CRANK THOSE PANELS #8 Captain America/Bullseye

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#1  Edited By DavidR

You can either follow the layouts and story I provided or make up 1 or 2 pages of your own original art and storyline. Only main rule is to use the characters I chose. Have fun!!! (8 D  
 
 The focus is for us to get practice at telling a story by competing against each other and working against a deadline. What I wanted to add was, that if there are artists that like the character(s) chosen they are welcome to put their own drawings into the mix to highlight their art
 
The only thing is that, unless it's a full page layout of a story, panel to panel it will not be part of the voting process but will add diversity and character to the topic. I know most of you do not have time to deal with cranking out a full page of layouts and this will give an opportunity to everyone that has something to show and share.  
 
 
Contest will end on or around the1st of September
 
 

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#2  Edited By Raven0207
@DavidR: I actually own this comic ! Great Choice ! I'm all in !
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#3  Edited By DavidR

 
 @Raven0207 said:

@DavidR: I actually own this comic ! Great Choice ! I'm all in !


 Great, may the wheels of creativity and practice start movin'! 
 
As usual let me know if you need more time with your schedule, I know, I'm the one that almost held it up last time but I slid under the wire, Limbo dancin' anyone?
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#4  Edited By Decept-O

@DavidR: Hope you get good responses for this one, great character choices, should be full of action.

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#5  Edited By Raven0207
@DavidR: schedule shouldn't be a problem I am working up a layout for it now so hopefully I'll have it completed soon so I won't get buzzer bit
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#6  Edited By DavidR
@Decept-O
 
Hope you take the time to join! Would really like to see your take on this. : D
 
@Raven0207
 
As usual, can't wait to see what you come up with.
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#7  Edited By Decept-O

@DavidR: Thanks. I may try this.

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#8  Edited By Blizaga101

I dont understand the rules for these kind of contests, ive seen a few but dont know what id have to do? I might enter if i knew
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#9  Edited By DavidR
@Blizaga101 said:
I dont understand the rules for these kind of contests, ive seen a few but dont know what id have to do? I might enter if i knew
You have two choices in how to enter. You can come up with your own story and art and make it 1-2 pages or follow the story and panels from the one I provided as an example, just your version of it. 
 
The main thing I am asking you to do, is to use the same characters I chose, Capt'n America and Bullseye. 
 
Hope that helps and looking forward to your entry.
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#10  Edited By The Lobster
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I'm a busy bee, getting ready to go to college is taking up a lot of my time. So this'll be the best I can hand in at the moment. I hope you guys like it.
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#11  Edited By keith71_98
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Very nice bro.
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#12  Edited By Raven0207
@The Lobster : Might be a quick entry but I have to say your storytelling is great ! Each panel is action packed ! Great Job !
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#13  Edited By The Lobster
@keith71_98: Thank you, I wish I could do more with it. But Like I said. I'm a busy bee and when I'm not working on going to college I'm writing my book or working on other artwork. 
 
@Raven0207: Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I can't wait to see your submission. If it's anything like your Two Face / Joker artwork, it should be really cool.
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#14  Edited By Raven0207
@The Lobster : I'm still trying to work up a story to go with. I'm not wanting to go with the given page this time. I'm just trying for a different angle of a Cap/Bullseye Battle
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#15  Edited By The Lobster
@Raven0207: Well I can't wait to see it. Good luck
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#16  Edited By payno

I was going to colour this but I decided it looked better in black & white. I was also going to add text to it but thought that the pictures told the story well enough. What does everyone think?
 

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#17  Edited By DavidR
@The Lobster :
 Even though it was a rush job on your part with your schedule, it clearly shows what you where trying to convey, great job making the effort to post it so quick. As usual I am grateful you took the time to join, thanks!
 
 
 
 @payno
 
Thanks Payno, cool way of expressing the flow of the panels. Really like what you came up with. Great way of balancing the blacks and whites and clearly getting the point across! No words needed or colors!
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#18  Edited By Decept-O

@payno: I like that animated style you have going here, and the black and white and use of shadows is well done.

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#19  Edited By payno
@DavidR
@Decept-O:  
 
Thanks for the encouraging words guys. 
 
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#20  Edited By Raven0207
@payno
I love it ! Simple and right to the point ! I agree colors and text were not needed , it's a easy read from panel to panel !
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#21  Edited By KEROGA

square 1: captain america is running square 2 : captain america is blinded by the light square 3: zoomed in on bulleyes face square 4: bullseye throws both the flash light and dagger
square 1: captain america is running square 2 : captain america is blinded by the light square 3: zoomed in on bulleyes face square 4: bullseye throws both the flash light and dagger
captain america blocks flash light but not the dagger
captain america blocks flash light but not the dagger
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#22  Edited By DavidR
@KEROGA
 
 
Great effort, glad you joined! Everything looks good and I can see nice clean lines and pushing yourself to get the story understood. Remember, the boxes are refereed to as "panels' in case you show your stuff to the pro's. Thanks much for your addition, nice work and hope to see more!
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#23  Edited By Sky_Jokiel
@payno:  I totally love this panel!!!
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#24  Edited By IcePrince_X

I will still ink this.
The scanner is not picking up some details in my pencils but at least you guys can see the flow of my panels.
Comments will be much appreciated.
 

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I try to play as much as possible with the space... making the panels and even the characters floating within each other and hopefully layered in such a manner that it also narrates the flow of the action.
I know its very much similar to the source comic but I added more angles and one panel showing only the face of Captain America showing both surprise and fear because he got hit. (Did he really got hit by the dagger people? I don't have the comic book so I am clueless)
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#25  Edited By Sky_Jokiel
@IcePrince_X: Wow you jammed so much in that one panel and made it work very nicely... Awesome job!!
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#26  Edited By Raven0207
@IcePrince_X: Really awesome page ! Full of action and angles ! I'm not sure if he got hit. This was the last page of the comic and I don't have the next issue !
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#27  Edited By IcePrince_X

@Sky_Jokiel 
 Thanks! I am excited as well. Its been a long while since, I did a comic book panel and I am drawn to panels done this way. 
 
@Raven0207 
Thanks for the heads up... I guess, that gives me an artistic license to play my own conclusion...so I guess a shocked Capt America is just fitting to end a comic... the reader will feel "Ah, he got hit!" Only to find on the next comic "not!". LoL 
Also, thanks for appreciating the angles.. I look forward in enhancing it with my inks. 

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#28  Edited By DavidR
@IcePrince_X
 
Great stuff! Glad you had time to join. Definitely a nice surprise, thanks!
 
 Really liked the expression in the last panel!!!
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#29  Edited By IcePrince_X

Thanks DavidR
 
Finally got this guy finished. I opted to go for inks and pencils on this one. Kinda got inspired by the concept of The Crow.
 

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#30  Edited By Sky_Jokiel
@IcePrince_X: Wonderful!!!
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#31  Edited By IcePrince_X

Thanks Sky_Jokiel!

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#32  Edited By DavidR

Just posting the sketches that are part of my page, all work in progress but a sneak peak at where I am at. (8 P
 

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#33  Edited By Sky_Jokiel
@DavidR: This is some amazing stuff!!
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#34  Edited By DavidR
@Sky_Jokiel
 
Thanks Man, I appreciate that! Added another partial panel for you.
 
I have been going through a bit of a creative dry spell and decided to push through it, I was a little worried nothing would look any good. Since the companies wont give me a benefit of a break in case I was able to work for them, I know excuses do not work at that level so I have to rely on what I have learned so far. Fortunately it seems to be coming along. : )
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#35  Edited By IcePrince_X

David yours are that of a professional panelist! Wow! can't wait to see it done.

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#36  Edited By Sky_Jokiel
@DavidR: Well I would definitively call that pushing through a dry spell... that's some truly amazing work with wonderful detail... can't wait to see the final product!!!
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#37  Edited By DavidR
@IcePrince_X
 
Thanks Bud, coming from you and if I remember correctly you are also an art teacher, I greatly appreciate the kind words. 
 
@Sky_Jokiel
Hope to have it up tomorrow evening and you like the final piece. (8 P
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#38  Edited By Raven0207
@DavidR: Holy Crap That is awesome !
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#39  Edited By DavidR
@Raven0207 said:

@DavidR: Holy Crap That is awesome !

                                        
 
Hey there Stranger, we  meet again! Buahahaha, are you ready for another Showdown at the Ok Viners Corral?! 
 
Just Kidding, hoping you will jump in there with your post, are you almost done or do you need more time?
 
Thanks, glad you like it so far!
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#40  Edited By Raven0207
@DavidR: Hmmmmm I'm trying to finish it. I posted a blog last night about why I have been missing (busted up my drawing wrist) I had a 2 page idea planned but not sure if I will even be able to finish it. I hate that too ! But at least we have some major kick butt pieces this time around. 
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#41  Edited By DavidR
@Raven0207
 
Man, I am sorry to hear that. Fully understand how that can set you back. I too will be out for a while after this one. I just got the Ok for Surgery to fix a herniated abdomen from my Surgery last year, it will be in less than two weeks and I will be out for about 2 months recovering. Not always in the mood to draw until I get my strength back. Hopefully I will still get sketches done somewhere in there since my Tablet will be in bed with me. ; P
 
I was looking forward to a rematch...Hehehe!
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#42  Edited By Raven0207
@DavidR: "IF" I don't get this in I'm sure we can work something out for a rematch while we are both recovering. I always have a blast doing stuff like that. Hope the surgery goes well and we see you back here soon.
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#43  Edited By DavidR

Almost done, one panel left but will have to wait until tonight for me to finish it. Have a date with my bed and then some appts. Should be done and posted later tonight.
 
Here's another sneak peak since resizing will blur a lot of my detail I am posting bits and pieces in preview form full size. : P
 Hope you guys like....

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#44  Edited By DavidR

Yaaay! I finished my Homework, can I go out and play??!
 
It's a pain drawing when u don't feel like it, I guess that's why I was sketchier with this page than any other I have done. Focused mainly on improving my composition. I am happy with the overall results. Hope you guys can enjoy it, didn't feel word balloons where necessary but may add them if I ink the page.

Voting will start tonight.   (8 D 
 
 
If you want to see a larger version in my profile images, click here....
 
http://www.comicvine.com/myvine/davidr/all-images/108-344556/bullcap_finished/105-1990240/
 

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#45  Edited By IcePrince_X

Beautiful work DavidR! 
Definite win :-)

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#46  Edited By DavidR
@IcePrince_X said:

Beautiful work DavidR! Definite win :-)

Really means a lot, thanks! 
 
I am having more  fun looking at it than when I was drawing it. I have always liked art that I could feel part of being there and that is my focus as I continue to learn and hopefully to pass it on to the readers. 
 
   Have some things I will change when I do the last version but at least it's ready for voting. Slow poke me! : )
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#48  Edited By DavidR
@M.S. Feather
     Thanks for the Compliment!
   Actually it really felt too much like work this time around but I can sit back and enjoy it more now that it's done. Looking at the positives and learning from stuff I need to improve on. That third panel actually was the last one I did, it's my favorite too for the same reasons you liked it. He is actually sitting down, not sure if his cigarette is noticeable, dropping from his mouth. He is a homeless man enjoying a smoke with his Colt45 as a chaser. At one time he was a rich investment banker who fell on hard times. On the 5th panel Cap's shield has the origin of where it was made. 
 
All things are made in China nowadays, hehehe, aren't they?
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#49  Edited By Sky_Jokiel
@DavidR: What a masterpiece... Your muscle tone and angles are terrific!
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#50  Edited By DavidR
@Sky_Jokiel
 
Thanks man! I am trying to improve, what I lack in experience I try to make up with a little creativity and enthusiasm. (8 P