My Naked Doodles...

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#1  Edited By DavidR

 
 
Dihty, Dihty minds, THE LOT OF YOU!!!! Hehe... 
 
This is the current Batch of pencils I am working on, I normally do not spend much time on them, since I usually want to ink before I have a decent foundation to work with. I am currently taking more time on this and would really appreciate everyone's opinion. 
 
I am posting this so young artists like my friend Mutant X can see and compare if something is useful at this stage. Some are preliminary sketches to almost finished pencils, hope you like.
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Startin' with the roughs... was doing this for the "Transportation creation contest" until dumbass me who did not read the title... "Creation"   Duuuuhhh!!
 

 

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This is Bro-Pool, Did this for Arcanineryu's Topic, she has some really good stuff on there that I took and put my spin on. If you want to see the inked version check it out at...   " G.I.R.pool!!!! "

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These following ones are two versions of who might win if Swamp-thing battled Jonah Hex, somebody mentioned they wanted Hex to win... I obliged. 
 
Which one do you all prefer...


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On the two next ones, I posted them both, so you wouldn't have to turn your head if you where curious...

 
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This is it so far, there are still things I see that I might change or correct but I am finally paying attention to my pencils in my current practice, as I said before let me know what you think. I need more than ever opinions on the style I am slowly developing. It's happening on it's own but I am trying to modify the old school-style I have had and refresh it. Anyone that knows a little about me knows that this is an important factor for me in eventually selling my work, due to my long absence from the field.
 
Thanks in advance for your comments...
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#2  Edited By Caligula

wow man...
 these are friggin' brilliant. I really love the Swamp Thing vs Jonah Hex. That is going to blow mine out of the water :D Judging from that alone I think DC or Vertigo would be blessed to pick you up as a penciler man. I really don't see any flaws in that one.
 
Bro-pool is classic man, that is a beautiful drawing, and I really see little to no flaws there.
 
The Mystique/MODOK pic is great. but Mystique looks a little like a zombie there. and Her Jaw/Cheek bones are too large for a female figure. But regardless it's still a truck full of dynamite, compared to my stick figures. lol.
 
Top Class stuff.

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#3  Edited By ssejllenrad

I choose both the second ones mate!

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#4  Edited By Caligula

oh and i almost forgot to mention. I prefer the one with Swamp Thing winning, but i might be prejudice, cause I'm an Alan Moore fan.

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#5  Edited By DavidR
@Caligula: 
 
If you have a wide-screen monitor her face gets distorted. I hate that with a passion, on paper she resembles Angelina Jolie a bit, not my intention.  
If you take it as it shows on the post she resembles an Asian girl. I know, my Ex is Asian. 
Because of the distortion she does have wider cheek bones. 
 
Thanks for the comment!
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#6  Edited By Caligula
@DavidR: I have a wide-screen, so that may be it.
 
but really man, don't take any of my criticism seriously.... because I'm no where near your peer in Art man. my art is utter garbage, that I do for fun. While you a the real deal. You are the type of artist I strive to be. 
 
and yes my art is terrible, but it will not always be that way because like i said I practice everyday, even it's just a couple doodles I make sure I draw something everyday. I also write something everyday.
 
But man you are really the un-crowned artists of the decade in my opinion. and if DC or Vertigo doesn't pick you up they are really messing up. Cause your art is very much the style they go for.
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#7  Edited By DavidR
@ssejllenrad: 
 
Wow, the pain pills must be really kicking in. U usually have a lot to say with a "Hehehe" on the end. Hehehehe, seeee I picked that up from u... What does you "choose both the second ones" mean? Kinda lost u there. Glad to see you are around. Noticed just now you have some 3d work posted, going over there now....  Oh, yeah, ... Hehehehe!
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#8  Edited By TheBlueAngel93

These look awesome, dude!

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#9  Edited By DavidR
@War Killer: 
 
 Thanks, glad u like them...
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#10  Edited By TheBlueAngel93
@DavidR said:
" @War Killer:    Thanks, glad u like them... "
Are you going to color them?
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#11  Edited By DavidR
@War Killer: 
 
 Would love to but I am in the process of developing my art and that would take too much time at this point. I'll just be glad to get them inked and be satisfied with the results. I am normally raring to put ink on my pencils but I took longer on these and don't want the results to suck, I'm confident it will work out but like cold water in the pool...I got shrinkage and shivers... : )
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#12  Edited By TheBlueAngel93
@DavidR said:
" @War Killer:    Would love to but I am in the process of developing my art and that would too much at this time. I'll just be glad to get them inked and satisfied with the results. I normally raring to put ink on my pencils but I took longer on these and don't want the results to suck I'm confident it will work out but like cold water in the pool...I got shrinkage and shivers... : ) "
Ah, I see. Well what ever you decide to go with, I hope they turn out great! They already look pretty amazing! :D
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#13  Edited By DavidR

Thanks Dude, have you seen my other posts, If you haven't, Check out my profile images with my signature "RamS" on the art..

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#14  Edited By DavidR
@Caligula said:

" wow man...  these are friggin' brilliant. I really love the Swamp Thing vs Jonah Hex. That is going to blow mine out of the water :D Judging from that alone I think DC or Vertigo would be blessed to pick you up as a penciler man. I really don't see any flaws in that one.  Bro-pool is classic man, that is a beautiful drawing, and I really see little to no flaws there.  The Mystique/MODOK pic is great. but Mystique looks a little like a zombie there. and Her Jaw/Cheek bones are too large for a female figure. But regardless it's still a truck full of dynamite, compared to my stick figures. lol.  Top Class stuff. "


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See if that helps...
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#15  Edited By LT1085
@DavidR: WOW. Excellent stuff here. I can honestly say that I am extremely impressed by your showings in this thread.
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#16  Edited By DavidR
@LT1085: 
 
Coming from you, it is appreciated thanks... : )
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#17  Edited By InspiringMuffin
@DavidR:  I concur with these previous assessments, very well done. I particularly enjoy the Jonah Hex beating the swamp thing, as well as the more amusing MODOK/Mystique pic.
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#18  Edited By cly

Nice work.

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#19  Edited By DavidR
@InspiringMuffin: 
 
 Thanks Muffin and Cly
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#20  Edited By shatterstar  Moderator

The Jonah vs Swamp Things are looking sick, I definitely dig the one with the bullet through the head. Very nice work. I'm torn between the two Modok/Mystiques both are entertaining.

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#21  Edited By Primmaster64

Whoa GIR!

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#22  Edited By Mutant X

These are awesome dude! You're Mystique/Modok one blows mine outta the water.

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#23  Edited By DavidR
@Mutant X said:

" These are awesome dude! You're Mystique/Modok one blows mine outta the water. "

Thank you young grasshopper, (Watch old shows of "KUNG FU") : ) I have faith that there will be a day if you persist that you will be at a point where you far exceed my own....
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#24  Edited By Mutant X
@DavidR said:
" @Mutant X said:

" These are awesome dude! You're Mystique/Modok one blows mine outta the water. "

Thank you young grasshopper, (Watch old shows of "KUNG FU") : ) I have faith that there will be a day if you persist that you will be at a point where you far exceed my own.... "
I doubt that I'll ever be as good as you are, let alone BETTER than you. I really want to see your art in comic book format. Lol.
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#25  Edited By DavidR
@Mutant X: 
...On my end as well as I am sure many others wish for the same, to see their stuff published or fully depicted as a digital comic book. I think that I better start saving my money up so that if I ever see print I can start passing the books out for free, Look, Look! see what I did!!! 
 
 
Actually that's not me at all but it will have a feeling of satisfaction that I passed that major hurdle, then the real one begins, and another and another and another.... hard to stay in once you get one published. 
 
We can all dream... : ) Hmmmm, I think it's time for a nap...Think I will dream of drawing the Batman series, it really does happen when I close my eyes, Lala land is so vivid... Hehehe!
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#26  Edited By CaptainCockblock

Very good layout, very dramatic, especially  Green Goblin and Hex v Swamp Thing. Good work!

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Great stuff.

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#28  Edited By inferiorego  Staff
@DavidR:  i thought i was going to have to delete/lock this thread.... because of the nakeds....
 
nice work... i love the jonah/swamp thing pic
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#29  Edited By _Sojourn_

These are very very very very nice...JEALOUSY

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#30  Edited By DavidR
@inferiorego: 
 
I call them "Naked Doodles" because they are penciled, not finished and dressed up in ink or with color. It got your attention as well as others by the title. Hehehe!
 
 I would never post anything that wasn't family friendly on here. I know and respect that there's a lot of  younger individuals below the age of 18.  Funny, I think Shatterstar would have been the first to delete all this if it was obscene. : )
 
Thanks for the compliments to everyone!!!
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#31  Edited By Decept-O

@DavidR:  Dude, I love them all.  Nice job!
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#32  Edited By DavidR
@Decept-O: 
 
Thanks man, sorry it took so long to reply, kinda lost the thread....
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#33  Edited By neumato

WOW! Love seeing your pencils. These are excellent!

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#34  Edited By DavidR
@neumato: 
 
Hey Bud thanks!
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WHERE ARE MY NAKED PICTURES 
 
curse you , but great pics!

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#36  Edited By Video_Martian
@DavidR: wow, you really fooled me.
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#37  Edited By Omega Ray Jay

Great Stuff!

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#38  Edited By DavidR
@.Mistress Redhead.: 
 
The Real Naked Doodles are only for private viewing...... Juuust kiddin'  ; )
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#39  Edited By Tormenta

great

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#40  Edited By Aronmorales

WOW! You're incredible!!!

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#41  Edited By DavidR
@Omega Ray Jay:@Tormenta:@Aronmorales: 
 
Sincere thanks to all of you. Always appreciate the kind words.
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#42  Edited By GODofART

wheres teh neked wemon? :(

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#43  Edited By PowerHerc

Good stuff.  I like the way your sketches look even if I'm not into these particular characters.
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#44  Edited By tonis

lol, I so know about the joystick conundrum!!!! 
great stuff Robert

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#45  Edited By IcePrince_X

Great stuff indeed, I remember all of the entries for the contest... seeing them in their raw form still makes me appreciate them more.  
WOW!

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#46  Edited By DavidR
@GODofART said:

" wheres teh neked wemon? :( "
 

The title refers to my raw pencils not having inks or colors added. Hah!!! made u look!!! That was the purpose... hehehe!
 
 
@PowerHerc:@IcePrince_X:  Glad you both liked it.
 
@tonis said:

" lol, I so know about the joystick conundrum!!!! great stuff Robert "
 

 Thanks man, I'm sure he would have appreciated his joystick being driven by her.... : P