Not bad dude. Just a couple little critiques I'd like to throw at you...
In your first image, the left wrist appears to disappear into the forearm. There should be a straight where the arm attaches to the hand.
The second image you posted of the figure laying on her back, (you can see her nipples so I assume she's not wearing a bra) her breasts don't fall against her body, giving the impression that she has implants. If that's what you're going for then it's fine, but if you want a more natural appearance they should flatten out a little bit against her body.
Aside from that, lots of nice, clean lines and nice poses.
I like the art, but is this the only subject you draw?
It seems like you could do something really cool with Spider-man or Batman in some kind of cityscape. You're really good at drawing backgrounds, so I would put that to use with other kinds of characters.
Just a little advice. It's your work, so do it the way you want. Otherwise, nice job.
I have to agree with Om1kron, they do seem a bit--blandish. Don't get me wrong, you have talent, I just feel like it is being wasted on smutty run-of-the-mill porno drawings. But that's just my opinion. Do whatever it is you want to do...I'm probably just biased because I'm a woman and I don't love to see my fellow females portrayed this way meh.
Nice work but to me even though in a couple of years you have added dimension with shading and really helps improve your over all art. It just looks as if everything is taken and copied from porn photos, not original art made solely by you.
Good work but may not be suited for the Vine. I am not against nudity or risque art by any means, but it has it's place.
Pornography and erotica are two different things .
I agree, the beginning of many porn photo sets begin as "Erotica" and then develop into regular porn. Regardless, my point still stands, it has it's place and not necessarily here. I am not a prude but there are many very young people on here and others (not myself) that this may be offensive to.
@TimGrayson: I agree with DavidR regarding how you are creating your work and am also agreeing with him and Dark Huntress that actually, a few pieces are crossing the line. I've had to remove some past art because I had revealed a bit much with some pinup and partially nude art I had posted but I agreed. I had talked to Staff and Mods about what is acceptable here.
The thing is they informed me that yes, there are adult and erotic comics and images BUT one really has to look for them intentionally, know what those titles are.
There is Good Girl Art and Bad Girl Art. There is erotic and pornographic and everything in between and things which defy classification.
The Moderator Shatterstar also has specified in the Guidelines that NO NUDITY is allowed in the Artist Forum. Perhaps you are showing "partial nudity" but partial is subjective yet I think a few of your pieces are a bit too revealing.
However, here in the Artist Forum, and the site in general, there are younger users who may see these. Perhaps you should post your work elsewhere if you already aren't if you are concerned with selling. I create pinup art myself but if I KNOW it will be more than R rated, I won't link it here.
Like DavidR, I am not a prude. I appreciate well drawn pinup art but some of this is crossing the line.
@TimGrayson: Just to add I think what some are objecting to is the nudity by showing nipples, which might be a bit "funny" because with the Art Adams art you point out, you really see everything else! Don't get me wrong, I am all for expression and even some nude art but we really really need clarification on the subject here in my opinion. I say that not to knock you just so users know what is "allowed' and what may not be. Perhaps if something could be instituted where users who have memberships would be allowed to post nude art and images, but those who don't have memberships couldn't see it, that would make me feel better. It might sound a bit difficult to implement but its just a thought. Again, ain't knocking you for your expressions through your art, and you bring up a point, we have adult comics with nude images allowed.
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