Conduit draft and Jack/Black Ice

What I was thinking was one week, I post some older work, and another, I show the newer entries. Is this a good idea?

With nothing more, here ya go:

Draft of Conduit:

As you can see, not the best draft, which is why it is a draft.

His gun can take and use powers. He abused it, so if he gets a lot of power, his face does that, except with elements coming out of it.

The thing he's holding is a case with double swords. Might need to zoom to see that.

Jack and his friend:

I like this one better.

I haven't come up with a name for the other guy. I just know that it's been around for a long time and can't speak. It currently haunts Jack.

@rocketraccoonthingy@quinnofthestoneage@kfhrfdu_89_76k@masterkungfu Any advice or thoughts?

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Nice work :).

@flumox56: Thanks! You want to get notified of these?

@gamejutsu: Please :).

Great, I love the second one :)

@gamejutsu:

The basic problems of stick figures, is their tendency to become diccifult to understand, visually. If you want to make it clear what the character looks like, pay more attention to how it looks like. If you wanna keep the character interesting, little imperfections are perfect for that.

You mean, make it clearer where the arms are, in a few cases of these.

What imperfections do you mean?

Anyway, I can't go Stickpage on these guys. Those sticks are pretty lame, and are like that to keep em fluid. The way these guys get drawn usually end up making a few things unclear.

@gamejutsu:

I meant the unclearness as imperfection. Or more like a characteristic. It`s a good element to have.

@gamejutsu: looks good. I should probably post some old art

@masterkungfu: Go for it.