I know I'm late to the party..
..but wow, this was one of the worst books I've ever read, ever. I won't even address the absolute crap plot. David Hine seems incapable of even amateur-level dialogue!
The scene where Kitty is talking to Beast and he tries to inject pointless cliched wit:
Kitty: "At least I don't have fleas.."
Beast: "Hey, that was just one time."
I was about to kill myself! Or when Micromax is talking to Bishop and, in attempting to make a metaphor about his loyalty, randomly remarks "I'm a good little poodle." Of all things - a POODLE??
Man this book is just littered with bad writing.
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