I had a 15 minute time limit to draw Cyclops

A Cyclops I threw up in 15 minutes. I tried the effect of the light blinding you by thinning my lines around the optic blast. It came out pretty good in some areas, his face, and not so good in others like his arm.I messed up his arm and made his waist too thin, is there anything else I can improve on?

Sweetness. Maybe just add a little more detail to his mask? but other than that I likes.

you drew that in 15 minutes thats pretty good.. really good in my opinion. =) Not perfect but for a 15 minute drawing really good.

Not bad not bad...for 15 mins...

Coolness! Sketching drill with good result!

Maybe another 15 min this could have been a lil better. Not bad btw.

It's good.

He looks like he's taking a dump and his crotch/leg area seems anatomically off to me, but it's pretty good. Bloody brilliant even for 15 minutes.