@Blackmoonrose13: Very good job over all. I see what Vance Astro is talking about, a quick fix is to narrowing the neck a bit. I always try to remember that children's heads look a little big for there necks unlike adults. What are you looking for as far as coloring advise?
@Blackmoonrose13: Just saw that you just did the color.
You have a good technique over all, The only suggestion I have for you is to remember were you light source is coming from when coloring. I noticed the line work had the shadows drawn as if the light was coming from upper left and slightly behind the subject. So when adding the shadow definition in back ground as well as the subject keep this in mind.
I did a quick draw over so you can see what I am talking about.