#1 Posted by bennyq (448 posts) - - Show Bio

OK for this one I'd like you talented Viners to recreate the infamous scene in The Killing Joke where Joker bursts into the Gordon's home and shots Barbara in the spine.

Could you pin this please?

Deadline: 28/2

#2 Posted by ARMIV2 (9098 posts) - - Show Bio

...I think I'd only be able to sketch this out...

#3 Posted by Kal'smahboi (3733 posts) - - Show Bio

Dude. Spoilers.

#4 Posted by RamsIllustrations (1355 posts) - - Show Bio

@bennyq: Good choice! Difficult challenge at that...

#5 Posted by IcePrince_X (5053 posts) - - Show Bio

My take on this... but i have to say the original art and paneling of the comic arc is compared to none. Just the perfect blend of story and art. so my version is just a humble representation of that masterpiece. I also will narrate how the paneling goes.

Panel I. Barbara's half face shows disbelief; Joker's reflection is sen on her glasses. On her back, Commissioner Gordon is also seen but seems preoccupied

Barbara Gordon: Joker?!

Joker: (Off panel) My dear, it usually starts with knock knock..

Panel II. Joker is seen by the door. Barbara's silhouette body reacting surprised.

Joker: But then again you are always a kill joy.

Panel III. Joker smiles maliciously.

Panel IV. Barbara's eyes is seen up close and sweat starts to form on her face. She knows what terrible thing will just happen.

Panel V. The gun fires.

Narration: In her eyes, Barbara can only see flashes of her life. With all her adventures as Batgirl, how can it just end like this? She asked herself...

Panel VI. The bullet hits her back.

Panel VII. Commissioner Gordon shocked face

Commissioner Gordon: Barbara!

Panel VII. Barbara is face down with her body lying in her pool of blood, glasses broken and she looks like she is about to lose consciousness; Joker is at the back with a grin still holding the gun.

Barbara: (thinking) please God, don't let it end like this...

#6 Edited by bennyq (448 posts) - - Show Bio

@IcePrince_X: dude!! That's amazing!! Your panel layout is really good and her visions of her past are really affective and original. Well done!

#7 Posted by KEROGA (1219 posts) - - Show Bio
#8 Posted by KEROGA (1219 posts) - - Show Bio

PANEL1:Joker is holding Gordon hostage

PANEL2:Joker holds and aims his gun

PANEL3:A Batfigure is running on rooftops(red captions indicate a voice on a intercom)

PANEL4:Gun barrel faces Gordon

PANEL5:Batgirl crashes to the rescue

PANEL6:Joker takes a batarang to the shoulder

PANEL7:Joker fires

PANEL8: Batgirl gets shot

PANEL9: Gordon is shocked

#9 Posted by IcePrince_X (5053 posts) - - Show Bio

@bennyq said:

@IcePrince_X: dude!! That's amazing!! Your panel layout is really good and her visions of her past are really affective and original. Well done!

Thanks! my second attempt on paneling... really enjoyed it. Its been a long long while and i am really rusty at it.

#10 Posted by bennyq (448 posts) - - Show Bio

@KEROGA: great job man! I love the fear in Gordon's eyes

#11 Posted by Donovan Montgomery (5624 posts) - - Show Bio

@KEROGA: Nice take, I like how you put her "on the job"

@IcePrince_X: wow, that is good stuff.