D&D inspired Comic

I loved D&D 2nd Ed so much that I'm writing an obscure comic about it.

@ordinary: Very colorful art and I like the perspectives used as well. Professional looking. Good luck with your efforts!

Looks nice. I'd recommend a few changes on the lettering/bubbles. I don't think they should touch unless it's the same person talking. Also, the callouts (the little arrow things from bubbles) might need a bit of work.
 
Here's a great page that will show you how to do everything from an actual comic-book letter:
http://www.blambot.com/grammar.shtml
 
He even has a few free fonts for comic-books (see terms & conditions for use there), that you can check out.

Looks nice. I'd recommend a few changes on the lettering/bubbles. I don't think they should touch unless it's the same person talking. Also, the callouts (the little arrow things from bubbles) might need a bit of work.
 
Here's a great page that will show you how to do everything from an actual comic-book letter:
http://www.blambot.com/grammar.shtml  He even has a few free fonts for comic-books (see terms & conditions for use there), that you can check out.

@ordinary: I love the touches of humor you are adding here. Nice job, good writing, entertaining, hope to see more.

@ordinary: wow dude, that looks AWESOME! and I love the lettering job you did as well, very sweet production :)

You gotta throw an example of this into the 'panels' category of the monthly showcase, peeps should be catching this.