Hey everyone. I just wanted to show you guys my Deadpool fan film.
I hope you enjoy it but feel free to rip apart if you so desire.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FujVOhVVzUM

Thanks

It sucks

"It sucks"

"Vance Astro said:

"It sucks"

totally"

Thanks.

Guys you are just Mean to the bone.

Well Ill take it was an excersice video, maybe you should compose a short and simple story with action etc...
I am studying just started studying cinematography and belive me that If I had a deadpool costume I would do a move without a second tough.

Keep it up men!

Yea it was rushed. Bug time. I'm working ona sequel script. I think this one will be better.

Wish you best of luck!
Put some explotions if you can xD explotions are always fun!

"Guys you are just Mean to the bone.

Well Ill take it was an excersice video, maybe you should compose a short and simple story with action etc...
I am studying just started studying cinematography and belive me that If I had a deadpool costume I would do a move without a second tough.

Keep it up men!"

"Suigetsu said:

"Guys you are just Mean to the bone.

Well Ill take it was an excersice video, maybe you should compose a short and simple story with action etc...
I am studying just started studying cinematography and belive me that If I had a deadpool costume I would do a move without a second tough.

Keep it up men!"

Not mean..brutally honest."

I pretty much agree with you there inferior, the only waay to improve its by knowing the truth, I got a little butterd there cause I feel bad for te harsh welcome to the vine.

I got to 43 seconds then exited

Let me embed that for you.

lol

Funny.

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"Ryan ****ing Reynolds.

Just watched it.  Pretty funny.  I look forward to the next one."

"Let me embed that for you.

  

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Good review.

LMFAO @ Skinny Cage....

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Good review.

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Yeah! good tips aswell.
Tough with the alucinations you mean the P.O.V.? xD

"Yeah! good tips aswell.
Tough with the alucinations you mean the P.O.V.? xD"

Thanks so much for the constructive criticism guys. That's what I wanted. I love Deadpool and want to do a good job and do him justice. And this is what I needed to hear. Not just some jerks saying "it sucks". It very well may suck. I don't think so. I know it's not as good as it could be but unless people don't give something specific to work on it can't get better.

"Thanks so much for the constructive criticism guys. That's what I wanted. I love Deadpool and want to do a good job and do him justice. And this is what I needed to hear. Not just some jerks saying "it sucks". It very well may suck. I don't think so. I know it's not as good as it could be but unless people don't give something specific to work on it can't get better."

 we all have a film that we dont want anyone to see, and that includes me :p.....

"Thanks so much for the constructive criticism guys. That's what I wanted. I love Deadpool and want to do a good job and do him justice. And this is what I needed to hear. Not just some jerks saying "it sucks". It very well may suck. I don't think so. I know it's not as good as it could be but unless people don't give something specific to work on it can't get better."

Well that's the only time we know of it. I think it's interesting but needs to be worked out better. I might try to do something with it in the next film.

I realy cant come up with any storyline ideas atm because I dont feel inspiration but when it comes to me Ill tell you some stuff.
BTW any chances of someone playin Domino?

Another Deadpool fan film was made and that one featured Domino. Actually my plan was to have Deadpool run into Siren and the rest of X-Factor. I don't know a whole lot abotu X-factor though. I'm gonna start picking it up.

well deadpool its currently working on agency x, or at least he was.
X-factor its some kind of agency aswell so maybe they get crossed during a job.

Siryn its deadpool's love however Madrox has turned her into her bitch(thx to the writter) so you could have him trying to impress siryn and trying to get any chance he can shadow madrox and beat the hell out of him (he doesnt like him at all)

The villian could be arcade, he seems to be a frequent villian with x-factor and deadpool... well this explains alot:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U3ePG4Z3dgY

Deadpool.... Ice Cream Parlor

There's your film

Agency X is a mercenary strike force. X-factor is more of a detective agency but I may be able to work something in. I don't want Agnet X in the movie because I don't think I could convince someone else to shave their head (I will be because in this episode we'll see Deadpool without is mask on when he's at home) and I don't want to use a bald cap because those always look weird.

The wallet part was pure gold.
Other than that, it was a nice try.

"Agency X is a mercenary strike force. X-factor is more of a detective agency but I may be able to work something in. I don't want Agnet X in the movie because I don't think I could convince someone else to shave their head (I will be because in this episode we'll see Deadpool without is mask on when he's at home) and I don't want to use a bald cap because those always look weird."

"Abnormally Warm Guy said:

"Agency X is a mercenary strike force. X-factor is more of a detective agency but I may be able to work something in. I don't want Agnet X in the movie because I don't think I could convince someone else to shave their head (I will be because in this episode we'll see Deadpool without is mask on when he's at home) and I don't want to use a bald cap because those always look weird."

No need to put agency x in there, just have deadpool reciving a call from agent x and giving him the assignment because Deadpool used to have a contract with him to gain some founds.
BTW if you have a difficult time to get someone with shaved head then dont worry cause there is no need to show deadpool's true face, you could leave that to the imagination of the spectator y know."

I want the audience to see Deadpool's face.
I can do the make up and it would really set me apart from the rest.
I also want to do a throwback to Deadpool and Cable #1 where someone asks for Deadpool and instead of answering as himself he leaves and puts his mask on first then answers.

inferiorego said:

"Deadpool.... Ice Cream Parlor

There's your film"

BEST IDEA EVER!

keep the story short & simple and let the dialogue "do the talking"

yeh.. keep it simple.
Also a movie that tells itself without dialogue its always a good one (wall-e for example)
tough its a 50/50, if you get the max in both then its PWNSR!

I've decide to have Deadpool fight some Morlacks and then some purifiers. It should be pretty simple costuming and they are both villains of X-Factor so that works for me. Thanks to everyone for putting in your great input. I hope you guys also pass on my first episode to any Deadpool fans you know.
Thanks

Alright sounds great.  Post us when you are done!

"Alright sounds great.  Post us when you are done!"

"Mr. Wilson said:

"Alright sounds great.  Post us when you are done!"

It won't be done til winter but you know I will."

yeah! keep us tooned!

What are your plot plans?

LMFAO!  This was a sucess!

"What are your plot plans?"

wich members of x-factor are gonna be showing up?
or is thats a surprise?

"Mr. Wilson said:

"What are your plot plans?"

Script is done now. I'm not going to give it all away. But Agency X (thanks for the idea) hires Deadpool to assist X-Factor in transporting something. There are a few fights a few wacky scenes and maybe even a super awesome plot twist at the end."

Plot twists, i like plot twists =)
Good to hear you are making another movie