong woman... but with nasty claws ;)  These are great!  I like the way that Hal looks like he's descending & there's a sense of perspective with his trailing foot... and Laura is wearing a funky bright pink lipstick (not far off one of my own favourite shades :)

thanks guys. A thumb's up from this week's community starlet is all I needed :D 
 
Colouring comes easy enough to me tbh. Of course I could have put in more effort with it but at the moment I'm focusing alot more on the drawing side of things. If you thought these proportions were off you should see my older work. Awful anatomy. 
 
Probably the last of these kind of pics I'll do for a while, Practicing Panels for the foreseeable while. My monday life drawing classes are helping loads though

Classes are always good! Keep it up!

just realized both are community starlet award-ees. apologies

" @sora_thekey:classes are brilliant. really pushes you to draw things you wouldn't think of normally. started 4 weeks ago and hadn't taken a class before that in 6 years. happy with how it's going though "

It's just been life drawing but I'm fearful she's going to spring painting on us soon, which I'm not a fan of. I always felt it ruined my sketches as a kid and sure nowadays there's the big daddy that is photoshop for colouring. 

Good work

" It's just been life drawing but I'm fearful she's going to spring painting on us soon, which I'm not a fan of. I always felt it ruined my sketches as a kid and sure nowadays there's the big daddy that is photoshop for colouring.  "

To be honest, I think they're really bad. Hal's head is small, his arms come out really low and they're in front of his body, which is weird. Right arm is longer than the left, too, with the hand too small at that. His legs are in a really weird position and proportionally off. X-23 is proportionally better, but looks pretty masculine. The angle of her belly doesn't seem to match the angle of her chest. The hair on both of them is okay, and the colors on X-23 are well done. Helpful critique, so keep trying.