Cable Poem

Posted by tomzoid13 (28 posts) - - Show Bio

Born into the Future, but brought back to the past 
Cause without the aid of Nathan, the present could never last 
The Future is in trouble, and Apocalypse is law 
But in the end his techno virus was his fatal flaw 
Cause he traveled throughout time, to make sure Hope could live 
 And in the end, to save the world, his life he had to give

#1 Posted by InnerVenom123 (29499 posts) - - Show Bio

Don't ever stop making these. That was great. 

#2 Posted by MrUnknown (1700 posts) - - Show Bio
@tomzoid13: Woah, it's great!!
#3 Posted by Mercy_ (92629 posts) - - Show Bio

This is awesome :D

But I'd just like to point out that it was the TO virus that made it possible for him to transverse the portal. So although it was his fatal flaw, it's also what allowed him to survive long enough to do that and to save everybody else involved.

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#4 Posted by tomzoid13 (28 posts) - - Show Bio

Thanks guys. BTW Follow me. I'm gonna be making more poems like this in the future so yeah

#5 Posted by mavfan626 (4121 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice poem dude

#6 Posted by venomoushatred1001 (12334 posts) - - Show Bio

Nice Job :D

#7 Posted by cyberninja (10413 posts) - - Show Bio

Don't quit your day job. 

#8 Posted by tomzoid13 (28 posts) - - Show Bio

Good thing I don't have a day job. Boom

#9 Posted by cyberninja (10413 posts) - - Show Bio
@tomzoid13 said:
Good thing I don't have a day job. Boom
HA! Niiiiiiiiiiiiice.
#10 Posted by Renchamp (2289 posts) - - Show Bio

Only criticism: Use Borne instead of Born. "Born" makes it sound like he was actually birthed in the future when he wasn't. "Borne" means he was carried there and didn't quite belong. Other than that, nice job. Cable's one of my favorites.

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