#1 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

(Title says it all)

Myself:

Black Alice:

Sydne Ardeen (Saturn Girl's mother, delegate in United Planets)

The dragon Thorn and his rider Murtagh (from the Inheritance fantasy book series)

Me in a Manga-esque style, though drawn by a girl at my school (but I thought I could post it anyway):

...................

And my old art, that I have already posted.......

Jean Grey:

The dragon Saphira and her rider Eragon:

:)

#2 Posted by Constantine (16046 posts) - - Show Bio

nice

#3 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

Constantine says:

"nice"

Thanks :)

#4 Posted by No_Name_ (17403 posts) - - Show Bio

good work hun

#5 Posted by Vance Astro (91230 posts) - - Show Bio

Black Alice is ok...the rest is "meh".

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#6 Posted by Constantine (16046 posts) - - Show Bio

Forever Young says:

"Constantine says:
"nice"

Thanks :)"

thats alright...its good

why'd you change profile?

#7 Posted by Crimson Orchid (5825 posts) - - Show Bio

Not bad. For more movement in the gestures, practice the force of the pose. Try draw with C-curves to achieve that, that way your characters won't look so stiff.

#8 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

Constantine says:

"Forever Young says:
"Constantine says:
"nice"

Thanks :)"

thats alright...its good

why'd you change profile?"

Felt like a change lol...I kinda grew tired of my old one, and the name could give the impression that I'm arrogant in some way. LoL.

@Vance: I'm open to constructive criticism, what could I have done better?

#9 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

Crimson Orchid says:

"Not bad. For more movement in the gestures, practice the force of the pose. Try draw with C-curves to achieve that, that way your characters won't look so stiff."

Hmmm...I'll think about that next time. :)

#10 Posted by Crimson Orchid (5825 posts) - - Show Bio
#11 Posted by Constantine (16046 posts) - - Show Bio

Forever Young says:

"Constantine says:
"Forever Young says:
"Constantine says:
"nice"

Thanks :)"

thats alright...its good

why'd you change profile?"

Felt like a change lol...I kinda grew tired of my old one, and the name could give the impression that I'm arrogant in some way. LoL.

"

you'll always be the young arrogant clever guy i knew all those yrs back lol j/k

#12 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

Constantine says:

"you'll always be the young arrogant clever guy i knew all those yrs back lol j/k"

LoL. And to think, I'm slightly older than you. :)

#13 Posted by Constantine (16046 posts) - - Show Bio

Forever Young says:

"Constantine says:
"you'll always be the young arrogant clever guy i knew all those yrs back lol j/k"

LoL. And to think, I'm slightly older than you. :)"

yh just about....10

#14 Posted by Vance Astro (91230 posts) - - Show Bio

Forever Young says:

"Constantine says:
"Forever Young says:
"Constantine says:
"nice"
Thanks :)"
thats alright...its good why'd you change profile?"
Felt like a change lol...I kinda grew tired of my old one, and the name could give the impression that I'm arrogant in some way. LoL. @Vance: I'm open to constructive criticism, what could I have done better?"

learn som anatomy and proportion.

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#15 Posted by ladydeath (9447 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice artwork.

#16 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

Vance Astro says:

"learn som anatomy and proportion."

Right...I'm getting better at that since I drew Jean Grey. :)

#17 Posted by No_Name_ (17403 posts) - - Show Bio

Vance would you like to post some of your work? :D

I would love to check it out ;)

#18 Posted by Vance Astro (91230 posts) - - Show Bio

Forever Young says:

"Vance Astro says:
" learn som anatomy and proportion."
Right...I'm getting better at that since I drew Jean Grey. :)"

Iunno abou that.Thos hands don't look like hands.There is no dimension in her arms..they are just tubes.Her waist is very skinny and no propotionate to the rest of her legs are to skinny as well.

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#19 Posted by Lantern Prime (13044 posts) - - Show Bio

Anime style art. Its above- average.

#20 Posted by Vance Astro (91230 posts) - - Show Bio

BatgirlBabs says:

"Vance would you like to post some of your work? :D I would love to check it out ;)"

Check my image gallery in my profile.

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#21 Posted by No_Name_ (17403 posts) - - Show Bio
#22 Posted by Vance Astro (91230 posts) - - Show Bio

BatgirlBabs says:

"Vance Astro says:
"BatgirlBabs says:
"Vance would you like to post some of your work? :D I would love to check it out ;)"
Check my image gallery in my profile."
http://www.comicvine.com/myvine/Vance%20Astro/images/&imageId=347766 nice work do you have deviantart?"

Nah.I don't.I have been meaning to make one but i'm going to wait until i'm out of school because I will have more time to draw fr leisure.

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#23 Posted by Constantine (16046 posts) - - Show Bio
#24 Posted by Barry Flash (1573 posts) - - Show Bio

Good work, i like the Blue Dragon (Saphira) and i really like the Manga Version of you.

#25 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

Vance Astro says:

"Forever Young says:
"Vance Astro says:
" learn som anatomy and proportion."
Right...I'm getting better at that since I drew Jean Grey. :)"

Iunno abou that.Thos hands don't look like hands.There is no dimension in her arms..they are just tubes.Her waist is very skinny and no propotionate to the rest of her legs are to skinny as well."

My point was that Jean Grey is one of the oldest of these drawings, and that I've gotten better since I drew her. Though, "Thos hands don't look like hands", I'm not sure you're looking at the same thing as I am. :P

.........

The self-portrait is very recent though (and proportionate; I do look like that, I have photo-proof...). ^^
Post Edited:2008-05-29 14:43:36

#26 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

Vance Astro says:

"Forever Young says:
"Vance Astro says:
"Forever Young says:
"Vance Astro says:
" learn som anatomy and proportion."
Right...I'm getting better at that since I drew Jean Grey. :)"
Iunno abou that.Thos hands don't look like hands.There is no dimension in her arms..they are just tubes.Her waist is very skinny and no propotionate to the rest of her legs are to skinny as well."
My point was that Jean Grey is one of the oldest of these drawings, and that I've gotten better since I drew her. Though, "Thos hands don't look like hands", I'm not sure you're looking at the same thing as I am. :P ......... The self-portrait is very recent though (**and** proportionate; I **do** look like that, I have photo-proof...). ^^
Post Edited:2008-05-29 14:43:36"

I meant "Those hands don't look like hands" meaning her hands look like flippers or something.

I agree your self-portrait is ok with proportion but the shading is un-realistic."

Heh, in the photo I based the self-portrait on, there was shades below the nose and the mouth, but when I drew, it looked like a beard xDD therefore I erased it. :P

#27 Posted by Vance Astro (91230 posts) - - Show Bio

Constantine says:

"http://www.comicvine.com/message/designs/112968/&c=27&27 come check out my sh!t, literally"

Weak.

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#28 Posted by Vance Astro (91230 posts) - - Show Bio

Forever Young says:

"Vance Astro says:
"Forever Young says:
"Vance Astro says:
" learn som anatomy and proportion."
Right...I'm getting better at that since I drew Jean Grey. :)"
Iunno abou that.Thos hands don't look like hands.There is no dimension in her arms..they are just tubes.Her waist is very skinny and no propotionate to the rest of her legs are to skinny as well."
My point was that Jean Grey is one of the oldest of these drawings, and that I've gotten better since I drew her. Though, "Thos hands don't look like hands", I'm not sure you're looking at the same thing as I am. :P ......... The self-portrait is very recent though (**and** proportionate; I **do** look like that, I have photo-proof...). ^^
Post Edited:2008-05-29 14:43:36"

I meant "Those hands don't look like hands" meaning her hands look like flippers or something.

I agree your self-portrait is ok with proportion but the shading is un-realistic.

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#29 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

Vance Astro says:

"Did you draw from memory or did you look in the mirror?"

From a photo on my cellphone.

#30 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

Vance Astro says:

"Forever Young says:
"Vance Astro says:
" Did you draw from memory or did you look in the mirror? "
From a photo on my cellphone."

.......lol.

No matter...any image of yourself you are looking at should have it's own shading,you just have to match it."

True...but I'm lazy. LoL. xP

#31 Posted by Vance Astro (91230 posts) - - Show Bio

Forever Young says:

"Vance Astro says:
"Forever Young says:
"Vance Astro says:
"Forever Young says:
"Vance Astro says:
" learn som anatomy and proportion."
Right...I'm getting better at that since I drew Jean Grey. :)"
Iunno abou that.Thos hands don't look like hands.There is no dimension in her arms..they are just tubes.Her waist is very skinny and no propotionate to the rest of her legs are to skinny as well."
My point was that Jean Grey is one of the oldest of these drawings, and that I've gotten better since I drew her. Though, "Thos hands don't look like hands", I'm not sure you're looking at the same thing as I am. :P ......... The self-portrait is very recent though (**and** proportionate; I **do** look like that, I have photo-proof...). ^^
Post Edited:2008-05-29 14:43:36"
I meant "Those hands don't look like hands" meaning her hands look like flippers or something. I agree your self-portrait is ok with proportion but the shading is un-realistic."
Heh, in the photo I based the self-portrait on, there **was** shades below the nose and the mouth, but when I drew, it looked like a beard xDD therefore I erased it. :P"

Did you draw from memory or did you look in the mirror?

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#32 Posted by Vance Astro (91230 posts) - - Show Bio

Forever Young says:

"Vance Astro says:
" Did you draw from memory or did you look in the mirror? "
From a photo on my cellphone."

.......lol.

No matter...any image of yourself you are looking at should have it's own shading,you just have to match it.

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#33 Posted by Constantine (16046 posts) - - Show Bio

Vance Astro says:

"Constantine says:
"http://www.comicvine.com/message/designs/112968/&c=27&27 come check out my sh!t, literally"

Weak."

weak?

#34 Posted by Vance Astro (91230 posts) - - Show Bio

Constantine says:

"Vance Astro says:
"Constantine says:
"http://www.comicvine.com/message/designs/112968/&c=27&27 come check out my sh!t, literally"
Weak."
weak?"

Your confused about what weak means?

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#35 Posted by jayran (60 posts) - - Show Bio

Try getting some books on how to darw comics. it will help alot.

#36 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio
jayran said:
"Try getting some books on how to darw comics. it will help alot. "
Meh...I'm getting better anyway lol :p And, I don't really draw for anyone else than me, and I like my own art, despite the flaws :p I am getting better though, I'll scan some new drawings when I have the time...
#37 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio
Twilight Man, my character. ^^


#38 Posted by Blankspot (216 posts) - - Show Bio

Twilight get a little mirror and play around with shapes.  Keeping picking at it if you are like me you will never be truly satisfied with any finished piece.  Also something that helped me a lot pick up some fashion magazines or maxim and work from those pictures get some high quality paper that you like and find a pencil hardness that works for you.  I use a 5h for my rough work followed by a series of other pencils.  For colors I am really partial to prisma colors.  Ultimately you need to find what suits you best try and also break down a face into its component parts and work on reproducing those same with body parts.  Practice makes perfect and dont be afraid to pick apart your own work I do it all the time.  A great book to pick up is drawing the head and figure by Jack Hamm.

#39 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

I'm sorry, but it's hard to deceipher some of your advice (English is not my native language) :p But yeah, some of these things I can do ^^ As for buying magazines...nah, I feel like that's, y'know, a bit over-the-top, drawing is just a little hobby, I don't want to spend too much money on it :p

#40 Posted by Blankspot (216 posts) - - Show Bio

Doesnt have to be magazines, I just like magazines cause I can turn them as I need to you can also do this with pics you find on the net.

#41 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

Okay, thanks ^^

#42 Posted by T.J. Magnum (27685 posts) - - Show Bio

that looks cool TM

thumbs up

#43 Edited by Vance Astro (91230 posts) - - Show Bio
Vance Astro said:

Weak.

"

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#44 Posted by _Obsidian_ (5028 posts) - - Show Bio

I thought that I should bump this up, since there is a drawing I have not yet posted here... :P

Twilight Man and Zoria, revised look.